[kalcium]

I'm leaving this in pencil form for now.  I am "enhancing" the text to make it easier to read.  If you want to add color, go for it.  I may get to it after I finish working on two other comics.  So, with that said - let the story begin.

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More to come, stay tuned... ;)

[MF]

I'm loving the story so far, kal, but next time use thicker lines so we can see it.

[Gazbo]

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I'm loving the story so far, kal, but next time use thicker lines so we can see it.

Yeah, he/she's right. It's looking good though.

[MF]

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I'm loving the story so far, kal, but next time use thicker lines so we can see it.

Yeah, he/she's right. It's looking good though.

'He/She'? I'm a guy, Gaz. Is that some new third gender I wasn't told about?

[jaded_blue]

Wonderful Kal!! Can't wait to see more!!

Blueeee  ;)

[kalcium]

MF: Thanks.  It's all pencil right now.  Only the words are "improved".  I may do some fixing up later, but this is longer than most comics I've done.

Gazbo: Thanks

Blue: You asked for it!  Two more pages, since you asked so nicely.  ;)

[kalcium]

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[Gazbo]

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I'm loving the story so far, kal, but next time use thicker lines so we can see it.

Yeah, he/she's right. It's looking good though.

'He/She'? I'm a guy, Gaz. Is that some new third gender I wasn't told about?

I meant either he or she, seeing as Ididn't know your gender. Then I noticed it lists our gender underneath our display names.  :-[

I'm learnding!  :o

[kalcium]

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[MF]

Nice job, Kal. Now we're getting somewhere... Somewhere I love to go!  :P :P