DrunkenMonkeys
#17
Posted 18 July 2006 - 03:51 PM
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this is a short i did was thinking sumthing simaler but more xxx :o
I am standing in line at the post office waiting to send a package
The woman in line before me smells wonderful
I see the way that her hips move when she steps foreword
So lovely that elegant sway green silk flowing around her legs
A fantasy swallows me and I step forward to wrap my arm about her waist
She leans back into my arms and takes one of my hand into both of hers
Breathing deep of the clean fresh smell of her hair
My contentment evaporates when she places my hand between her breasts
Need fills me ad she knows that I want her
She reads it from the hip pressed into me
I am kissing and nibbling her neck and ear she moans a soft sound just fore me when
The old man behind me pokes me in the rib
Move along now your stopping up the line
The beautiful woman has gone
And I step forward to send off my package
Just a dream
I am standing in line at the post office waiting to send a package
The woman in line before me smells wonderful
I see the way that her hips move when she steps foreword
So lovely that elegant sway green silk flowing around her legs
A fantasy swallows me and I step forward to wrap my arm about her waist
She leans back into my arms and takes one of my hand into both of hers
Breathing deep of the clean fresh smell of her hair
My contentment evaporates when she places my hand between her breasts
Need fills me ad she knows that I want her
She reads it from the hip pressed into me
I am kissing and nibbling her neck and ear she moans a soft sound just fore me when
The old man behind me pokes me in the rib
Move along now your stopping up the line
The beautiful woman has gone
And I step forward to send off my package
Just a dream
jaja sounds cool
will she get scared of the fact that there's a 7 ft. tall ewok on the post office ?
and btw, what kind of porn are u mailing to "Hand" Solo ? ;) ;D
#18 Guest_Tn.Dan HQ_*
Posted 18 July 2006 - 04:29 PM
Deep
Wow, thats deep for a porn comic isnt?, heehe, its cool chewbaca. i havent read a script for a porn comic like that (well i never read any script in all my life LOL), very nice ;D , but i think you need a little bit more to complete the 5 pages u dont? :o , its only a comment :P.
Wow, thats deep for a porn comic isnt?, heehe, its cool chewbaca. i havent read a script for a porn comic like that (well i never read any script in all my life LOL), very nice ;D , but i think you need a little bit more to complete the 5 pages u dont? :o , its only a comment :P.
#24
Posted 25 July 2006 - 06:18 PM
awww guys.... thats so sweet ::) ok i'm back.... sorry.... My fiancee's birthday and some Life stuff in general took priority.... now.... I will have some characters posted tonight .... I Promise
@Chewbacca
then i need you to give me a little more detail for the story.... I can break it down into usable pages but i NEED details
edit... ok its tonight.... sorry just remembered i needed to put some pictures to the ideas... some really quick concept sketches... i like (and hate things about each of these) .... chewy let me know it this is kinda what you where thinking about when you described her to me in your E mail.... and witch sketch slosest resembles what you wanna see.... sorry its so rough but they're just roughing out the basics right now ..... side note to self.... need to do a WHOLE BUNCH of practice drawings of hands ::) meh
http://img289.imageshack.us/img289/9411/conceptslketchesou6.th.jpg
Drunk
@Chewbacca
then i need you to give me a little more detail for the story.... I can break it down into usable pages but i NEED details
edit... ok its tonight.... sorry just remembered i needed to put some pictures to the ideas... some really quick concept sketches... i like (and hate things about each of these) .... chewy let me know it this is kinda what you where thinking about when you described her to me in your E mail.... and witch sketch slosest resembles what you wanna see.... sorry its so rough but they're just roughing out the basics right now ..... side note to self.... need to do a WHOLE BUNCH of practice drawings of hands ::) meh
http://img289.imageshack.us/img289/9411/conceptslketchesou6.th.jpg
Drunk
#25
Posted 28 July 2006 - 06:34 AM
She looks fantastic! I think we are off to a great start I will give you an email later with a description of the guy character. and will get to work on other charicter bilds
do you want me to discribe how the panels shuld look? or just what is in them
do you want me to discribe how the panels shuld look? or just what is in them
#27
Posted 30 July 2006 - 08:07 AM
Hands? What hands? I got stuck on the nipplage. :-[ ;) Nice stuff, Drunk.
Dart
Dart
#29
Posted 09 August 2006 - 09:56 PM
BOING!!!!!!!!! We've got jugs-a-poppin'!!! Very hot concept, Drunk.
#30
Posted 17 August 2006 - 08:01 PM
Just checking in boys . . . how's everything cumming . . . errr, coming along? heheh
Blueeee ;)
Blueeee ;)

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