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Parallel's Issues of JAb Comix another idea, just to post some

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Posted 05 March 2011 - 10:01 PM

Hi, this is an idea and story... well, mostly is about to do 'elseworlds' type stories of the known Jab comics, presenting some parallel universe/imaginary/probables versions of them... For example, for this, (as i dont know how the AYPapi 15 will end) is assumed that Chester didn't get to be the first to open Julia's pussy... well here we go..

(and note : for me, in spanish, it would be very easy to writte a full script/short novel about this, but in english, i hope you can forgive me for my mistakes)


JabComixs’ Imaginary Futures I

Ay Papi : Chester Sweet Revenge



Julia Harvey was leaving her bathroom, after a very needed and refreshing warm shower. Her little apartment on the University of Seatle’s living rooms was very comfortable. Natalie, her roommate and friend since long years ago, had went out to party, with some classmates, while Julia had decided to get a shower and then a long night sleep.

Our pretty red-hair was thinking about her coming 21th birthday, 5 months from that date, hoping her beloved daddy would make a great party for her. Specially dreaming awake about the kind of ‘party’ she would receive, because Julia really loved the way her dad fucked her every possible time they could find in this past 2 years. Richard, however, hadn’t been the one who took her pussy’s virginity after all. The honored with that gift had been Andy, a kind of shy but so cute boy she met time ago.

After that she had offer all her body to her dad, and he became the most loyal lover the luscious girl would ever find. The man, taking care of her precious daughter, had taught her about contraceptive methods of course, and Julia had chosen the pill as her favorite one, in order to prevent anything that could stop the fun she and her dad had.

– So long time I don’t see you, Harvey cunt! –Julia heard suddenly. The girl almost screamed of surprise in that moment, specially when saw who was sit on her bed.

The man was about her dad age, no too tall but way bigger than her in any case. She remembered him well, his old daddy work mate, the one who fucked her ass harder than anyone before or after him did. Chester Nuñes. He looked practically the same as when she met him first time and only seemed that he had gained some weight and that in his head hair had gone little back from the forehead.

– W... What are you doing here?! –she tried to scream, furiously, but only a little whisper came out from her mouth instead.

Chester smiled kind of evilly at Julia, devouring the temptingly curves of the young woman. She realized in that moment about she was totally naked, as she used to be when the apartment was empty.

– You look so better now, Julia –said the man with harsh voice–, you finally got some curves since I fucked that sweet ass of yours, didn’t you little slut? –Chester spoke while he was standing up.

Julia couldn’t even speak, looking with frighten eyes while the man walked near her. Chester didn’t touch her but went to the door and locked it. Then, smiling even more darkly, showed the girl a piece of paper he was holding in his left hand.

– What do you want? –asked the red-hair girl with quivering voice.

The man walked back to the bed and signed her to sit next to him. Julia slowly obeyed. Then Chester said:

– See this? Well, it is the proof that your dear dad had screwed it up bad way. If management know about this, Richard can kiss his job goodbye. And don’t know what your slut mom will do when he got his ass in prison for this little.. trouble. Also, you never should let coach take those photos of you as souvenirs when you went out from school. One of my friends... well... let say was able to recovered them from his laptop and now, you know, not only you will be harmed if those pics are accidentally filtered through the web. That dumb coach will surely lose his job at school, not to mention what other parents will do to him.

Her eyes opened wide in disbelief and fear, which caused that Chester smile got wider.

– Of course, if some little sweetie slut I know is nice to me... now... this paper will be lost for good.

He reasserted his words grabbing Julia’s hand and leading it to his crotch. Julia felt the cock of Chester already hard beneath his jeans pants, and seemed even bigger than she remembered it.

– I... I understand –she whispered–, but you have to promise that daddy and coach will suffer no harm from your part, when we are over.

– It’s a deal, slut.

He smiled and then unzipped his pants and drooped it to the floor. His T-shirt followed, revealing the dark hair all over his chest and big belly. Julia’s eyes, however, were fixed on the long big cock already hard for her. The penis were so big and thick that she swallowed nervously, remembering how hard he had fucked her ass a couple of years ago.

Chester grabbed Julia from her hair and slowly lead her head to his crotch.

– Coach said you have a sweet mouth Harvey, you should show me that –Chester grunted.

Julia wrinkled her face in disgust for a second, but began to kiss the tip of the big cock.

– At least he cleaned it –thought the girl while her lips covered all the skin since the tip of the dick until the hairy underbelly and back over and over again, wetting the man’s meat with her saliva before began to lick it for long minutes.

Chester felt as in heaven with the tongue of the girl all over his manhood, he enjoyed it for a moment and then stood up, grabbed Julia’s shoulders and forced the girl to her knees. Julia obviously knew what he wanted and opened her mouth beginning to suck eagerly. He grabbed her head, then, and began to force himself deeper into Julia’s mouth using his hips, making the red-hair to gag while she could feel his balls tapping on her soft chin. She coughed trying to get some air while sucked.

