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#1 User is offline   wok 

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Posted 18 May 2011 - 09:37 AM

Hey there everyone!

First let me say I'm a big fan of Jab's work and the work of a lot of these other artists here.

I figured this would be a good a place to post some of my recent stuff (Jab inspired):

[url="http://www.imagebam.com/image/768847132783017"][IMG]http://thumbnails41.imagebam.com/13279/768847132783017.jpg[/IMG][/url]

I had an idea for a comic strip, however this is my first attempt at anything like it. (It's much harder than I thought) Please let me know how it looks/reads, also if I should continue writing it. =)

[url="http://www.imagebam.com/image/4275a0132783019"][IMG]http://thumbnails13.imagebam.com/13279/4275a0132783019.jpg[/IMG][/url]


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Posted 18 May 2011 - 02:05 PM

Nice!
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Posted 18 May 2011 - 10:13 PM

Really nice work, that strip is awesome. I know what you mean about strips being hard, I've yet to really grasp my brain around paneling and proper pacing. But your's looks good! Keep it up.
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Posted 19 May 2011 - 05:23 AM

... since that's the way AP started, and has been used in MHAN, good source of inspiration!!

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Posted 19 May 2011 - 07:17 AM

View PostAnangel, on 18 May 2011 - 09:05 AM, said:

Nice!


Thank you, sir. :)

View PostLaz (Madefromlazers), on 18 May 2011 - 05:13 PM, said:

Really nice work, that strip is awesome. I know what you mean about strips being hard, I've yet to really grasp my brain around paneling and proper pacing. But your's looks good! Keep it up.


Thanks. I actually didn't notice this until I was finished but the width of the strip is waaay too narrow.. but I was probably going to re-do most of it anyway.


View Postfannum, on 19 May 2011 - 12:23 AM, said:

... since that's the way AP started, and has been used in MHAN, good source of inspiration!!

Cheers


Omg. I totally missed that.... :lol: ...must be where that idea came from, lol.

Oh well, that is just the first page-ish, I'm gonna change it around a bit it the future I think.

Anyway, here's a new drawing with a different approach to the 'inking' phase. Maybe I'll add a background later :P.

[url="http://www.imagebam.com/image/4e9315132912476"][IMG]http://thumbnails28.imagebam.com/13292/4e9315132912476.jpg[/IMG][/url]

Also here's one I was playing around with colors for a bit, I kinda like how it turned out.

[URL=http://www.imagebam.com/image/11c7e8132923079][IMG]http://thumbnails37.imagebam.com/13293/11c7e8132923079.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

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Posted 19 May 2011 - 07:21 PM

Lookin' good. What software are you using to color?
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Posted 20 May 2011 - 12:12 AM

View PostLaz (Madefromlazers), on 19 May 2011 - 02:21 PM, said:

Lookin' good. What software are you using to color?


It's all 100% photoshop, it's what I'm most familiar with.
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Posted 20 May 2011 - 12:23 AM

Photoshop bros unite!. I use SAI now to do color sometimes now though, but PS is what I've used the longest.

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 08:24 AM

Nice work man, looks good! :D
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Posted 21 May 2011 - 10:39 AM

View Postthisgirlluvsthatgirl, on 19 May 2011 - 10:49 PM, said:

i never even heard of that 1 :mellow:
any wayz nice comic it looks lik e alot of work! :blueee:


Thanks, I think I gotta spend more time figuring out the story and pacing before I draw out more.

View PostVibor, on 20 May 2011 - 03:24 AM, said:

Nice work man, looks good! :D


Thanks!

Anyway, here's something new with some crazy colors:

[url="http://www.imagebam.com/image/412151133204201"][IMG]http://thumbnails26.imagebam.com/13321/412151133204201.jpg[/IMG][/url]

I really gotta start drawing backgrounds :(

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Posted 22 May 2011 - 12:32 AM

Great pics, wok. Love your MILFy looking babes and the comic looks good so far. Hope to see more from you soon.
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Posted 23 May 2011 - 03:07 AM

I'm really enjoying your artwork. It looks great. I love the way you work with colors as well. I think the "crazy colors" on that last one worked out very well.

That pic of the blonde giving the blowjob is fantastic!

And I'd be very interested to see a next part of that comic you were working on. Either seeing what she was dreaming of, or what she does about the frustration of waking abruptly...
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Posted 23 May 2011 - 10:26 AM

View PostMF, on 21 May 2011 - 07:32 PM, said:

Great pics, wok. Love your MILFy looking babes and the comic looks good so far. Hope to see more from you soon.


Thanks!

View Postkarmagik, on 22 May 2011 - 10:07 PM, said:

I'm really enjoying your artwork. It looks great. I love the way you work with colors as well. I think the "crazy colors" on that last one worked out very well.

That pic of the blonde giving the blowjob is fantastic!

And I'd be very interested to see a next part of that comic you were working on. Either seeing what she was dreaming of, or what she does about the frustration of waking abruptly...


Haha, thanks!

I've decided to re-do almost everything about that comic, gonna head it a bit of a different direction entirely. Here's a draft of page 1. :D

[url="http://www.imagebam.com/image/8bd8df133478895"][IMG]http://thumbnails41.imagebam.com/13348/8bd8df133478895.jpg[/IMG][/url]

Let me know how it looks!

Also cleaned up my last pic a bit, gonna add a background too:

[url="http://www.imagebam.com/image/5b00bc133479263"][IMG]http://thumbnails32.imagebam.com/13348/5b00bc133479263.jpg[/IMG][/url]

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Posted 23 May 2011 - 12:32 PM

I don't know what you're hesitant about, your work is great. And I love your redo on the comic. Can't wait for more.
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Posted 24 May 2011 - 12:47 PM

View PostSpaceace, on 23 May 2011 - 07:32 AM, said:

I don't know what you're hesitant about, your work is great. And I love your redo on the comic. Can't wait for more.


Thanks, here's page 2. :D

[url="http://www.imagebam.com/image/ab46df133638644"][IMG]http://thumbnails37.imagebam.com/13364/ab46df133638644.jpg[/IMG][/url]

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