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"Twinning" (working title)
Tia Meeks is a gorgeous, popular, African-American, teenager. Tay (Tayvon) is her fraternal twin brother, star basketball player, and even more popular. Their parents are divorced and they live with their father, Luther. Luther is a former professional football player. They live in a very nice, large house with all the things a teenager would love to have: pool, hot tub, workout room, sauna, basketball court, etc. Luther remarried a beautiful, blonde, caucasian Jillian. She is a former model and a skimpy dresser. She has a daughter from a previous marriage named Lisa who also lives with them. Guess what? She's hot also, somewhat of a rebel and a somewhat of a slut compared than her step-siblings. On a side note, their mother, Patricia, lives with her new husband, Paul (caucasian). Tay and Tia visit them occasionally.
1-The comic starts out with a little background information. Tay and Tia are very close siblings as you would expect from fraternal twins. And like most teenagers, pick on each other often. Tia best friend is her step-sister Lisa. Lisa has a growing crush on Tayvon, but he is mostly impartial to her.
2-It's a sunny Friday afternoon. In the Meeks household we see Luther and Jillian carrying several suitcases, getting ready to leave for the weekend getaway. They say their goodbyes and walk out the door. The second the door closes, Lisa asks Tay when the party starts. "Nine." he replies as he walks out the back door to return to his friends playing basketball out back. Lisa and Tia head upstairs.
3-Tia enters her room and closes the door. She jumps on the bed, grabs the phone and proceeds to call her boyfriend, Matt. Matt is the star quarterback at school. She asks him what time he's coming over to the party. Matt responds by telling Tia this relationship isn't working out. He says he needs "more" out of a girlfriend. We then see Matt getting "serviced" by a couple of cheerleaders. Crushed and confused Tia hangs up.
4-Outside, Tay and his friends are shooting hoops and goofing around. One of Tay's friends, Cory, asks jokingly, if he can hook up with his sister. "You didn't just ask me that!" says Tay visibly angered and ready to fight. Cory backtracks immediately saying he meant Lisa. Cooling down Tay says "Whatever, man. I don't care." as they go back to playing.
5-Lisa enters Tia's room to see her upset and asks what's wrong. Tia tells her about Matt, then cries into her pillow. Lisa attempts to cheer her up but it doesn't work so well. Lisa then says she's gone and done something crazy and lifts her shirt showing nipple piercings. Shocked and interested, Tia looks closer.
6-"You crazy bitch! Didn't that hurt?" asks Tia. "Fuck yeah but they're starting to feel better." she responds. "You better not let our parents or you'll be in deep shit." says Tia as she gives one of the piercings a light lift with her finger. "Easy. They're still sore." says Lisa as she pulls her shirt back down. "You should think about doing it." Lisa says as she pokes Tia's nipple through her shirt. "No fucking way!" giggles Tia as she pulls he boob away.
7-Now that Tia's calmed down from her earlier dilemma, Lisa tries to convince her to move on from Matt. "There'll be a bunch of hotties here tonight. We should go to the mall and get a new swimsuit to show off that hot body of yours." says Lisa as she pulls up Tia's shirt, showing her sizable tits. "Get back bitch! Fine, I'll go only if you quit molesting me." giggles Tia.
8-Several hours later Tia and Lisa return from the mall. Tia's unsure about her new bikini purchase. She throws the bags on her bed and tells Lisa she's going to take a shower. Lisa heads to her room for some "alone time" that includes fantasizing about glimpses she's had of Tay's sizable dick and wondering how big it can get.
9-Tia walks into the bathroom just as Tay is getting out of the shower. Tia screams. Tay startled, slips on the wet floor and falls to the ground exposing his large member to his sister. "Christ! Don't you ever knock?!" yells Tay as he jumps back into the shower to wrap a towel around his waist. "I'm so sorry. Are you okay?" asks Tia shocked and embarrassed. "I'm fine." he responds as he leaves the bathroom in the towel.
10-Tia gets undressed bewildered by the incident and gets in the shower. Her brother and her have never been shy around each other and are often running around the house in various stages of undress. But she hasn't seen him naked since they were much younger. She starts to clean herself. Soon she's thinking about Lisa's nipples and starts to get aroused. With one hand between her legs and the other twisting her nipple, she suddenly thinks about Tay's cock and cums instantly. Confused and ashamed by the whole ordeal, she gets out of the shower.
11-As Tia's getting ready for the party, she has a crazy thought of how anyone could fit such a large cock in their mouth. She then thinks about Matt and wonders about her own oral skills. She gets up and goes to Lisa's room just as she's putting away her "toy" and pulling up her shorts. "Lisa, I got a question for you." "Sure, what is it?" "Are you good at giving head?" "What the fuck? Are you serious?" says Lisa surprised. "I think that might be one of the reasons Matt dumped me." "Aw girl, hold on a sec." Lisa runs down stairs to the kitchen and returns with a couple of popsicles. She shows her a couple of tips including deepthroating the popsicle to the bottom of the stick. Tia tries her popsicle with mixed results. "Don't worry about making it as far as me. Just keep practicing. These work great, they just don't last very long." says Lisa.
12-Several hours later, the party is going well. The hot tub and pool are getting some use. A keg stand and a few beer bongs are happening on the back patio. Drinks are getting mixed in the kitchen and there's some dancing going on in the living room. Tay and some friends are chatting with a few girls. One of them is named Carmen, a tall, Puerto Rican hottie that Tay has had his eye on for some time. After some playful conversation they sneak off to the game room to play a game of pool.
