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Posted 16 April 2006 - 02:02 AM

A Time lost, A moment Found.

Remember the day that we said hello.
Sun pouring down upon our heated skin.
Your hair danced before your glittering eyes.
The sweet melody of summer flew by,
Wrapping its warm arms around our bodies.
We were alone in the crowd, you and I.
My heart was pierced with one shot from your bow,
Crippled by love I found no words to aide.
No breath to pass my lips. Oh, sweet surprise!
Whisper your name. Teach me to speak again.
The voice of a siren.  A new victim.
Together we stood, shadow’s now as one.
A hand extended.  A touch to kindle,
The embers of hope in my waiting chest.
Hold close that day of life starting over.
Fear not lost thoughts for it remembers you.


4/15/2006
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Posted 16 April 2006 - 02:05 AM

Damn Scribs! You must get a lot of women! ;)

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Posted 16 April 2006 - 02:12 AM

:)Oh yeah!  Tons, my friend.  It gets to be such a burden sometimes.  ::)  

Thanks MJ, to be honest, i've just had time studying iamic pantamiter and listen to a lot of crazy music.  My theory has always been some of the best poems are songs.  Just Listen to Modest Mouse's 'Moon and Antartica' Album. I always find it to be inspiring.  

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Posted 16 April 2006 - 02:31 AM

Have me!! Have me Scribbs!! Oh! Sorry, I was umm just thinking, lol.

Its beautiful Scribbs, you never cease to amazed me. Wow!!

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Posted 16 April 2006 - 03:52 AM

Beautifully written, Scribbs. This is true art. Thanks again!

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Posted 16 April 2006 - 06:23 AM

Your poetry always touches me. Thank you for sharing your amazing gift. :)

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Posted 16 April 2006 - 07:32 PM

You are truly gifted, my friend! ;)

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Posted 16 April 2006 - 11:25 PM

love it. but i love all your stuff. keep it up kk :-* :-* :-* :-*


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Posted 17 April 2006 - 11:30 PM

Thank you all.  It's always a pleasure.

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Posted 18 April 2006 - 11:58 PM

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Thank you all.  It's always a pleasure.

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Actually more so our pleasure I'm pretty sure Scribs.

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Posted 29 April 2006 - 06:48 PM

You must be a professional writer. Right?

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Posted 29 April 2006 - 11:05 PM

;DHA! oh dear god that was a good one!  No i am no where near it... but thanks for the compliment.

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Posted 10 May 2006 - 07:17 PM

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;DHA! oh dear god that was a good one!  No i am no where near it... but thanks for the compliment.

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I think your lying!! LIARRRRRRRRR!! Oh sorry. heheh  ;)

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Posted 12 May 2006 - 05:44 AM

::) :-/ :'( ;D... I like smilies!!!
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