[piaz]

                             
the one that made me think that i could start this agen was baw. so i deticate this to him. he inspierd me to do i ;D

                 The Unborn Love

I lie awake at night, sobbing at the thought of you.  Wanting to hear
your
voice one last time.  Knowing that if I would have said what I needed
to
say, and done what I needed to do, you might still be here, but with a
crash
that came tumbling down.  Now my love is gone!  Wishing that I still
had
your LOVE and you lying beside me.  As I look down I think about my
LOVE...  
 I do still have you.  As my womb swells with life.  I know I might
not
have all of you, but a small part of you still might be here, in our
unborn
child.  For you have died and gone forever.   But I still have your
LOVE for
all eternity.   So know I say I LOVE YOU too.  "Oh look, it's a Boy!"  
I
shall LOVE him so......

Writen by: Sammi / piaz :-* :-* :-* :-*

[jaded_blue]

Wow Pi...thats beautiful honey. Very nicely written and of course heart breaking. I love it!

Blue

[piaz]

thank u baby. glad that u liked it .
i ame to please. :-* :-* :-*


PI :-* :-* :-*
And thank u baw for makeing me think that i could. :-*

[Darth-BAW]

An excellent work, Pi.  Beautiful and sad, like all the best poems usually are.  Thank YOU for sharing your gift with us all. :-*

[piaz]

thank u all for the compliments. but if it wernt for baw it wouldnt have happend. so thank u to him for all that he has done.
hope that u can imspier me more.
luvzu ALL

AND ZANTHA THANK U FOR JUST SAYIN G THAT U LIKE IT THAT MAKES ME FEEL REALY GOOD :-*


:-* :-* :-* :-* :-*PI

[piaz]

thank u goth i love yours to  :-*

pi

[JAMM]

Very nice indeed Pi!  Isn't it great to be able to put your feelings on paper?  Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more!

-JAMM

[Cloud]

Well gee hun i wonder who thats about  lol ;D   and when the hell r the others making they're day-bue here huh huh huh???   can't wait to see more cuz u know i'm your biggest fan hun keep'em cummin.... :D

[_Scribbleskillz_]

Very well done.  Touching and thoughtful.  Thank you for sharing.

Scribs

[piaz]

thank uall for telling me your oppion. and that u liked them. theres more to come i promise. hopefuly tomarrow.  ;D :-* :-*


and  :-* :-* :-* to all that liked it


pi

[Dart]

That's a beautiful poem, Pi.  It's such a touching story of a love that is lost, but still lasts in the newborn child. Poetry is so personal. Thank you for sharing!  :'(:-*

Dart