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Posted 04 April 2006 - 01:20 AM

I decided to dig out my old book of poetry, which kinda sums up a short stage of my life a few years back, right before I met Lock, actually.  I preferred to scan some of these pages rather than merely type the words written on them.  I started the book in May of 2001 and set it aside just three months later.  

I entitled it "Sunset Densetsu and other so-called legends" probably because I thought it sounded cool.  ::)

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The entire book was written on black paper with silver gel pens, and as you can see Amber is gracing the cover.

Inside the front cover is the quote, "evil slices through the hearts of every one of us."  Here's a few to get started with. . .



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. . . God, that feels like so long ago.
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Posted 04 April 2006 - 01:34 AM

It sounds like a dark time in your life, E. I'm glad you found the power within yourself to grow past it.  BTW, Amber looked hot, even then. Thanks for sharing.

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Posted 04 April 2006 - 01:37 AM

They are beautful E, scanning up the actual pages of the book gives it an intimate feel that really goes well with the poetry.

Another life so long, Another person I used to know
In the past forever left, so that our spirit will forever glow
To know that past, and live the now
To keep on going and not know how
Forever left in history
Who you were. no mystery
In the world for all to se
You are a soul of such Beauty

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Posted 04 April 2006 - 07:10 AM

Ahh I love your poetry E. Thank you for finally sharing honey.

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Posted 06 April 2006 - 12:00 AM

Thank you guys. . . yeah, I'm in a better place now.

Satan- thank you for the beautiful poem.

I thought I'd occasionally post another one for the hell of it.  Here's one I had originally written when I lived in Chicago:

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Posted 06 April 2006 - 02:05 AM

The depth of your senstivity never ceases to astound me! :'(

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Posted 06 April 2006 - 09:57 AM

Yea honey... Deep and sensitive... [smiley=evil.gif]

and your poetry is great too :P

But seriously, Great work E, Can't wait for more

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Posted 06 April 2006 - 02:42 PM

E, my dearest, I feel I must appologize for my late reply.  I finally found the time to read all your poems...and I find myself speechless...

Yours is a beautiful soul, E, and it shines forth in your words.  I can not thank you enough for sharing these with us.

Love you always, my dearest... :-*
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Posted 07 April 2006 - 12:58 AM

Thanks guys.  There's something strangely healing about digging these out again and actually sharing them with people.  I *really* appreciate the feedback.

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Posted 07 April 2006 - 02:31 AM

E- Thank you for sharing these. Reading through them reminds me of letters never sent.  You've shown how letting go can be very cathartic.  :-*

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Posted 07 April 2006 - 05:48 AM

Thanks!

Heh, I have so many unsent letters. . . these are definitely related.  

Here's one some of you may have seen on my dA account about smoking:

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You'll be happy to know I haven't had any cigarettes in a while now.  ;)

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Posted 08 April 2006 - 10:15 PM

On a lighter note. . . guess what this one's about:

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Posted 08 April 2006 - 11:50 PM

sorry that i havent been in sooner. but now that i've read them all i love them. a little dark but i love the last one the most. good work baby E. keep it up .
:-* :-* :-* :-*



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Posted 09 April 2006 - 02:35 AM

I truely appriciate your gift of poetry. your soul is not alone! :'( :-*

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Posted 28 April 2006 - 11:54 PM

Your a artist and a poet! Very impressive! ;)

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