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Posted 22 April 2006 - 03:09 AM

thats just not right. more.    please.  :-* :-* :-*






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Posted 22 April 2006 - 04:40 PM

hehehehehe... I thought you guys might get a kick outta that.  This should put your dirty minds at ease.

“Thank god!” she exhaled as she raised her hips up.    I felt her delicate fingers wrap around my cock at the same time as my own.  With just the slightest of direction, we pointed it up to her entrance.  Suddenly, the realization of what was about to happen hit us both.  Our looks of need where interrupted with a sense of doubt.  I could see it in her eyes just as much as she into mine.  

We froze there a moment, our bodies wanting more, and our minds offering criticism.  A tiny drop of liquid seemed to fall from Sweet Lilly and land on the tip of my cock.  I now knew.

“… Daddy?” Lilly asked as I looked at her.

“Test it, remember?” I assured her.  “We’ll take it slow, okay?  If you don’t want to, we won’t go any further.” I stated.  I kept my hand on the base of my cock keeping it pointing straight up towards her wet pussy.

She nodded her head as she looked down at me.  The need still had a strong hold of her.  Her eyes looked as if she were in a trance.  

“I’ll just do the tip,” she said to me.  I nodded my understanding.  There was nothing more that I wanted at that moment than to shift my hips up and bury myself in her tight love canal, but I resisted all temptation to disrupt this course.  If it was going to happen, we needed to reach that moment together.

Lilly’s knees gently buckled as she lowered herself.  I watched as her mound came closer and closer.  The lips of her pussy kissed my cock upon contact sending a current of electricity through our bodies.  My skin prickled in goosebumps.  My muscles tightened.  Lilly was panting as she tried to keep her legs from giving way completely.

“Oh my God!  It’s there!” she cried as she began to shift her hips back and forth in the slightest of movements.  Each time she slid forward, her lips parted a little more as the tip of my cock began its journey inside.  Every tiny millimeter was savored by us both.  I could feel her lips parting more and more as I slid in effortlessly.  In just one more breath, the entire crown would be submerged in her depths.  

As she closed around the edges of my tip, both of us stopped our movements.  The sensation was incredible.  I couldn’t believe my cock was inside of my daughter.  What’s more, I couldn’t believe how it felt so fantastic.  She gripped me by the little that was in her tighter than any woman I’ve been with.  She definitely had her mother’s talented pussy.  

Lilly’s hands went onto her thighs as she kept herself steady.  After what felt like a joyful eternity, she began to move once more.  Slowly, she retreated.  The simple distance of almost two inches seeming to feel like a mile as her pussy pulled its way back.  Her juices had already soaked my tool where she had been.  

Just before I would be out in the lonely air again, she brought her love nest back down my shaft.  The return trip felt even better than the first.  The coating on my cock allowed a gentle slide.  But just as I was embracing the utter joy of the feeling, she backed off again only to return.  And so she continued to tease.  Both of us very much aware that we wanted more.  Both of us very much aware that our bodies screamed for each other.  And both of us were even more aware that each time her pussy slid down me, it came a little further each trip.

Lilly continued her gradual impalement on my throbbing shaft.  Her movements now continued to almost halfway down my member.  All subtleties were gone.  The test was over.  It was at this moment truly fucking my daughter.  She knew it too as she looked up to me.  Her eyes filled with hunger as she fucked her father.  With a wicked grin, she dropped her weight and completely sank my fatherly cock into her.

“Holy shit!” she cried as she bottomed out. “Daddy you’re fucking me!  You’re really fucking me!” she blissfully panted as she began to buck up and down on my stiff dick.

I reached out and gripped the bouncing hips of my sweet Lilly as she thrusted.  Her vise gripped me tighter than I could ever imagine; yet she slid smoothly as if designed just for our union.  I gritted my teeth together as I began to punch my hips upward timing my movements to coincide with my daughters.  Her vaginal walls squeezed me in response.

“Oh Fuck Lilly,” I cried “Baby you feel so good.”

Her eyes kept her hunger as she fucked me.  “You like it, don’t you Daddy?  You like my tight wet pussy going up and down your cock.  Ohhhhhh Yes Daddy you fill me up good.  Fuck me!  Ugh GOD Fuck me!”

We increased our taboo rhythms.  Lilly was bouncing up and down enjoying every forbidden moment of our wild ride.  Her breasts swayed in the air as if to play catch up to her body’s movements.

I watched as she tried to push more and more into herself.  The need for it filled us both as I leaned my body up and wrapped my arms around her.  Our legs spread wide as I pressed her body into my own.  Her arms falling over my head and holding me as tight as her pussy.  Her tits pressed into my chest.  Our skin felt as one.  

