[_Scribbleskillz_]

This is not a story.  It had been a long and slow day for me in which i found myself practicing haiku's right and left.  For that i must thank you again Chewbaca, for your aide.  Anyways, i felt i should post some of them.

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My feet push the earth.
Muscles burning as i run.
Feel alive again.


don't show them your fear
smile through the blood on your teeth
Their momment will come.


To laugh is to live.
Pain speaks of mortality.
Breathe for the first time.


Judge not each other.
We all see through human eyes.
Live and accept it.


Fresh air fills my lungs.
The morning is clean and calm.
A new day is born.


For what i confess,
I do not know the answer.
Forget to forgive.


I lost my baseball!
What the hell, my mit's gone too?!?
This is such bull shit!


A different room.
Nothing is recognizable.
Lost in my own house.


The pain of panic.
I fall into ice water.
Oh what have i done?


Here comes the town fool.
No reason to point and laugh.
Look in the mirror.


Stand in the chaos.
A crowd is but a riot,
That knows control.


Get to know yourself.
Honesty shines from inside,
Then the world will know.


Dangerous is man.
Easily blinded by hate.
Don't we all bleed red?


There we go.  Thanks everyone


Scribbleskillz

[piaz]

ooo loved it. but then all your stuff i love. it just makes u think.
thank you scribbs.  :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*





pi

[chewbaca]

they are all very good except fore one
this one

Fresh air fills my lungs.
The morning is clean and calm.
A new day is born.

its perfect


PS punctuation is superfluous  

[_Scribbleskillz_]

superfluous?  i'm sorry i don't understand

[chewbaca]

superfluous
more than necessary: that is in excess of what is needed

Encarta ® World English Dictionary

nothing wrong with it its just not neaded :)

[_Scribbleskillz_]

cool.  thanks for tthe brief lesson.  I was serious when i said i needed to extend my vocab.  ::) ;)

Scribs

[piaz]

no scribs your good just the way u r. i wouldnt change a thing. :-* :-* :-* :-*





pi

[_Scribbleskillz_]

i can't seem to stop... here are a few more.

The moment after
Waves of bliss course through the soul
Hold her closer still

Through my scope I choose
I hold the power of God
This is not my right

A blank page awaits
Feel its anticipation
Today it will live

Another cold night
The silence is deafening
A lonesome heart cries

Grab the soil, my friend
Feel the dirt in your fingers
This world is our home

Forget who you are
Today will change everything
We are born once more

Into the bottle
Drink the juice to forget all
Please take it from me

I own the power
Dominance in my hands
I told you to beg

So what have we here?
I am a professional
Turn your head and cough

Rat on your neighbor
Smile ‘cause we are watching you
Welcome to freedom

Trust in your instinct
Your soul will know what to do
It’s all you have left

You will fail again
No one is ever perfect
We’re only human

Silence stills my heart
Such beauty should not exist
A star among rocks

I hunger for sin
This carnal craving fills me
The ache for release

Watch as the rain falls
Tiny beads drop from heaven
The world is washed clean

What will happen next?
What secrets will come at dawn?
Would I want to know?

We laugh at danger
The thrill. The rush; it calls us.
Does death laugh along?

Why do I do this?
My life is ever changing
Who am I kidding?

Poems are a curse
Regardless of the meanings
Now I think in rhymes

4/29/2006

[piaz]

wow i love it. but its all good from u.thank u scribbs :-* :-*





pi

[jaded_blue]

Wow Scribby you have been busy busy!! Great job man! You the bestest!

Blueeeeeee