[Sinope!]

Thanks Baw. I'm glad you enjoyed that little gem. This is the revised poem in the issue that actually made it to Amazon. Little Lorna is being prostituted by the fishermen and demand that she gets 40 tricks before she is allowed back on the boat:

ODE TO LITTLE LORNA

Little Lorna, Little Lorna

Was offering for sale;

A chance for a Mexican

To buy some hot tail!

And in merely two minutes,

Whis saucy young chick,

Found a drunk local;

To be her first trick.

But she got so caught up;

In doing him right,

That just this one fare;

Almost took her all night!

And when they were finished,

She cried out in fear...

"To make it through forty;"

"Will take me all year!"

"No Worry Little Lorna"

Said her gallant white knight;

"I have mucho hombres;"

"To aid in your plight!"

And almost the moment

The call had been made,

Men by the dozens;

Arrived to her aid!

With joy she then cried

With tears in her eyes...

"How in the world;"

"Can I thank all you guys?"

But no thanks was required;

Her lovers expressed;

And somewhere 'round midnight;

She completed her quest!

I think this poem turned out a little more smoothly with little meter problems.

[Marksman]

Love it too.