– Yes!! You know how to suck it good little whore!! –grunted the man, pushing harder, smiling when he saw how drool dripped out of the girl’s mouth.

Julia felt as never in her life before. She almost hated this man, but also she felt extremely aroused, horny as hell while she was been face fucked by Chester. Her left hand grabbed the man’s ball sack and began to caressed it very erotically while her right went directly to her pussy to play with her sensitive clit.

No more than 4 minutes later her right hand was all wet from the pleasure juices that flowed from her sex.

Chester stopped.

– No Harvey, you won’t go that easy!! –grunted smiling, making the girl to lay down on her back over the bed.

She smiled at him as her answer, opening her legs wide in defiance. Chester swiftly slid himself between Julia’s legs and put the tip of his cock between the pussy’s lips of the girl, opening them lightly. She began to breath even deeper in excitement and anticipation. The man almost couldn’t believe how avid Julia was for his cock.

– Give it to me, please, fuck me –The beautiful girl pleaded eagerly.

Chester roared while he penetrated Julia’s pussy with a brutal push. The girl screamed while the man pumped himself beastly and almost cruelly into her, his cock been wrapped by the tight canal of Julia’s sex. He kissed and bit her delicious soft breasts stopping his pumps for moments, only to continue fucking the girl harder and deeper.

The long hard fuck began to overwhelm Julia’s mind with wave after wave of pain and pleasure, and her pain squeals quickly transformed into ecstasy filled moans.

– Harder... more.. ayghh... moreeee!!! –she begged, almost purring as a real bitch in heat.

– I know you were only a whore, Julia –grunted Chester fucking the girl deeper, almost crushing her tits with his hands, licking her face and biting her lips after kissed her.

The tightness of Julia’s cunt was forcing the man to explode into her so fast he couldn’t believe it. He sounded as a real pig when cum inside her, shoot after shoot of his seed were expelled into the womb of the girl, and that made her orgasm as never did before. Shivers of pleasure crossed her entirely from the deepest part of her sex to the top of the head, her body twisting under the weight of the fat man who had fucked that hard, feeling how much he had filled her pussy with his man’s cream.

Julia laid on her back, trying to catch her breath while Chester stood up and got his clothes. All she could say was:

– You... you promised... it.

Chester smiled and left the paper next to Julia, then he simply walked out the apartment leaving the girl alone.

Julia stood up feeling kind of hurt, her knees trembling from the savage fuck, and got the paper from the bed. After read it she burned it quickly on the kitchen, before something else could happen. The girl considered about phone to Richard, but decided to avoid him any trouble knowing which kind of feelings he had about Chester, saving him from jail for a job problem only to let him be imprisoned for killing Chester was the last thing she wanted. And after all she had enjoyed the rough sex.

Enjoyed it very, very much.

The pretty delicious red-hair went to the bathroom again, to get a new shower, feeling the cum inside her pussy. She wasn’t worried it because she took her contraceptive pills almost religiously, and she foresaw no problem about what she just did with Chester. Her mind flew again to her coming birthday, and wondering what she would do, besides attending to class, in the next 5 months until then, hoping to find a guy who fuck her as hard Chester did. For a second she just laughed, imagining what Natalie could say. ‘You are a real slut’ would be the softest at least.

Chester, meanwhile, was walking out collage students’ apartments. He still have one card in his hand, cause Julia had forgotten to ask him the pictures he stolen from Coach’s laptop. Even better, he was thinking, thanks to that sweetie cunt named Silvia, Julia’s rival since high-school, he had, probably, succeed into his desired revenge against Richard Harvey.

Julia really didn’t have a clue that the contraceptive pills she used had been changed by Silvia for something way too different. Chester smiled even more when thought about what Julia had really been used all that month.

5 months later, when Richard showed her daughter birthday party photos, Chester hardly avoid to laughed openly. The photos showed Richard’s family around Julia, also Natalie and friends from the collage and from high-school. But what made Chester happy was to know about the unexpected guest, the one who was inside Julia’s now big belly, growing inside her womb.

God! He never dreamed that the fertility pills that Silvia had exchanged for Julia’s contraceptives were so good. Anyway, having another slut knocked up was good, but the best would come when Richard finally could find out who was the actual father of her beloved unborn grandson!!

So Chester went back to his office, dreaming about the day he would use the Coach card to fuck Julia again. He would never get tired of Julia’s sweet cunt, and never thought in stop fucking the mother of his new bastard child.


(edit : As always dear administrators, if you find that this post dont belong here, i beg you put it where you think it belongs... thanks for you kindness)

81 views an no replies.. i feel so alone... (if this trick works once, let's try it again :P)

edit : more views and still no comments... :(

700's somethings views and still no comments... ok, i maybe open this about 690's times to make the view couter bigger, but still... :(

This post has been edited by wolfrider: 23 August 2011 - 06:53 PM

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