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Posted 28 August 2011 - 03:13 AM

As mr.johnson layed on his deathbed in a hopsital with his wife of twenty years by his side. Mostly everyone in the room knew he wouldn't make to see the next day. Mr.johnson spent most of his life working and spending time with his family,a kind man to everyone even the nurses felt bad for him. As his wife was sleeping he stared at the ceiling thinking. He then woke his wife and asked her for one last thing before he passed on. He asked to have sex for one last time,His wife shocked shed a tear knowing at her age it wouldn't be so great and plus Mr. Johnson had erectile dysfunction. Mr. Johnson sadly accepted the fact he wouldn't get to have a woman for his last time on earth. His wife with sorrow said goodbye to her husband and left. Mr. Johnson stayed awake for a couple hours until he seen his door open. A women was at the door wearing nothing but a white see through gown. At first he thought it was the nurse checking on him so he looked away. She slowly walked towards his bed and turned of the television. Then mr.johnson heard his first name whispered into his ear. No one ever really called him by his first name but close friends. The room was pitch black as he felt her warm small hands caress his body then slowly lowered towards his soft cock. Unexpectaly he felt it started to get hard it hadn't been hard in years.as she stroked him up and down he moaned and groaned as it was fully erected. She the kissed him on the cheek before she put her moist lips on his hard 9 inch cock she teased his tip with her tongue for a few seconds to keep him erected. The old man was amazed as to feel the back of the young woman's throat. After minutes of deepthroating and head bobbing she revealed what was under the gown of hers , as she turned the light on the side of the bed on. Beauty covered her all over with a sweet innocence to her. She was a brunette with a light tan skin tone. Mr. Johnson was doing nothing but staring as his still erected cock was slowly throwing bits of precum. She licked the precum off the tip before sliding her tight wet pussy over his cock. As he slowly entered her he moan as well as her. She rode his cock from all the way to tip to lowest part. He put his hard-working hands on her busty tits as they bounced. After twenty minutes he felt her orgasm. She kissed him on the lips and got off she then went put her tight lips on his still erected cock she went on for ten minutes, as if he gotten a energy recharge. Mr. Johnson bent her over seeing her amazing tight ass he slid his cock into her. She gave a loud moan,every time he trusted into her after taking so much pleasure she came again as she stuck her middle finger in her moist little asshole. Mr.johnson seeing what she was doing and never performed anal before he was curious. He asked in a whisper if she would mind she moaned no . Mr. Johnson then slowly shoved his hard cock inside her asshole. "Mmmm"she moaned he love how tight she was as his thrust became faster and deeper. She felt his cock throbbing he was about to cum. Not knowing where to cum Mr. Johnson not stopping asked where she wanted his load. She knew he couldn't hold it any longer."CUM INSIDE ME!!"she yelled as soon as he heard that Mr.johnson gave one deep thrust before unloading his warm hot cum deep inside the beautiful woman. They both moaned very loud before Mr.johnson then hit his head to the pillow. The young woman gave him a kiss on the forehead got dressed and walked to door opened it and blew him one last kiss before his eyes closed to sleep. The next morning he awoke to the nurses and doctors all around him. "Mr. Johnson i have wonderful news you can go home, your cured after months of being here you can go congrats" the doctor said with a smile. Before leaving Mr. Johnson went to talk to the main nurse and asked if she had she seen a brunette woman enter his room last night. She answered no but that he wasn't the first cured elderly man to ask about the same woman.
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Posted 29 August 2011 - 09:02 PM

A sweet story. If we could all go this way. Maybe you should reformat it with paragraphs so it is a little easier to read though.

Well done! We'd love to read more ideas you have.
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Posted 31 August 2011 - 05:16 AM

Aw thanks man appreciate the feedback and i'm glad you thought it was good
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