[pussylovin81]

Robert stared at the clock with so much hatred in class.He hated school no friends,the rules,and the fucking teachers.Far from nerd and too lazy to be a jock. It was a usual day all the guys were around Tiffany. Ah, Tiffany the blonde white girl with the cute smile, the busty tits, and an ass so big and juicy. Everyone from jocks to nerds wanted to fuck the shit out of her but she wouldn't give it up no matter who it was.She always wore small skirts with tight shirts that just made her tits pop out. Robert knew she was a tease so he didn't bother. When, the bell rang he jumped out his seat and ran towards the door until Tiffany got in his way.He bumped into her from behind,he felt his dick pressed against her ass. Robert was afraid she would yell at him,when all of a sudden she looked back and winked at him and walked away.

On the way home he kept replaying that moment in his head until his cock was crying out for Tiffany's sweet ass.Soon as he got home he ran to his room got his lotion and tissue.He then started pounding his big hard cock up and down,with precum being spit out he kept pounding until the knock on the door.
"Dammit,what the fuck!"he said as he rushed towards the door with nothing but a towel on his waist."Yeah,can i help you"robert mumbled with his eyes closed."Oh im sorry is this a bad time?" Robert's eyes popped open it was tiffany. Still wearing her school clothes with her backpack on,holding a clipboard."Umm no i'm sorry come on in how can i help you"he said."Well im doing this program for the elderly to get into college,and it just so happen your grandmother's name is on my list"she replied looking down at his still raging hard cock.He had forgotten about the towel"oh im sorry, if you want i can go get dressed,plus my grandmother isn't here right now." She was curious to see it so she knew how to make it possible.She slowly moved her finger around her cleavage.Robert trying so hard not to stare,stared as his cock lifted the towel away from his body."Wow" she said smiling straight at the towel as she sat down on the couch. He knew she was looking and tried so hard not to get hard but couldn't help it he looked away.She then quickly pulled the towel off him to reveal his thick hard cock."Holy shit" he said shockingly.She slowly stroked him up and down for a few seconds before putting her lips on his head.She sucked all the precum that was on the tip of his cock.She began going faster and faster until the sound of keys opening the lock was heard.Robert quickly put the towel back on. It was his grandmother she went straight to her room. "You wanna go up to my room?"he asked tiffany."No, i really need to get going"she replied as she walked towards the door.But,before she opened the door she gave him a kiss on the cheek and whipered in his ear"F.Y.I that was my first time sucking dick unless you count bananas,thanks"as she walked to her car and left robert with the worst case of blue balls.

The next day he was in class he said nothing but for some weird reason Tiffany wouldn't stop looking toward his direction.The bell rang and he left as he walking towards the doors to the outside an arm pulled him into the girl's restroom."what the fuck!"he yelled until he seen it was Tiffany unzipping his pants.They moved into a stall where she quickly started pulling his cock down her throat.She then opened her shirt to reveal her busty tits.After a couple minutes of his cock widening her throat she stood up to pull her panties down still wearing her skirt. she bent over in front of him to show off her big ass. Robert started fingering her pussy from behind.She Moaned silently getting soaking wet.She then begged him to fill her pussy up with his thick hard cock.Robert got up bent her over more,then moved his hard cock along her pussy to tease her when she all of a sudden pushed his cock in."Holy Shit your Tight!"he yelled.Finally having his fatasy come true didn't hesitate to go deep inside her as she moaned and asked for more"Faster"she yelled.He felt her pussy stretching with every thrust.Then the restroom door opened,it was some snotty ugly bitches,luckily for Robert they just walked in to look into the mirror and left.He returned to stretching Tiffany's pussy out more and more as his thrust got faster he felt his cock get warmer.He then turned her around picked her up and placed her on his wet hot cock.Bouncing up and down she moaned in his ear"Robert i was wondering when you were going to fuck me."Hearing that made Robert shove his cock deeper inside her."Fuck,im bout to cum!"he yelled.Tiffany remembered how good his precum tasted moaned in his ear"Shoot it in my mouth Robert shoot that huge load in my mouth!"She got on her knees and deepthroated up and down so fast that all his cum shot to the back of her throat.It kept shooting out of Robert's cock,thick hot cum all in her mouth as she continued to suck the cum out of his cock.She moved it around her mouth before taking one big gulp and swallowing it all.

They then got dressed and walked out to the outside.She whispered in his ear"Robert just to let you know your the second guy i've ever fucked"."No wonder you were so tight,would it be rude if i called you my girl?"he asked.She laughed then told him"haha yeah,and no i mean your my man now so since i'm your girl and your my man same time tomorrow?"His eyes popped open as he asked "sure,but at my house right?" As she went closer to kiss him she whispered"of course at your house,and if you if you play your cards right you could be the first to shove his big dick in my tight virgin asshole."

[disclaimer]

hey dude nice story. but it was a bit hard to read. it might be a good idea to break up the big paragraphs in to smaller section.

any way

cheers

[Sinope!]

Great story PussyLovin'. I think we've all had our high school fantasy girls... nice to read a story about how we wished our secret crushes turned out.

Punctuation and proper story spacing will make it easier to read... other than that, great addition.

[pussylovin81]

:comeon:wow well im glad you two liked it and i will try to make my stories shorter and with better spelling

[Veediotartist]

I really like this story! Need to see it in comic form.

