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Posted 04 May 2006 - 10:34 PM

BEST STORY EVER!!! :o :o :o

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Posted 05 May 2006 - 01:34 AM

Thank you kindly Cien... If you haven't, be sure to read the first one too.  Some back story may make sense.

http://www.jabcomix.com/cgi-bin/yabb2/YaBB...um=1145120432/0

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Posted 06 May 2006 - 03:57 AM

Read it. Loved it! ;)

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Posted 22 November 2010 - 11:30 AM

Rely a good story, hope there will come more soon :comeon:
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Posted 24 November 2010 - 09:28 PM

Yes. Need more of this story.
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Posted 20 February 2011 - 11:05 AM

Man! that was hawt!! the scene with Lili, celeste and Dad by the pool was a killer. I love all the detailed description and the slow build up, it all really pulled me right in.
Is there any way to access the first part as the link doesn't work anymore (it is 5 years old). I would REALLLLLYYY like to read it
many thanks scribbleskillz your name is an understatement.
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Posted 11 March 2011 - 02:37 PM

Oh my, your writing style and blending of words together puts my writing to shame. I had to stop several times to gain a little control and the surprise ending was a very nice touch. Too bad we couldn't see what happened that week with Lilly and Helen, I'm sure that would have been perfectly and enticingly erotic. I plan on revisiting your story from time to time just to improve upon my writing so that I can tell my stories as well as you have proven here.
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Posted 15 April 2011 - 01:55 AM

Holy crap! I forgot I posted this here. I can't believe it is still alive and kicking. I've posted the whole story and other works of mine on a erotic fiction site. If anyone is interested, the link is in my profile.

Thanks for the comments in the meantime. Kind words and considerate critiques are always welcome.

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 04:40 AM

This story has a lot of depth to it.
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Posted 15 August 2011 - 03:00 PM

Wow! That was inspiring.
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Posted 23 April 2012 - 02:21 PM

I :wub: you, Scribs.
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Posted 29 April 2012 - 04:22 AM

that was truly awesome thanks so much for sharing it. :wub:
I'd love to read the first part but can't find it, that link at the top of the page just goes to the forum, om maybe I havn't searched hard enough.....
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Posted 03 May 2012 - 08:26 PM

View Postjaded_blue, on 23 April 2012 - 07:21 AM, said:

I :wub: you, Scribs.


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Posted 07 May 2012 - 10:00 PM

:comeon:
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