[Erikon]

It's like a creamy wet dream! Lovely work!

[subarashi89]

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updated


1st page, 2nd panel, pa's face expression, 3rd panel bubble glitch
other than that, cover and back page minor tweaked, etc


and many thanks for everyone above, i'm really have fun doing this...cut the talk... VOTE US !!!!!!!!![img]http://forum.jabcomix.com/public/style_emoticons/default/13841602.gif[/img]
P.S: let me know if its preferable post in separate picture, since upload is hell for me

[subarashi89]

Added lot of bubble thingy and some onomatopoeia(WTH), after viewing Karmagik's and Sinope's entries.
Thanks to both of you, you saved my day

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and to all tired of plenty changes of this entry...
sorry bout that, and i promised this is the final version

and again... VOTE US MATE!!!

[karmagik]

A great looking comic. I love your visual style. Its quite unique and striking. And I'm very pleased my comic could make some influence on you. Hopefully in a positive way.

[JKR666]

I just want to say thank you so much for participating in this contest. It was a great opportunity to see your range of talent and how fast you can get it out. I'll keep your work on file if i have any work i need done.

[Sinope!]

JKR's Pencils + Sub's Colors = All sorts of awesome.

[subarashi89]

hell YEA, just lemme noe if i can be any help[img]http://forum.jabcomix.com/public/style_emoticons/default/13841602.gif[/img]

[fannum]

In a contest that was full of talented artistic expression and exotically warped story lines, yours stands out. You were lucky to find a writer worthy of your skills, and rendered a simple story with the surprise and delight factor that drew me to this site years back.

You took a simple few minutes, fully understanding the concept of a prequel (that others ignored) and stretched them and massaged the experience to almost seem to have wandered in JAB's imagination.

I delight in your muted colors, so appropriate to the stolen minutes between a frustrated father and his nymphet daughter. Then you gave us a dizzying expression of viewing angles, closeups, and in the process took framing to new levels. The hint of Clevus and Nellie in Rita Mae's eye reflection in the last scene was delightful.

Thank you Sub, and if I had not been obligated to vote for our effort, I guarantee that you would have received another. I cannot understand why so few others did not recognize the blast of fresh air into this group that you are providing.

Cheers