13-Tia is all dolled up and grabbing a lot of attention as she goes outside to see what Lisa is up to. "Hey girl, whatchya doin'?" she asks Lisa with a smirk. Lisa is off to the side of the party, pulling down her blouse and showing Cory, Tay's friend, her new piercings. "Showing off my party favors. Hey when do we get to see you in that new bikini?" "I'm pretty sure I'm gonna take it back. Plus, I'm not really in the partying mood, honestly. Have you seen Tay around?"
14-In the game room... "I told you I'd win, so I guess you have to pay up." says Tay with a sly smirk. Carmen gladly pulls her shirt off releasing her spectacular tits, walks up to Tay and jerks his trousers down. Her eyes double in size and she lets out a gasp and Tay's growing member bumps her in the chin. "Fucking awesome." she says as she starts to work his cock with her expert tongue. Tay isn't gonna last much longer, but an interrupting "Tay, you in here?" as the door opens, halting his orgasm. "On shit, I'm so sorry, Tay!" yelps Tia as her eyes are fixed on his slobbery cock. She quickly turns around and closes the door. "Shit." says Tay as he pulls up his pants.
15-Tia finds herself propped against the closed door. Light headed with one hand cupping her breast and the other slide down her pants. She gathers herself and proceeds back to the party. Outside, off to the side of the house, we see Lisa showing her deepthroating skills to Cory. He busts a nut in her mouth, but when she wants to fuck, he tells her he's spent and leaves.
16-Tia walks into the living room where a group of people are grinding on the dance floor. Matt, her recent ex, comes walking through the front door, with one of the cheerleaders from earlier. Tia starts yelling at him for dumping her and coming to their party with this bitch. He mouths off to her as Tay enters the room from the hallway and Lisa enters from outside. Tay gets in his face as the crowd watches and Lisa is held back from attacking Matt. "Get the fuck out of here before I kick your face in!" screams Tay as Carmen and Tia hold him back. Matt begrudgingly leaves. As he and his girl walk to the car, he's on his cell phone, "Yeah police, I'd like to report a party going on."
17-Fifteen or so minutes later, Tay's about to get in the hot tub with Carmen as Tia and Lisa watch from a distance. "I fucking love our brother. I wish he would have kicked Matt's ass, though." rambles Lisa with a slur. "He looks so fucking hot with Carmen. Do you think he's gonna fuck her? Lucky, bitch." "Okay, Lees, I think it's time for you to go to bed. You've had enough. Let's go." says Tia as she helps Lisa to her room. Moments later the door bell rings. "Cops!" someone yells as party-goers starts fleeing.
18-Tay talks to the two cops in the house. He knows them. They're a couple of younger officers and cool towards Tay. But they still tell him the party's over and everyone has to go including Carmen. Tia walks in as they're leaving. "Guess the parties over, huh?" asks Tia. "Yep." "Carmen left too?" "Yep." responds Tay as he grabs a bottle of liquor and walks outside and jumps into the hot tub. Tia feels sorry for her brother.
19-As Tay sits in the hot tub swigging on his bottle, he looks up, wide-eyed, spitting out his drink. Tia comes walking over to the tub, towel in hand, wearing her new bikini that barely covers her intimate spots. "Mind if I join you?" she says as she lowers herself into the tub. "Not at all." says a bewildered Tay as she yanks the bottle from his hand. Her dark nipples can be seen through the now transparent swimsuit as she takes a swig from the bottle. "I think Matt called the cops." she says. "Yeah probably, the pussy." replies Tay as he grabs the bottle back. "Sorry it ruined your night with Carmen." says Tia with big puppy eyes and erect nipples. "Don't even blame yourself, sis." smiles Tay as he hands the bottle back. "For the most part, it was a good night."
20-Twenty minutes pass and we see the two siblings giggling next to each other in the hot tub, finishing off the bottle. They're laughing about some vague story about when they were younger. Tay has his arm around Tia and her hand is resting on his leg underwater. His cock has slightly made its way out of the leg of his trunks, near Tia's hand. Tia gathers herself and apologizes for interrupting him and Carmen earlier. "It's okay. Really." She turns and gives Tay a kiss on the temple and her nipple escapes her top. Tay notices and his cock springs out of the water and into the palm of her hand. They both stare at his cock in her hand for a moment and then slowly pull away, apologizing to each other sheepishly and get out of the tub.
21-They both walk in drying off and Tay plops down on the couch. Tia cuddles up next to him, "Thanks for always being there, Tay." She leans in and gives him a slightly more serious kiss on the mouth than a sister should. "You know I love ya, sis." he responds. His cock has slide out of the waist of his trunks. Tia gently grabs it with both hands and they kiss again, this time with a little tongue. "I love you too." she says as she rests her head on his shoulder. They both pass out with her hands still holding his dick. End of issue 1.
So what do y'all think. Of course any of it could be modified. I'm not even big into interracial comics, I just think it would be something new and different enough, yet with the popular incest theme of many of the other comics. I definitely see it being a colorful world with almost endless possibilities. Other characters could be Lisa's father. Maybe Lisa has a sibling that lives with him. Tay and Tia could have step/half sibling(s) that live with their mother. Just throwing out ideas and thanks for reading.
-arbury
This post has been edited by Arbury: 07 October 2011 - 09:33 PM
