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I've created a very short sequel to The Ascension. I had intended it to be longer, but I just don't have the time, and as you can see my 1000th post was a few days ago. :P Here is the link to The Ascension in case you missed it. Enjoy! :-*
http://www.jabcomix....?num=1143414240
One-Thousand Thrusts
Once more she found herself before the assembled pantheon of Mount Jabylus. She eagerly strode down the carpet, for at the end she would get what she had longed for since her ascension. At the foot of the throne she knelt before the All Mighty Jab. ”My thousand posts have passed Lord Jab,” she said to the King of the Gods. “I await my prize.”
Webmaster stood forward and commanded, “Down on all fours and face the entrance, Zantha. The High Lord will now place himself within your rectum!”
Zantha stood stunned. She stared at the enormous cock bobbing in anticipation and knew fear. “Excuse me? He’s going to put that thing where,” she asked in disbelief.
The Webmaster’s eyebrow arched and he took on a note of impatience as he replied, “Your anus. That is what you receive at one-thousand posts. One-thousand thrusts into your ass from the All Father. You are truly blessed this day, Zantha,” he continued. “Now GET DOWN THERE!”
She heard the hum of machinery and saw that Steve H was cackling like a madman in anticipation of blasting her with his Death Ray if she should refuse. Jaded Blue stepped forward and took her hand. “It’s not so bad, Zany,” she said reassuringly, “and it’ll be over before you know it. We’ve all done it. Trust me it’ll be worth it” She leaned in and gave her friend a kiss on the cheek before stepping back into the crowd.
“What? We all have to go through this at a thousand posts,” asked Dart alarmingly. “No one told me about this!” The other men simply blushed in humiliation and shuffled their feet.
“SILENCE,” bellowed the Webmaster. “Take your place, Zantha, or post no more!”
Like that’s going to happen, she thought as she placed herself before them.
She felt hands on her, and then the All Father truly blessed her by lubing her with his tongue. Starting with soft teasing licks his ministrations increased for several minutes until his velvety tongue was fucking her better than any cock could do. He reached around and grabbed her breasts, and she cried out as she came. His tongue withdrew slowly as he continued to play with her swaying breasts. His fingers found her nipples and another orgasm raced through her body when he pinched and twisted them.
Before she could recover he rose up and thrust the head of his divine rod into her now relaxed rectum. She was stretched open as inch by gargantuan inch pushed itself in until she saw stars. She was surprised by how enjoyable it was, for he was considerate enough to rub her clit and play with her breasts. For what seemed like hours, but could not have been more than twenty minutes he thrusted in and out of her. She had come so many times she lost count, and when he reached one-thousand and pulled out to shower her ass and back with his heavenly seed she didn’t even notice, for her mind had gone numb from the intense pleasure he had given her.
As she lay there twitching and quivering he leaned over and whispered, “I look forward to your two-thousanth post, Zantha.” And then he was gone.
4/16/06
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Posted 16 April 2006 - 07:51 PM
Most impressive, lover. At this rate I too am eagerly looking forward to your 2000th post. ;) :-*
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Posted 16 April 2006 - 08:04 PM
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Nope! Nope! Nope! Sorry, that's an exit only orifice for me. I think 999 is my limit now! :-[ :P ;) :-*
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Nope! Nope! Nope! Sorry, that's an exit only orifice for me. I think 999 is my limit now! :-[ :P ;) :-*
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Posted 16 April 2006 - 08:20 PM
now now dart we all want to see u at 2000. u know that
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Posted 16 April 2006 - 08:35 PM
[smiley=lolk.gif] Piaz is right, love. We really want to see you make it! ;D :-*
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Posted 16 April 2006 - 11:02 PM
I love all of your stories ZAntha. I hope to see more soon. :-*
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Posted 17 April 2006 - 02:50 AM
Ouch is right, mj! :o Goth, my little lovely, I would love to write more often, but as I've said I just don't have the time, so my next project will probably take a bit. :-[ :-*
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Posted 17 April 2006 - 02:55 AM
Well done Zany...I am so proud of you!! :-*
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Posted 17 April 2006 - 04:29 AM
i love it more more. ty for the grate stuff Z. :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
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Posted 17 April 2006 - 12:36 PM
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Ouch is right, mj! :o Goth, my little lovely, I would love to write more often, but as I've said I just don't have the time, so my next project will probably take a bit. :-[ :-*
Another lovely peice Zantah. If you need help finding time, try to get up just a half an hour earlier and start to write right when you get up. It's what i do. I can never seem to write anything if there are others around, so this allows me the quiet momments to relax and pour out my goal onto paper, or the screen. it also puts my goals in order as well. Hell, even Dan Brown only wrote in the morning.
I do know whatever you do, you will do it well. you're play with words is intoxicating... keep posting girl, cause i bet we'll all need to scotch gaurd something by the time you reach 2000 posts!
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Posted 17 April 2006 - 07:16 PM
Thank you all! I wasn't very pleased with this one, for it was very rushed, but I'm glad you have enjoyed it! ;) Scribs, your advice is very well received, and I will give it a try. I, too, cannot write when there is too much going on around me. :-*
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