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#1 User is offline   JonJerrykreem 

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Posted 01 April 2008 - 11:56 AM

Bitter Taste

Salt is bitter
Time is little
End
Start
Begin
Forget
Salt, get out of my hair
Salty taste in my mouth
Why must it end?
Begin
End
Where is it?
I do not see it?
You left without saying goodbye.
Only the salt remains.

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Posted 01 April 2008 - 12:11 PM

Snakes in the Dark

White smooth and soft
It glistens in the dark
You are dark!
My darkie!
I eat you whole
You plug my hole
good times
good times
Life is but a walking snake in the dark
I grab the snake and pull it in me
good times
good times
Why must the snake shrivel up and die when I have devoured it's essence?
Why can't it remain a snake forever inside me?
good times
good times
They are gone


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Posted 01 April 2008 - 12:18 PM

Border Brother

Oh my dirty Sancho
Did you like your dirty Sanchez?
Did you like our dirty Sandwich?
Where have you gone?
You don't have to put on the red light
No more dirty Sanchez tonight
Goodbye my dirty Sancho

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Posted 02 April 2008 - 09:20 AM

VD

Tick Tock
Tick Tock
I smell your cock

Tick Tock
Tick Tock
Did you wash it this morning?

Time passes and still no word
What is this rash?

Tick Tock
Tick Tock
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Posted 02 April 2008 - 12:27 PM

ROTFLMMFAO!!!!

Goddamn these are some funny shit, Jon!

Thanks!!!!! Keep'em coming!!!

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Posted 02 April 2008 - 07:18 PM

View Postidic, on Apr 2 2008, 05:27 AM, said:

ROTFLMMFAO!!!!

Goddamn these are some funny shit, Jon!

Thanks!!!!! Keep'em coming!!!

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They're not supposed to be funny? Are you sure that you are even reading these right? This is serious form of literature. My poems are famous. You asswipes are lucky that I am even sharing these with you. There's nothing funny about any of this. Well, at least you appreciate them, which is the least that you can do, since I am gracing you with my spender.

-J Jerrykreem
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Posted 02 April 2008 - 08:16 PM

Used

Hard, stiff, firm
I feel it in my back
Why is it only in the dark?
Why is it only in the middle of the night?

Day
Nothing

Night
Hard, stiff, firm

Bastard!
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Posted 02 April 2008 - 08:27 PM

Licuado

I drink your milkshake
I drink it up
You drink my milkshake

No more milkshakes

I miss your milkshakes

I miss the cream filling
Even the chocolate variety

I miss the way you called your milkshake

Licuado

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Posted 02 April 2008 - 08:41 PM

View PostJonJerrykreem, on Apr 2 2008, 12:18 PM, said:

They're not supposed to be funny? Are you sure that you are even reading these right? This is serious form of literature. My poems are famous. You asswipes are lucky that I am even sharing these with you. There's nothing funny about any of this. Well, at least you appreciate them, which is the least that you can do, since I am gracing you with my spender.

-J Jerrykreem


Not suppose to be funny.... ? Well ok! but its still not bad for Gay Poetry! Do they come to you in your dreams? Or are you inspired by you boyfriends?

Regardless its good to see that you've come out of the closet and embraced your homosexuality! Its nothing to be a shamed of and I for one have nothing against gays, you are free to love as you wish.

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Posted 02 April 2008 - 09:28 PM

View Postidic, on Apr 2 2008, 01:41 PM, said:

Not suppose to be funny.... ? Well ok! but its still not bad for Gay Poetry! Do they come to you in your dreams? Or are you inspired by you boyfriends?

Regardless its good to see that you've come out of the closet and embraced your homosexuality! Its nothing to be a shamed of and I for one have nothing against gays, you are free to love as you wish.

idic :)


There's nothing gay about my poetry. It must be you that is gay. You are probably deriving these ideas from my poetry because you are gay and that's the way you think. No straight person will think that my poetry is gay. I am not gay. So shut the fuck up before I pick up your body little ass and stuff Coco Puffs into it. Go embrace your own faggots, because I am not gay. Dumb ass!

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Posted 02 April 2008 - 11:18 PM

View PostJonJerrykreem, on Apr 2 2008, 03:28 PM, said:

There's nothing gay about my poetry. It must be you that is gay. You are probably deriving these ideas from my poetry because you are gay and that's the way you think. No straight person will think that my poetry is gay. I am not gay. So shut the fuck up before I pick up your body little ass and stuff Coco Puffs into it. Go embrace your own faggots, because I am not gay. Dumb ass!

-J Jerrykreem

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Posted 02 April 2008 - 11:50 PM

View PostJonJerrykreem, on Apr 2 2008, 02:28 PM, said:

There's nothing gay about my poetry. It must be you that is gay. You are probably deriving these ideas from my poetry because you are gay and that's the way you think. No straight person will think that my poetry is gay. I am not gay. So shut the fuck up before I pick up your body little ass and stuff Coco Puffs into it. Go embrace your own faggots, because I am not gay. Dumb ass!

-J Jerrykreem


I guess your not as "out of the closet" as your poetry.(Must be your gay self-consious yearning to be free) but don't get to riled you might stunt your homosexual tendences and that might stunt your poetry and erik estrada would be sad.

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Posted 03 April 2008 - 05:09 AM

View Postidic, on Apr 2 2008, 04:50 PM, said:

I guess your not as "out of the closet" as your poetry.(Must be your gay self-consious yearning to be free) but don't get to riled you might stunt your homosexual tendences and that might stunt your poetry and erik estrada would be sad.

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Posted 03 April 2008 - 03:02 PM

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Nice Tats Jon

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Posted 07 April 2008 - 10:56 AM

I gotta say.. I'm so damn impressed I'm speechless..

Great job Jon.

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