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JAB! A Story For You!

#1 User is offline   Darth Lord 

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Post icon  Posted 15 October 2008 - 04:12 AM

Jab, How you been? Have you ever thought about making that story I told you about, a while back. The one about the maid, my idea was called "The Hotel Maid" The basic story was the maid would encounter different scenarios

(example= Walks into room to clean but finds a couple having sex in the shower the woman's moaning turns on the maid so she watches them form the doorway, but before they finish she leaves to clean the next room and finds beautiful woman sleeping naked face down in the bed, the maid still horny decides to have some fun with the sleeping woman.)

What do you think Jab?
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Posted 25 October 2010 - 03:59 AM

I like that.
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Posted 26 October 2010 - 04:07 PM

Why stop there?

Room 1 - Spy on couple fucking in the shower
Room 2 - Walks in on sleepy nude lesbian and plays
Room 3 - Walks in to find a guy tied up, left by a hooker, still hard... teases him while cleaning, then empties his wallet, jerks him off, leaves him tied
Hallway - Finds naked guy locked out of room, offers to unlock the room but only if he eats her out before someone comes along and sees
Room 4 - Lays down on empty bed, thinking of past rooms, and starts to masturbate
Room 5 - Finds group of guys sitting around the room drinking, gets mistaken for the stripper they ordered... figures, what the hell...

Oh... I could EASILY come up with a good story for this woman if someone really wanted to push it to fruition...
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Posted 26 October 2010 - 04:57 PM

View PostDoujinMonkey, on 26 October 2010 - 10:07 AM, said:

Why stop there?

Room 1 - Spy on couple fucking in the shower
Room 2 - Walks in on sleepy nude lesbian and plays
Room 3 - Walks in to find a guy tied up, left by a hooker, still hard... teases him while cleaning, then empties his wallet, jerks him off, leaves him tied
Hallway - Finds naked guy locked out of room, offers to unlock the room but only if he eats her out before someone comes along and sees
Room 4 - Lays down on empty bed, thinking of past rooms, and starts to masturbate
Room 5 - Finds group of guys sitting around the room drinking, gets mistaken for the stripper they ordered... figures, what the hell...

Oh... I could EASILY come up with a good story for this woman if someone really wanted to push it to fruition...


I really like these ideas!
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Posted 28 October 2010 - 09:34 PM

I just keep coming up with little ideas for each room this lady has to work...

- Cleaning a married guys room, finds various pairs of panties all over, obviously not his wife's. He's there alone, on a business trip. She masturbates through her own, and leaves them under his pillow as a "gift for your collection". This guy comes into play again later...

- Cornered by a Janitor in a supply room and hit on... calls his bluff and demands he prove his claims of a really good hard fuck. He proves his worth holding her up against the door, thumping sounds and things falling off of shelves heard in the hall way by guests going into their rooms.

- Enters a room with a guy just stepping out of the shower, tells him she'll come back later if he wants, but gets caught checking out his package. He gets a chubby, and says it's okay. She cleans the bathroom first and after a minute calls him in to help. he wonders why a maid needs a guests help, and then opens the door to find her naked sitting on the sink saying "not with cleaning dummy... ".

- Another maid gets extra shifts, and it puts her in need of more sex, so she talks to the night manager about changing to night shifts (more pay). Agrees to weekly payments of sex for him in his office and around the hotel.

- Night shifts... cleaning rooms that are empty already... but she starts deliberately showing off her ass to guests... finally starts offering 'extra towels' and 'soap' to guys... and tells them to make sure to use the 'buddy system' in the shower... she's available for about 30 minutes if they don't already have a buddy :)
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Posted 29 October 2010 - 07:04 AM

we must collaborate sometime...
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Posted 29 October 2010 - 09:57 AM

I love how your mind works, Monkey.

This was a very old post.. but a very interesting idea. I always loved maids.

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 06:45 PM

I'm with RhiRhi on this one! I really like the way your mind works Monkey!!! Like wow, that turns me on...can I be the maid :P
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Posted 30 October 2010 - 05:10 AM

genial... si de historias se trata... yo contaria sobre mis primas....
cuando viaje al interior del pais....
la pse fenomenal
fueron 7 aņos de nostalgia.....
Jab
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Posted 31 October 2010 - 08:08 AM

View PostRosenrot, on 30 October 2010 - 04:45 AM, said:

I'm with RhiRhi on this one! I really like the way your mind works Monkey!!! Like wow, that turns me on...can I be the maid :P


Omg. I wanna be one of the guests then! Or her boss! If her boss can be female.. Meoow.. I just wanna get it on with Rose.. Kay? XD Hehhe.

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Posted 01 November 2010 - 12:26 AM

How about she stumbles into a room where two sexy young girls are making out, and instead of telling someone about their secret rendezvous like they fear, she closes the door and says "You're doing it wrong... here, let me help..."

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Posted 03 November 2010 - 02:37 AM

Jeez Double R, this topic was 2 years old!
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Posted 04 November 2010 - 01:17 PM

For Rhi and Rosenrot, why not be two rival Maids cleaning the same house.... cat fight make out session?
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Posted 04 November 2010 - 10:09 PM

View PostSickpuppy, on 04 November 2010 - 06:17 AM, said:

For Rhi and Rosenrot, why not be two rival Maids cleaning the same house.... cat fight make out session?


Because Rose now owns a bar and Rhi is her only employee :P and that gets them into enough fun... but thats a whole nother story in my head still. With Rose's consent, it will be cumming to life soon though :)
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Posted 11 November 2010 - 12:38 PM

loved to be one of the guest hehe...
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