Dart Board (New sketch (10/23)- P.11)
#16
Posted 27 February 2006 - 11:39 PM
Dart
#17
Posted 28 February 2006 - 02:09 PM
#18
Posted 28 February 2006 - 04:31 PM
I really like the drawing of Blue and her mystery lover, jblue04cs7hh. Good perspective and staging and nice efx of movement with the phone and coffee cup the coloring works very well with the image...cool!
that's a very nice pencil drawing of enigma wing, ewbd068mg. it has that subtle smile tot he face (works well in the eyes)
I like the choice you made in the valentine card the first sketch was decent but there was no personality to the girls the second one I'd like to be right between them.
The Cs drawing painting is fun. the drawing doesn't seem as strong as the others, maybe it's the standings girls right arm and the foreshorten leg. the left leg and foot of the blonde seem a little off..this is nit picky, because the overall drawing 'works' I like the painting technique on the nipples and the blonde snatch (I love writing that...nice tits, nice snatch!)
you are my sunshine is ok, but something about the head to the body perspective is off and her mouth has too much of a "dah" look.
I like the most recent sketch, 25100a0rt...that should've been me! nice touch on the guys toes.
you're ugly! no wonder you draw, you're trying to get chicks too? you ain't going to pick them up on your looks....(ijfwu)
i'm looking forward to more.
jack
ijfwu = i'm just fuckin with you ;)
#19
Posted 28 February 2006 - 08:05 PM
Jack- Thanks for the evaluation. I agree with most of your points. I tend to be a bit over enthusiastic and don't take the time to refine my sketches as I should. A refresher course in anatomy wouldn't do me any harm either. I'm working on that.
The CS painting really needs a background, along with the changes you suggest. Since it was a learning experiment, I think I'll leave it and try ro correct those mistakes in future drawings.
With the "Sunshine" pic, I was going for "Ah" from the warmth of the sun (EW is snowbound and ususally cold right now :'()...I didn't mean to push it to "dah." ;D
Dart
#21
Posted 01 March 2006 - 05:06 AM
Dart
#22
Posted 09 March 2006 - 04:46 AM
*...wondering if there is a concession stand in this thread, I'm thirsty*
#23
Posted 09 March 2006 - 07:43 PM
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Dart
Well Dart, ya know, once I reminded Anthony about the pleasures of being with a woman, the guy just won't go away. But no worries, I am enjoying myself immensely.
Blue
#24
Posted 10 March 2006 - 03:20 AM
I have a couple works in progress to add...
Revisions first:
[http://img418.imageshack.us/img418/1686/25100h3ur.th.png
This is a sketch for the contest, but I don't know if I can finish in time:
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6330/007sb7wc.th.png
The heads on this are temporary until I can finalize a cast.
I'll welcome anyone's suggestions for male cartoon figures for the line, especially if you have a pic or link for reference.
Thanks for taking a look.
Dart
#25
Posted 10 March 2006 - 04:26 AM
As for your cartoon sketch, for male toons? hmmm How about Pepi le Piu or however you spell it... hes always horny... anyother superheros would do seeing as most of them are in cartoons now anyways. Theres always the tiny toons like buster bunny and Max, Or how about some Dragonball characters, even Mario or Luigi :D
#26
Posted 10 March 2006 - 04:33 AM
Dart
#27
Posted 10 March 2006 - 06:38 AM
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Dart
Yeah, sigh, I know, the story of my life. heheh.
I really really really like your idea for the contest. Lets see, you could put all the disney princes in there. Maybe Homer Simpson, ummm the American Dad guy...ya know all those, that I can never remember the names of. LOL. I really can't wait to see this one when it is completely finished.
Blueeeeee :-*
#28
Posted 10 March 2006 - 06:59 AM
Awesome pics:) If you would have some free time you can add some color to them:P
#29
Posted 10 March 2006 - 07:08 AM
#30
Posted 11 March 2006 - 03:16 AM
SpongeBhoG- Thanks. That's the plan.
Slim- Thanks. Digital lines come out much better than the ones with the pens I was using.
Dart

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