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Posted 19 April 2006 - 01:30 AM

Falling From Harmony
Written by Scribbleskillz


It’s a long fall from the top of the world.
Deny what you will, time has moved on.
Feel the rage coat your falling thoughts.
Feel the fear sink inside you.
You must decide your fate.
Forget the reason.
Accept the truth.
The time comes.
It’s here.
Rise.


4-18-2006

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 01:43 AM

Brilliant! You are so amazing. I love your work. ;)

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 02:01 AM

*awestruck*

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 04:49 AM

As I've stated before, in another thread, I'm not all that good with poetry, so I was wondering what you thinks this means, Scribs? I have a thought, but I'd rather keep it to myself for now. ;)

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 04:58 AM

Well, to be honest, there are no wrong conclusions.  What it tells you is what it tells you.  kinda like an ink blot test.  What i was thinking when i wrote this was how often in life one may work hard and achieve a high standing.  something can go wrong and you find yourself in a cascade falling to a painful bottom.  Once you hit, what will you do.  Simmer or move on?  that is what i felt while writing it.  Doesn't mean that is what it means.  Find whatever answers call to you...  Suddenly i feel like the wise man on the hill.   ::) :P

Thanks for the comments everyone.  

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 07:40 PM

Thanks, Scribs. I've felt this way a few times. Scoot sideways and find another ladder. ;)

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 08:42 PM

You are a wise man on a hill! Good job as usual, Scibs! ;)

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Posted 30 April 2006 - 05:26 PM

Really powerful! ;)

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