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Posted 16 January 2012 - 12:17 PM

I thought about doing the story myself, but then I found out that I'm not as creative as I thought, but the main concept remained in my head, so I thought to share it with the community, and hopefuly see a comic that is at least simillar to my idea.
The plot should take place in England, victorian era. It is essential that everything happens in Essex, for obvious reasons ;). We should have one lord and his only daughter as main characters. Presence of mother is optional, perhaps it is for the best to have her deceased, so that we can explain the passionate connection between the lord and his daughter. And it would be good to have a historic comeback to that first night between them two in one of the later episodes, just like it was done in Star Wars. Since it is a lords residence it should have a lot of servants working in it. Myriad of family connections offers a lot of in between stories. There should be episodes with orgies that lord organises with other blue bloods. It should be somewhat simillar to Eyes Wide Shut (a movie with Tom Cruise and Nicole Kidman) orgy scenes. Masks are mandatory. And daughter is always present, masked and unnoticed for who she really is by other attendants. Daughter shouldn't be naive as most of current jab female characters are. She should be calculated and evil, sexually depraved, greedy and arogant. Seduction of other lords can make a whole lot of plot to the story going on. Lord should, at one point, start addopting girls from the orphanage, age as his daughter, under the cover of chairity work with an intention to make himself more cock-hungry little whores. The outline of his real intention is proper education and a chance to develop talent, so he creates Lord Essex Academy or whatever you want to call it. Introduction of his students to the purpose they are about to serve starts very slow. They are first exposed to the sexlife of the lord and his daughter through hearing them at nights. Later, they would be called on individual interviews with the lord, concerning their sucsess at school. They are not aware of the fact that beneth lords desk is his daughter giving him blowjob. Again they can't see, but they can hear the sounds of throat to cock contact, while the conversation remains strictly formal. The most curious ones then get introduced to the situation even further. This time the daughter takes actions, asking the girls if they want to see something really interesting, waking them in the middle of the night. Passionate lesbian scenes occur. Then they progress to the lords chambers. Girl is blidfolded, asked to kneel and then gets introducet with the lords familly jewles. Threesome time. Blindfold remains the whole time. I forgot to add that the warden of the orphanage is convinced into cooperation by getting a blowjob from lord's daughter. His silence is additionaly secured with gold. The scene is very simmilar to the scene of private interviews that students had with the lord. It is essential that the daughter likes gangbanging and facial, which should spice up the orgy scenes. During the time a few lords should be exposed as daughter fuckers, so that the more private orgies can be organised in which there will be no masks necessary and daughter's sexual preferences can get actualised.
That's about all I could come up with. Sorry for the conceptual approach and for the bad English. I hope something at least simmilar to this story could wind up being a real jabcomic one day. Cheers.
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Posted 16 January 2012 - 07:28 PM

Wow. I like this idea. Kind of like Von Gotha's "Troubles with Janice" series. The Victorian age lends for some chance for serious debauchery!
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Posted 18 January 2012 - 09:40 AM

Yeah, but only if debauchery doesn't consider s & m. I don't think it is a trademark of jabcomix. Stench of consensuality must be always present, imo. And the story has capacities for a lot of episodes.
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Posted 18 January 2012 - 11:03 AM

Hmmm. Somewhat reminiscent of a movie I remember...I like the concept though.
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