Progress for Team Furylander!

Well, we may not see any art from Fury, but here's what I wrote:

Pages 1-2

Open with a UFO of some design TBD weaving in and out of the spacelanes.
Aboard, three alien frat boys, who only refer to one another as Biggy,
Twiggy, and Squishy, are busy getting wasted on space-booze and are in
search of a good time. Biggy is roughly humanoid in shape, though the
similarity only extends to the fact that he's got a head and two arms
and legs attached to a central torso; he's huge. Twiggy is thin and
tall, and is the opposite end of the spectrum from Biggy, though just as
barely humanoid. Squishy, on the other hand, looks more or less
human-like. Squishy says he knows a good place they can go to get some
kicks that the cops don't go. In fact, the place is such a backwater,
nobody goes there on purpose if they can avoid it. When asked how he
knows about it, he says his grandfather told him how he'd found the
place when he was younger: drunk, he'd crashed his ship on the planet
and, thinking the local military who'd come to investigate were cops,
has the dubious distinction of speaking the first words heard by an
alien to the natives, “I swear, occifer, that planet came outta
nowhere!” Too bad the locals didn't have a working translator. The name
of this godforsaken mudball? Earth.

Page 3

The trio make their way to Earth, landing in a relatively remote, wooded
area. They find a trio of human women in a primitive ground vehicle. The
women are just as varied as the boys: a really big girl, a really thin
girl, and a third that's somewhere in the middle. The women are already
so drunk, they don't even put up a fight when grabbed by the ship's
maintenance robot, which looks incredibly similar to Gort from The Day
the Earth Stood Still. The ship takes off into space.

Page 4

The ship settles into a stable parking orbit, and the boys start messing
with the girls they've just abducted. They strip them of their clothing,
and start probing their various orifices. The girls are so wasted, they
don't put up a fight at all. One of them, the middle-proportioned one,
even thinks she's with her boyfriend. Lots of close-ups taking up the
page, obviously.

Page 5

Squishy decides to take advantage of the fact that this girl is so
deliriously drunk that she thinks she's with her boyfriend. He strips
down and starts fucking her. This ends up getting the other girls and
his buddies turned on as well.

Pages 6-8

The ship has turned into a full-on orgy house. Biggy's screwing the
large girl, Twiggy's nailing the thin girl, and Squishy's still going at
it with the third girl.

Page 9

The six are sated, basking in the afterglow. One of the girls, the thin
one, has even lit up a joint that she fished out of one of her pants
pockets. The boys drop off the girls back where they found them, then
leave Earth.

Page 10

The boys are zig-zagging through space once again... but now they're
being chased by another ship with flashing lights. It's the cops. The
last shot we see is a cop standing in the open airlock hatch, asking for
their license and registration...

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