Feeling as if the control was mine, I held her there as I moved my hips against her.  My cock slid in deep to new depths not yet felt.  Lilly’s arms tightened as she bit my shoulder.  
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Posted 22 April 2006 - 04:44 PM

The weight of her in my lap, the smell of her erotic state, the sight of her writhing atop me, the taste of her skin, and the sound of her muted cries all brought me to a level of arousal I had never seen before.  I kept my pace slow as I pushed in, fucking my sweet Lilly.  I wanted to savor every inch of her body on mine.  I wanted to feel every tiny fraction of a centimeter of her moist canal as it devoured my member.  

“Oh Daddyyyyyyyy!” she cried into my shoulder. “You’re soooo deep! AH!” she moved her hips slowly as she relished every moment of our coupling.

Our movements became more and more frantic as we tried to feel every piece of flesh.  We didn’t even notice that we were moving the sheets on the bed.  We did notice the moment we found ourselves falling to the ground.  But even the cold wooded floor could not cool our desire.  Lilly was now beneath me with legs wrapped around my waist.  

“Oh Daddy!  Oh Fuck! YES YESSSSSS!” she cried as we fucked in unison harder and faster that ever.  My hips were a blur as they slapped against her.  With every thrust I pushed as much in as I could.  Every moment she pushed hard against each other.  It was incredible.  I knew I hadn’t long to last from this point.  I could feel my time running out.

“Oh Lilly… Ugh baby I’m gonna’ cum!  Daddy’s gonna’ cum!” I cried.

“Cum in me!  Cum in my pussy PLEASE!  I’m on the pill!  Please!” she screamed as her fingernails raked through my back.  She wouldn’t last long either.  “Oh daddy, I’m close too!  I want to feel it!  Tell me!”

I smiled our wicked smile.  “I’m gonna’ cum in your tight little pussy, Baby.  Daddy’s gonna’ fill you with cum!”  She was going crazy as we closed in on each other.  

“Daddy’s close baby!”  Her pussy squeezed tighter than ever.  I tried with all of my might to push harder.

“Oh Daddy!  I’m gonna….!”

We slammed our bodies together in one blessed moment as we exploded in unison.  Our lips met in a kiss that defined our lust.  My cock shot off inside her, coating her walls in our unholy desire.  I was filling my baby girl with cum as the electricity shot through our bodies.  I was certain we would have started a fire if we were in hay.

There was nothing else in the world at that moment to me.  I was holding my precious daughter in my arms in a way I never would have imagined.  As our lust was sedated, we were able to look at each other once more.  I was uncertain of many things but the one shred of certainty I did have was our mutual thought at that moment.  There was no remorse… Only love.

Lilly’s eyes sparkled as she looked at her father.  I couldn’t help but smile at the creature beneath me.  I was proud of her.

The remainder of the day is one that I will truly remember 'til the end of my years.  We ran all throughout that house as giddy as kids.  There was not a room we didn’t show our newly found love to.  From the kitchen counter, to cold floor of the garage, and finally… On the big bed my wife and I share.

It seems like so long ago now, when it was only a few hours.  I don’t know what will happen next.  Actually, I take comfort in that thought.  All that I do know is that you were right, Mom.  The apple doesn’t seem to fall to far from the tree.  Perhaps one day I will explain that part of my life to her.  But then again, maybe she would prefer to hear it from both of us.  If I know my sweet Lilly, It would make her more than happy.

Thanks again Mom.

Your loving son,

Jack


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(Thank you for taking the time to read ‘Downfall.’  If you enjoyed it, feel free to let others know.  If you hated it, feel free to do the same.  Finally, please remember to vote.  I appreciate any and all feedback that the readers have so feel free to send it.  Thanks again,  Scribbleskillz.)

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Well, that concludes the first story.  I thought i should let you all know that i had actually never planned a second, but due to public demand, i decided to work on one.  i actually just finished it yesterday and it is currently in the hands of my editor.  I hope you all enjoy and if you think the heat is over... Oh... It's not.  

Keep your eyes open for 'Downfall - Culmination'

Thanks for reading!

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Posted 22 April 2006 - 06:53 PM

Yay for Scribs! [smiley=vrolijk_26.gif] Yay for Downfall! [smiley=vrolijk_26.gif] Yay for part two! [smiley=vrolijk_26.gif]

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Posted 22 April 2006 - 11:55 PM

If Part 2 is even half as good as this, it will be spellbinding. Thanks again, Scribs!  [smiley=thumbsup.gif]

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 01:01 AM

wow part 2. yayay i cant wait. :-* :-* :-* :-*




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Posted 23 April 2006 - 02:02 AM

Great work. I can't wait for part 2! ;)

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 02:40 AM

so when is it comeing .  [smiley=vrolijk_26.gif] [smiley=vrolijk_26.gif] :-* :-* :-*






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Posted 23 April 2006 - 02:47 AM

hopefully in a couple of days.  We will see.

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Posted 05 May 2006 - 05:06 AM

I loved it! :o ;)

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