[Num_nuts]

Here is a good idea, Girl Scouts!! You do not see Girl Scout fantasy played out that often in comics or adult material. I think it would be a great new series to add to Jab’s list of comics.

I would call the comic “Blueberry Scouts“. It would have (four or) five main characters who are newbie’s in the Girl Scouts. Each character would have a different personality and experience in the scouts. They would ultimately become friends and take on new and erotic adventures through Harpton town.

One scenario could be the Girl Scout Leader drive the girls out for a door-to-door cookie sell and encounter potential buyers who are more interested in the girls then their cookies.
•      One girl wants to sale the most cookies so, she bargains with her customer by giving a HJ or BJ and for her service, she sales 10 boxes of cookies.
•      One girl meets a couple who invite the girl in, so they could pay her for the cookies. While in the house, she stumbles upon a room filled with sex toys and costumes. Not knowing what they are. She assumes that the couple likes to dress up or they are apart of a play. The girl asks if the stuff in the room are meant for a play and can she watch them perform for her. The couple aroused at the idea of them performing in front of the girl, decided to do so.
•      Two girls go to a house filled with boys they know from school. They are trick into giving BJs and getting their pussy eaten and then afterwards, the boys end up being cheapskates and not buying their cookies or just giving less money for the cookies then there actually worth.
•      Another girl has trouble-selling cookies so she asks her Scout Leader for some help but instead the Scout Leader helps her off with her uniform and performs some hot Lesbian action.

This scenario would be played-out within 2-3 issues, giving every girl their time to shine. In addition, would be titled like this[ch61672] Blueberry Scout – How does my Cookies Taste? Issue one, two, three etc.


I will add some more scenarios ideas later on or if you got some yourself, please add your Suggestions.

So, what do you think? :-?

[boogabear]

:o WOW! this really cool, i would love to see jab start a new series involving girlscouts.

but he could incorporate this idea in ay papi or farm lessons too. JAB! i hope your not too busy to do this.

getting horny thinking about it.( Hmmmm, JAded-Blue, Enigmawing, Goblin_72, OnlyAnnie, Zantha,  LovelyLittleKat, ElysiumBliss, and JAB's daughter
"Sara"(who will for ever look like Penny(Gadget), just picturing all of them in skimpy uniforms sitting around a campfire telling spooky stories.  ::)

Hmmm....

[kalcium]

I have been working on a comic since before December.  I'm kinda at a writer's/ artist block moment, but have six pages sketched out. ;D

[Num_nuts]

so whats the story about? where are U stuck at?

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I have been working on a comic since before December.  I'm kinda at a writer's/ artist block moment, but have six pages sketched out. ;D

[Ash78]

Yeah I rember the bumper sticker I saw that says "I got kicked out of cub scouts for eatting a brownie".

Some one told me that was dirty then I told them: "Hay at least its the same age group. Didn't say anything for getting kick out of the yacht club or C.C.C. (California Conservation Core)" .

[fannum]

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Here is a good idea, Girl Scouts!! You do not see Girl Scout fantasy played out that often in comics or adult material. I think it would be a great new series to add to Jab’s list of comics.

[size=12][b]I would call the comic “Blueberry Scouts“. It would have (four or) five main characters who are newbie’s in the Girl Scouts.

One scenario could be the Girl Scout Leader drive the girls out for a door-to-door cookie sell and encounter potential buyers who are more interested in the girls then their cookies.

So, what do you think? :-?

An enticing idea, and we're looking forward to seeing it played out.

If you will forgive a constructive hint, get someone to read your copy before publishing. You have some minor common language issues that should not detract from a good cartoon.

Cheers and good luck

[kalcium]

Num_nuts posted:

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so whats the story about? where are U stuck at?

Uh, topic... I'm stuck after the first encounter.  It's not that I'm really stuck, it's more I have so many ideas I don't know which I should do next. :-/

[Harlander]

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It's not that I'm really stuck, it's more I have so many ideas I don't know which I should do next. :-/

Have you tried writing down each idea on an index card or a piece of paper and rearranging them until you find an order you're happy with? I've had to do that sometimes with my own comics...

[fannum]

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It's not that I'm really stuck, it's more I have so many ideas I don't know which I should do next. :-/

Have you tried writing down each idea on an index card or a piece of paper and rearranging them until you find an order you're happy with? I've had to do that sometimes with my own comics...

I've done some comic style manuals, etc. (makes technical issues or regs less onerous!)

Found it easiest to do simple (make that crude) sketches detailing the action with word balloons, etc. One 5X8 card for each panel. Then could lay them out on table: changing orientation, deleting, leaving gaps, etc until it took form. Kind of a visual guy I guess.

I could work out pages this way, using copier to enlarge or reduce panels or shift orientation. Could do this MUCH easier with any graphics program.

Played with vacation photos and word balloons and captions once, and also an anniversary picture album.

Cheers

[Elysium Bliss]

I think the Girl Scouts idea is actually quite good. Adding the Jab girls would be a positive as well! Nice one!!! ;D

[fannum]

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I think the Girl Scouts idea is actually quite good. Adding the Jab girls would be a positive as well! Nice one!!! ;D

Those poor mall rats need to get out more!

[Yallknowme]

Well ya can't have Girl Scouts without Aveta and me! We'll sell those cookies alright! I don't mind working hard if I have to!

[fannum]

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Well ya can't have Girl Scouts without Aveta and me! We'll sell those cookies alright! I don't mind working hard if I have to!

. . . those cookies or your cookies?

Put me down for a box each!

[Yallknowme]

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Well ya can't have Girl Scouts without Aveta and me! We'll sell those cookies alright! I don't mind working hard if I have to!

. . . those cookies or your cookies?

Put me down for a box each!

Well if you want to get technical, I would be the cookies you're referring to, but my price is kinda high. Aveta makes all the decisions I'm just the cunt! ;D

[gwen_gypsygirl]

Kalcium e-mail me, I love Girl Scout fantasies and I can probably help.