[Blaque_Omen]

;DWow, im so excited :D i was going through old things a couple of days ago-girlfriend was nagging me, apparently all my junk takes up too much space :-?- and i came across something i'd done from when i was about 14-15 years old :) i used to love rap and i even wrote my own stuff, mainly dealing with politics and personal issues, but i guess one day i felt like experimenting a little and conjured up a little dirty verse ;D :-/ man, i was a horny child :-? i thought i'd share it with you guys here, thinking that since the theme's about "dirty" stuff lol it'd fit just fine here. Now, i'm not saying it's any good, just thought that it could induce a couple of laughs or something, i don't know ::)

Yo what's up lady/i'm going crazy/
thinking bout' your pussy/ wanna sink my tongue deep/
over your ass, creep my tongue sleek/
make you so hot sweat trickles down your cheek/
lick it off/ make you get off/ slide my fingers in and out/
oh so soft/
satin silk/ your insides i want to thrill, make you milk/
orgasm, climax to the max/ michael jackson playing in the back/
i wanna rock wit you girl/ take you to another world/
don't need to give you pearls, first kid to make you cum/
in your eyes i'll always be number one/
only person you'll come to for some hardcore fun/
willing to lick you nice and slow/ don't even need a blow/
just make sure it's real when you say oohh/
babygirl i'll fuck you to and throw/ don't need a rubber i'll go down low/
before i get you in the back/ in that fat ass/
beautiful, whole other class/ ass in its own class/
must have been the hottest in your class/
any guy who fucks you must cum fast/
but baby trust me, give me a chance/ and until you climax, i'll last.

;Dit's a nice trip down memory lane, reminds me of a simpler time when all i cared about was music, girls, money and unfortunately drugs :-/ feel welcome to berate, criticize, humiliate, condemn, scold, or even praise ;) just remember i've grown out of that rap phase 8-) Well, whoever has been bothered to read this whole passage up to this point, i thank you :) and for those who havn't, i don't blame you ;) Later, Blaque Omen :o

[jaded_blue]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh hot!! Now I wanna hear you sing it!!  ;) Hmmm or should I say 'rap' it?  :-/ Ahh hell who cares....its still hot!!

Blueeee

[Darth-BAW]

I don't know if it's a good rap (I suffer from chronic white man's disease) but it's an incredibly hot bunch of images...bravo.

[piaz]

its good but i dont like rap. sorry :-* :-* :-*


pi

[Blaque_Omen]

Bluee: Thank You, i guess at 15 i knew what was hot and not ;)
Zantha: Thank You
DarthBAW: well, i'd say the lyrics are just fine, but i'd say fans of rap wouldn't appreciate it. However, i'd like to think fans of poetry would percieve this little verse as poetry :P  :-/ahhh one can dreamm ::) oooh and thanks :D
Piaz: thank you piaz.

I think the problem with rap nowadays is-for those who used to enjoy it back in the day- is that it appeals to a small audience, those that are infatuated with violence, guns, drugs, and i don't mean to be too hypocritical, and girls. I believe that if rappers talked about true issues, which some do-unfortunately only a small minority of rappers do deal with these issues-, then rap could possibly be percieved and accepted as poetry and a means of expressing one self. Too bad there's always going to be the 50 Cents and other money obsessed artists around, deterring old fans like me from returing to the genre simply cos' they want money :-? but there are a few great rappers and story-tellers, and i must say, it's not right if they're ignored because they choose to express themselves by rapping :(
anywhooo :P i think i'll end this little analyzation, thanks again to those who said the verse was good, you guys are very generous :)

Blaque