[Marksman]

kalamitus, on 30 December 2011 - 06:53 PM, said:

personally the story to continue the above should get started when he tries to get back something to his mother but she rejections, before it's aunt tries to profit from alex to seduce him not lost to Helen who in a competition between sisters alex tries to seduce any cost even falling back into what had sworn not pass again. sorry for my bad inglish

You're right. Your english is bad, very bad.
Can you rewrite your proposal.

[kalamitus]

in spanish to see if we can understand something.. i personally think that should be able to continue the story in the following manner: that Alex will try to convince again helen but she rejected it, and his aunt taking advantage of their sadness to begin romancing. when helen gives an account of this starts a competition with his sister to see who can take him to bed even when Helen swore that it would not be repeated.



pues en español a ver si asi se entiende algo.. personalmente creo que debiera poder continuar la historia de la siguiente manera: que Alex tratara de convencer de nuevo a helen pero que ella lo rechazara, y que la tia aprovechando su tristeza empezara a seducirlo. cuando helen se da cuenta de esto inicia una competencia con su hermana por ver quien puede llevárselo a la cama aun cuando Helen juro que no se repetiria.

[Sinope!]

I'll have to disagree. I think that some other comics are getting watered down from too many characters and story lines (ie. MHAN). Keep the focus on Alex and Helen. The next issue should be his continued facination with her ass and get in the more extreme realm of fingering, object penetration... maybe fisting? It would be nice to see the continued obsession of Alex and the reluctance of Helen.

[JKR666]

Wait what? MHAN has too many characters???

[Sinope!]

I'm not complaining... fully enjoy MHAN. I'm just saying, it would be nice to have a comic focus solely on a few characters.

[JKR666]

Well of all the non parody ongoing series here, MHAN has the least number of characters. (outside grumpy old man jefferson which dropped two issues in one)

[Marksman]

kalamitus, on 30 December 2011 - 11:56 PM, said:

in spanish to see if we can understand something.. i personally think that should be able to continue the story in the following manner: that Alex will try to convince again helen but she rejected it, and his aunt taking advantage of their sadness to begin romancing. when helen gives an account of this starts a competition with his sister to see who can take him to bed even when Helen swore that it would not be repeated.

pues en español a ver si asi se entiende algo.. personalmente creo que debiera poder continuar la historia de la siguiente manera: que Alex tratara de convencer de nuevo a helen pero que ella lo rechazara, y que la tia aprovechando su tristeza empezara a seducirlo. cuando helen se da cuenta de esto inicia una competencia con su hermana por ver quien puede llevárselo a la cama aun cuando Helen juro que no se repetiria.

ok that's more understandable.
A rivality between Helen and her sister? that's quite interesting.

[Sinope!]

JKR666, on 30 December 2011 - 09:55 PM, said:

Well of all the non parody ongoing series here, MHAN has the least number of characters. (outside grumpy old man jefferson which dropped two issues in one)

haha. Point taken. I guess I'm into just focusing on one or two people. I guess that's why my Little Lorna comic has just one character.

[Telgar]

In my opinion, jumping in with the Aunt and cousin right now is too fast. The story should concentrate around Alex's corruption of his mom, then once he has her loving his cock, they corrupt the Aunt who then helps them corrupt the cousin and maybe others. but each time the theme should be mainly about the current female who's ass he is trying to hit.

[rscc]

Telgar, on 02 January 2012 - 04:27 PM, said:

In my opinion, jumping in with the Aunt and cousin right now is too fast. The story should concentrate around Alex's corruption of his mom, then once he has her loving his cock, they corrupt the Aunt who then helps them corrupt the cousin and maybe others. but each time the theme should be mainly about the current female who's ass he is trying to hit.

I agree!! I think the focus should still be on Alex and Helen, but instead of Alex tricking or seducing her. The story could be about Helen not being able to get their sexual encounter out of her mind, remembering how good it felted and how hard Alex made her cum. Admitting to herself, she liked it and she want more!! This time like Alex did in the first dat ass, only it's Helen who ask Alex to do dat ass again!!

This post has been edited by rscc: 04 January 2012 - 03:45 PM

[Marksman]

Maybe we should read the following post of JAB: http://forum.jabcomi...post__p__142176

[Telgar]

Marksman, on 18 January 2012 - 10:06 AM, said:

Maybe we should read the following post of JAB: http://forum.jabcomi...post__p__142176

Yeah that quote has merit IF Jab had not done a pin up of the aunt and Cousin in action.

Telgar

[ajwe]

I think that all of the above are valid points and would make for a very interesting comic, but, of course, I think jab could take it another route. I think that the comic should continue on and show that Alex is living a normal kid's life, he finds a girl, starts to get really involved, and brings her home. HIs mom starts catching them having sex, she walks by his room and hears him pounding her ass, she walks in with her mouth around his cock. She starts realizing that she isn't over him and wants him back... And bam!! We have the inverse of Ay Papi hahah