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#1 User is offline   Blaque_Omen 

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Posted 17 May 2006 - 03:44 PM

Face...this is not a rap >:( ;D ;)

I stare into the blue air, looking back at me through there is a face,
a beautiful face smiling down, no trace of horror in the smile,
been searching all this time, and the face has been here all this while
I shuffle while I stand, trying to look like I have lots of style to impress the face,
but the face gives me a look like I have no taste, so I grin back at the face,
but a force takes me away from the face, and I stretch my arms,
trying to reach the face but the face is gone, and I can’t get it back,
so I drop on the floor and wait for the day the face comes back,
realizing the face is gone is more than I can take, so I scream words of hate,
because the face was beautiful, and unique in the blue air
was a woman’s face no trace of a mans hate,
lush pink cheeks, long dark eyelashes staring at me,
but the blue went and the pink died away, so I kneeled and prayed for the face to come back,
and form into a body of a woman to be with me
because I love the face and wish to hug more than the face
to give its owner warmth and comfort to make her feel safe.

26/11/05
Blaque Omen :) :)
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Posted 17 May 2006 - 06:01 PM

Very beautiful. Makes me wanna cry. You have a wonderful way with words Blaque, please keep posting!!

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Posted 17 May 2006 - 06:17 PM

Very nice, Blaque...damn it, why can't I see something like that in the sky?  All I ever see are monsters...and bunnies.
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Posted 17 May 2006 - 06:46 PM

:Dthank you :D
Blue: it was inspired by a dream i once had, a time when i was very lonely, and i kept picturing this perfect face, beautiful, but i just couldn't get to it :o makes me cry too :)

Darth: you know what, writing about monsters and bunnies sounds really interesting. Next i may just write from your perspective and talk about monsters and bunnies in the sky, snarling and glaring down at the unsuspecting pawns of this Earth... ;) Thank you :P

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Posted 17 May 2006 - 07:12 PM

Beautiful! I loved it. :-*

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