[pussylovin81]

BIG THANKS MAN I'M GLAD SOMEONE ELSE LIKES IT MAYBE SOMEONE COULD TAKE UP THE CHALLENGE AND ACTUALLY DO IT

[Veediotartist]

Hmm... I have been challenged... Let me start up some doodles and see where it goes from there.

[pussylovin81]

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT HOW LONG YOU BEEN DRAWING?

[Veediotartist]

For years, however my style has just started to bloom. You can see my works from last year on my deviant art page. http://veediotartist.deviantart.com/ I will be posting new stuff in the coming week.

[pussylovin81]

hell yea i wanna see what you have in store

[Veediotartist]

I've started on charcter concepts. I can't wait to show you what I've got! I work the next couple of days though so it will be later in the week.

[Veediotartist]

Hey there! I just wanted to run this by you before I started on any of it. I mentioned I've been toying with character designs, but I forgot to mention I started on turning your story into a script. The thing about this process is that I take what is written and add or subtract to make it work in a comic form.

This is Scene One. Your Original Writing with paragraph breaks I added.

(Scene 1: School)
Robert stared at the clock with so much hatred in class.He hated school no friends,the rules,and the fucking teachers.Far from nerd and too lazy to be a jock.

It was a usual day all the guys were around Tiffany. Ah, Tiffany the blonde white girl with the cute smile, the busty tits, and an ass so big and juicy. Everyone from jocks to nerds wanted to fuck the shit out of her but she wouldn't give it up no matter who it was.

She always wore small skirts with tight shirts that just made her tits pop out. Robert knew she was a tease so he didn't bother. When, the bell rang he jumped out his seat and ran towards the door until Tiffany got in his way.

He bumped into her from behind,he felt his dick pressed against her ass. Robert was afraid she would yell at him,when all of a sudden she looked back and winked at him and walked away.

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Now here's my script based entirely around those four paragraphs that I have called "Scene One"


Scene 1: School

(Overview of Calss)
(Focus: Robert, looking lazily at the clock)
(Focus: Clock 2:58)
(Focus: Robert, grumbling eye-roll)

Robert(Thinking): "Oh, come on! Man this is

rediculous!"

(Focus: Robert looking frumpled)

Robert (Thinking): "Man, school is such a drag. I don't

even see the point of it. The teachers don't want to be

here and some people just don't fit in."

(Focus: Two Jocks being douches)

Robert (Thinking): "You've got the jocks. Ultimate

Douches. Honestly they don't do anything I couldn't do.

Not that I really want to. Why do the work when you can

get someone else to do it for you?"

(Focus: Two Nerds talking calculus)

Robert (Thinking): "Speaking of 'someone else'. Nerds.

Heh... If I were half as brainy as them, I'd be eating

trash cans every day."

(Focus: Robert looking a bit glum)

Robert (Thinking): "No, I'm just the average 'Everyman'

Nothing too special or worthless about me. I'm just...

Average."

(Focus: Robert gazing to his right)
(Focus: Tiffany sitting with a book)

Robert (Thinking): "Now there's someone who is anything but

average! Man, and you know she knows it too!"

(Focus: Tiffany's legs)

Robert (Thinking): "She's always wearing those short

tight skirts that accent that beautifully plump ass!"

(Focus: Tiffany's chest)

Robert (Thinking): "And those tits! Are those

regulation size? She's always wearing those tight

shirts that they just buldge out!"

(Focus: Mr. Deeds the teacher staring at her)

Robert (Thinking): "Fuck, even Mr. Deeds can't help but

stare."

(Focus: Robert looking discomfored)

Robert (Thinking): Oh, crap, and just before the bell!

Hell, what can I say, a girl with that kind of body..."

(Overview Class, Bell ringing)
(Focus: Robert getting out of his seat, throwing his

bag over his shoulder)

Robert (Thinking): "Man, I've got to get home before

anyone notices I'm carrying a rod the size of

California in my pants!"

(Splash, Robert bumpping into Tiffany as she's bending over, Tiffany giving a surprised expression)
(Focus: Robert's Pants, errect dick between ass cheeks)
(Focus: Robert's surprised face)

Robert (Thinking): "Oh, Fuck!"

(Focus: Tiffany looking backward)
(Focus: Tiffany winking with a smirk)
(Focus: Tiffany walking away in the foreground Robert shocked)
(Focus: Robert's shocked face)

Robert (Thinking): "W--Wha--Huh?"

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The next scene is him walking home. This is pretty much how I'll be working with your story. If you're still interested, I'd still love to continue working with it. I would also like any other information you can give me about Robert. Ethnicity, mainly. If that's not an issue, then I've already got a look for him in the works.

I hope to hear from you soon, and please feel free to inform me of any changes you'd like made or anything you don't quite agree with. I'm not re-writing your story, just making the transition to comic-form. That does take a bit of editing, of which I'd love for you to be involved with as much as you'd like. Or, if you'd just like to see what I come up with on my own, that's good too!

-G. Deeds (Veediotartist)


PS: I attempted to send this via message, but was unable to so I thought I'd just post it here.

[pussylovin81]

FUCKIN BEAUTIFUL WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN SOUNDS FUCKIN AWSOME AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT TWO THUMBS UP!!

[Veediotartist]

Awesome! I think this is going to be the beginning of something great!

[pussylovin81]

i agree