The Brides of Drakken

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#1 grunsgul

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Posted 27 September 2006 - 04:08 AM

I have just finished a KP comic. The trouble is it's non-erotic. It's a melancholic and violent tale about an adult KP, so it's a bit of an oddity.

If anybody has any suggestions as to where I might post it, I would be grateful. Although the art isn't great and the story won't appeal to many, it seems a pity not to share it.

Anyway, here's Drakken with a reason to look pleased for a change.

You can have it with,

[url="http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=brides1aaw5.jpg"][img]http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/5433/brides1aaw5.th.jpg[/img][/url]

or without,

[url="http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=brides2atz7.jpg"][img]http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/984/brides2atz7.th.jpg[/img][/url]

it's your choice.

#2 Mephistoles

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Posted 27 September 2006 - 04:29 AM

Hey! Thats not bad art at all! It may not be where you want it yet, but you definatly capture the characters likeness and it is a pretty good pic.

As for the rest of the comic post it here. There are quite a few KP fans and at least some of them will appreaciate even a non adult oriented story.

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Posted 27 September 2006 - 06:30 AM

I'd like to see it. :)

#4 Blucanary

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Posted 27 September 2006 - 01:17 PM

not bad... linework is a bit jagged... but the rest is quite good.

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Posted 27 September 2006 - 04:25 PM

Post it, Grun, lots of folks here would love to read it, and if the art in the comic is half as good as these pics then it will be WELL recieved, non-erotic or not. ;D

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Posted 28 September 2006 - 12:20 AM

DAAMMMMNNNNN :o

#7 hotnhorny

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Posted 29 September 2006 - 05:50 AM

the erotic one is better you should definetly post it :) :)

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Posted 29 September 2006 - 02:06 PM

I like the background.

#9 grunsgul

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Posted 29 September 2006 - 08:51 PM

Well, I posted the comic. I hope you realise that I had to convert my television-watching time to television-listening time for a couple of months to complete it. It's funny that I can find several websites featuring local, unsigned (and shit) bands, but I can't find a good KP site for adults.

The "Brides of Drakken" lines are mostly vector (about 90% done on a second layer). Poor line flow is due to bad choice of tangent points. (Liked your comic contest entry, Blucanary: good smut).

Good background, Gazbo? Is that damning with feint praise? No seriously, I know I'm not that good a tooner. The background was a few mouse clicks and quick sweeps, I didn't even vary the hue much (as I would if it had been an oil painting).

I must admit that I admire the abstraction skills of tooners; but to be honest, I don't think I'll ever achieve that sort of artistic talent. I haven't got the visual imagination which allows you to transcend representational art.

Let's see more comix!! Comix rule!! Yay (as they say in America).

-Slough Grunsgul.