[pumpkin]

another animation



Merry christmas from Old man Jefferson.





little animation






Hey hey guys. Well I did. My first comic. Only five pages, and it's hardly well written. But tell me what you think.








desu ex

My first attempt at a jab style comic book. I have thought of writing a comic book for a while, one focusing on the effects of war, or the passion of love. But then i though "nah, let's write about a old man fucking hot women".

Plot.
Old man jefferson is sick to death of those darn kids messing about outside his house. He goes to talk to one of the kids mothers about it, and they end up doing everything else but talking.









I am sort of winging this, so any help or ideas would be great.

some sketches
b&w cover
My link
My link
saggy balls
tight balls
My link
My link
My link


just some funny ideas for how saggy his balls could be.
saggy1
saggy2
saggy3
saggy4
saggy5






My link

also, tell me of any spelling errors, because I tend to have a blind spot when it comes to spell checking.

This post has been edited by pumpkin: 21 January 2012 - 11:13 PM

[Sickpuppy]

moar, MOAR!

[Erikon]

Looks awesome, Pumpkin! I can't wait to see this! And saggy balls, definetly! But how did ya get Jab to model for ya?!

[pumpkin]

Erikon, on 01 November 2010 - 04:45 AM, said:

Looks awesome, Pumpkin! I can't wait to see this! And saggy balls, definetly! But how did ya get Jab to model for ya?!

Lol. when he modelled for me, I had to exaggerate the size of certain things. But I assure you I captured the sagginess.

[OrangeCat]

Saggy!

[pumpkin]

OrangeCat, on 01 November 2010 - 11:55 PM, said:

Saggy!

But how low to go?
saggy1
saggy2
saggy3

I am joking about 2 and 3. just did them for a laugh.

And yes, I'm pretty bored right now, incase you didn't notice.

This post has been edited by pumpkin: 02 November 2010 - 03:36 AM

[Telgar]

Great Job, I will have to say Tight

[karmagik]

Personally, I think the first one is sufficient. Its definitely, clearly old man balls, but you keep going too far and they almost start to become detached from the body. Which will lead to some confusion when you are doing the comic. There may be a scene where they are balling and he has to throw them over his shoulder to keep her from kneeling on them... Which could be funny, but I think is just too silly.

I'm definitely looking forward to what else you are cooking up.

[pumpkin]

karmagik, on 02 November 2010 - 02:42 AM, said:

Personally, I think the first one is sufficient. Its definitely, clearly old man balls, but you keep going too far and they almost start to become detached from the body. Which will lead to some confusion when you are doing the comic. There may be a scene where they are balling and he has to throw them over his shoulder to keep her from kneeling on them... Which could be funny, but I think is just too silly.

I'm definitely looking forward to what else you are cooking up.

Well i was joking about the really saggy balls. Hell, with balls that saggy, he could tea bag people just by walking over them.I'll be going with the balls i posted first.

did some drawings of the housewife next door.

This post has been edited by pumpkin: 02 November 2010 - 03:09 AM

[Sickpuppy]

saggy 1

[Sinope!]

Hey Pumpkin. First off. Great stuff. You have got the jab-like style coming along nicely. Secondly, saggy but not too much. Comical but not grotesque. Thirdly... keep it up! I can't wait to read this.

[Rose]

Wow Pumpkin! I love how you captured JAB's style in your comic! I personally love JAB's style so you've grabbed my interest already! Old Jefferson looks like he could be hanging out with Old Biv and Old Quincy after that housewife's done with him!

[pumpkin]

Sinope!, on 02 November 2010 - 04:45 AM, said:

Hey Pumpkin. First off. Great stuff. You have got the jab-like style coming along nicely. Secondly, saggy but not too much. Comical but not grotesque. Thirdly... keep it up! I can't wait to read this.

Well thank you. I don't know why but i find it amusing drawing ridiculously saggy balls, I have got even more saggy balls on my computer, but i won't post them because people seem to think i'm serious about making them that saggy.

[pumpkin]

Rosenrot, on 02 November 2010 - 12:14 PM, said:

Wow Pumpkin! I love how you captured JAB's style in your comic! I personally love JAB's style so you've grabbed my interest already! Old Jefferson looks like he could be hanging out with Old Biv and Old Quincy after that housewife's done with him!

Well thank you. I love his style too. The reason i based my work on his is because my own drawing style has been compared to a cartoon like egon schiele. So not practicably attractive.
Although i should apologise to you and the female audience, there is not much here for you, No well-endowed young male models here.

[Laz]

Great job dude. Saggy balls for sure!