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Is what I see real?
Is what I have what I realy want?
Can you tell me?
Is this a life?
A life without love.
A life without feeling.
I feel so numb.
Can someone tell me what my life is about?
Can you help me understand why I am?
Why is there life when there is only pain?
And yet I do love.
And I do live.
So I will go on liveing.
Knowing if I will ever be complete.
So if anyone can tell me.
Please tell me what is life if not with love?
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ok i need yalls help for the title.
any thing would be nice.
please help.
pi
ps i hope yall like it. :-* :-* :-* :-*
HELP!!!!
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Posted 09 May 2006 - 09:02 PM
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Posted 09 May 2006 - 09:06 PM
A lovely poem, baby, but I'm affraid I'm no good at coming up with titles. You already know my suggestion, but hopefully more qualified readers will give you better ones.
Great work, Pi. :-*
Great work, Pi. :-*
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Posted 09 May 2006 - 09:10 PM
great job, very nice , i like it too
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Posted 09 May 2006 - 09:14 PM
Very beautiful baby, I would give you suggestions on the title, but titles are almost as important as the content, it is something that you need to come up with on your own. Thank you for sharing another wonderful piece of you.
Blueeeee ;)
Blueeeee ;)
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Posted 09 May 2006 - 10:58 PM
I can't believe this has happened twice in one day, but I agree with Blue. It's an incredible poem, sweetie, but I think you need to title it yourself. Otherwise it wouldn't be as personal. ;)
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Posted 09 May 2006 - 11:13 PM
very touching... Keep it up Piaz
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Posted 10 May 2006 - 05:58 PM
great as always Pi and of course i can't wait to see more hun.....keep'em commin ;) :-* love u!
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Posted 10 May 2006 - 10:45 PM
well i have like 3 more comeing. that is if baw will fix them for me.
hint hint baw darlin. hurrry love. they want more love.
and i love u to rune love.
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hint hint baw darlin. hurrry love. they want more love.
and i love u to rune love.
:-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
pi
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Posted 11 May 2006 - 12:50 AM
More, more, more! I can't get enough of your poetry, pi! :-* :-* :-*
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Posted 22 May 2006 - 11:16 AM
OK OK THERE'S MORE ON THE WAY. I JUST HAVE TOHAVE BAW FIX IT.
BAW LOVE I NEED YOUR HELP. :-* :-* :-*
PI
BAW LOVE I NEED YOUR HELP. :-* :-* :-*
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Posted 22 May 2006 - 02:47 PM
so what is the poem about?
its cinde of a silly question I mean its abvios what its about.
but that is the the name of the poem if. you want it to be :)
its cinde of a silly question I mean its abvios what its about.
but that is the the name of the poem if. you want it to be :)
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Posted 23 May 2006 - 07:27 AM
'Dubbed'
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Posted 23 May 2006 - 07:37 AM
ooooo ooooo i like that one.
thank u :-* :-*
pi
thank u :-* :-*
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Posted 14 March 2010 - 05:58 AM
i think that its time to revise some of my poems
and this one is more true now than it ever was.
pi
and this one is more true now than it ever was.
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Posted 14 May 2010 - 09:20 PM
Wow... I remember this one. I always liked it. 
