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Posted 12 October 2010 - 11:05 PM

I started a second story; the idea came to me in my sleep. I had to write the first chapter before I could post anything. I was going to wait for my editor to send it back but he hasn't responded so I am giving it to you. If anyone cares to edit it for me I would greatly appreciate it.

Chapter 1: Fate’s Gifts

Adam sat in the dark restaurant running his hands through his hair as he tried to hold back his tears. Why was life so cruel to him, here he was twenty-four years old with no degree, a dead end job and no family. He always thought he would be doing better by now. His dreams always held the four-bedroom home with the two-car garage and a white picket fence, a beautiful wife and two wonderful children. Yet here he was again, alone. He had brought his date here hoping to impress her. The place was a little upscale and well beyond his means to afford regularly. But he wanted to impress her. Her name was Brenda Davis and she was an administrative assistant at his work. Not his administrative assistant, he was too low on the corporate ladder for that. No, she was the department head’s administrative assistant. This would have been their third date and things seemed to be going well. The last two dates had ended on a good note. Adam had even gotten himself a nice kiss at the end of the last date; but like everything else in his life, fate had other plans for him. Just as they were being served their meal, Brenda’s ex, a no good thug and self-proclaimed mix martial artist, had called her on her cell. He had realized what he had tossed away and wanted her back. Just like that she jumped up from the table, meal untouched, and was out the door. She did not even have the courtesy to apologize to Adam or say goodbye.

He felt his tears coming unbidden to pool around his eyes, his nose started to run and with a loud sniff, Adam stood from his table and headed over to the counter, to pay for his untouched meal. The hostess handed him a tissue as he fumbled for his debit card. “I am so sorry, sir. I can not believe your date did that.” She replied, trying to put on her best remorseful face.

Adam looked up at the young woman, and noticed her for the first time. She was very attractive if a bit young looking for him, no more than twenty. She had long straight raven black hair that hung loosely around her shoulders. “Thank you.” He replied as he handed her his card and ID. “My name is Adam.”

“Emily, nice to meet you Adam.” The girl stated as she took his card and started to ring up the meal.

Just as she was getting ready to hand him the receipt for his signature a rather handsome gentleman dressed in a suit and tie placed his hand over Emily’s “Emily, there is no charge tonight.” The man stated as he took the receipt from Emily’s hand and placed it in his pocket. “After what I just saw, Sir, I can not in any good conscience charge you for that meal, its on the house tonight. Please sir, return to your table and enjoy your meal. And so the lady’s meal does not go to waste, Emily please join him.

“Mr. Connor, are you sure.” Emily replied with a flush to her cheeks.

Mr. Connor took Emily aside for a second and whispered into her ear. Emily nodded a few times and smiled the flush slipping from her face. “I understand sir, and I will do my best.” She said with a smile as she walked from around the counter and approached Adam.

As she approached him with a smile, Adam got a better look at the young woman. She stood about shoulder height to Adam; putting her about five foot three inches and maybe a hundred and six pounds. He also changed his estimate of her age to no older than seventeen. She was wearing a tight black dress that molded to her young figure, accenting everything it was supposed too without looking trashy or inappropriate. He had to admit she was quite lovely and he was sure would make pleasant company. Emily took Adam’s arm in hers and led him back to his, or now their, table. Adam could feel her breast brush against his arm as she did so and he felt a slight stirring in his groin. He did his best to ignore the uncomfortable feeling as they approached the table.

Adam reluctantly broke himself from Emily’s embrace and came around to her chair pulling it out for her to sit. Emily smiled at Adam and she took her seat, brushing down the hem of her skirt as she did so. “Thank you sir.”

“No problem, and please call me Adam, we are going to be sharing a meal after all.” Adam replied as he pushed her chair up to the table. As he did so he could not help but take a whiff of her sent, she smelled very nice, her hair smelled slightly of bubblegum and she smelled lightly of cinnamon. “Get a hold of yourself Adam.” He thought as he walked a round the table to his seat. “This is not your date; she is doing this as a courtesy and at her boss’s request, besides which, she is way too young for you.”

Adam and Emily had a pleasant meal and conversation. He discovered his second assessment of her age had been closer to the truth. She was sixteen and a sophomore at the local high school. The owner of the restaurant was a friend of her father and had given her the hostess job at her father’s request. It was her first job and paid pretty well. Her family had lived here her entire life; her father owned a local credit union. She had two younger sisters, Ann fourteen and Jennifer who was twelve, and a stepmother Jessica.

Her original mother had died five years ago of breast cancer and Jessica babysat her and her sisters while her father and mother were at Dr’s appointments and the hospital. Jessica was only 18 at the time Emily’s mother died and had been watching them for two years. Jessica had helped her family prepare for their mother’s death and had been there for them when she died. Emily and her sisters had become good friends with Jessica and loved having her around, two years later Jessica and her father were married. Emily loved her stepmother very much and the whole family was quite happy.

Emily dreamed of being an actress and was in her schools drama club. She had even been in a commercial for her father’s bank and for the restaurant. Adam let her talk through most of the meal, he answered any questions she had, and occasionally added an opinion, but he liked hearing her speak, she had a pleasant voice and a very cheerful demeanor. It was not long before he was laughing and smiling, his problems from earlier forgotten in the rush of this young woman’s cheerful look on life and honest sincerity.

After a bit Adam had to excuse himself to use the men’s room. Emily smiled up at Adam as he stood. “No problem Adam, I’ll be right here.”

As Adam rose from his seat and looked down at the lovely young lady he felt a familiar stirring in his chest, a quickening of his pulse and a tingling sensation in his groin. He smiled back to her and then headed for the restroom. “Get a hold of yourself man. She is just a girl, way out of your league and way too young for you. Though she is very lovely and has a wonderful personality.” He thought as he entered the restroom and headed for one of the urinals.

While relieving himself Adam kept seeing visions of Emily in his mind. He kept trying to think of something else, but he could not help it. Thoughts of her kept creeping back in. thoughts of her lips and her sent, bubblegum with a hint of cinnamon. He finished up and with a little difficulty and zipped up his pants. His hormones were kicking in overdrive and he needed to do something to get himself under control. Adam walked around the urinals and turned on the sink; he quickly washed his hands and then splashed some water into his face. He looked into the mirror as he dried his face and hands; he quickly jumped back as he noticed a beautiful woman standing behind him. “Hello Adam.” She said with a chuckle.

Adam quickly turned around to face the woman “Who the hell….” He started to say but was cut short when he saw no one there.

“Hell. No not hell that is a very unpleasant place that I prefer to avoid. Please turn around Adam; I prefer not to talk to the back of your head.” Adam heard the woman’s voice from behind him.

Adam turned around and looked into the mirror and there she was once again. “That is better. As I was saying before you interrupted me with talk of Hell and so rudely turned your back to me. Hello Adam, my name is Mrellia and I am here to answer your dreams.” She said with a grin and a twinkle in her eye.

“My dreams, what do you mean? Where are you? Who are you? What are you?” Adam stammered once again looking behind him at where the woman should be.

“So many questions, hmmm, so full of questions, so unlike you Adam.” She stated with a giggle and a grin her finger coming her mouth as she nibbled her bottom lip and swaggered slightly side to side. “Well, I guess I could answer them, but first you need to stop looking behind you and look at me. Am I not pretty enough for you, or would you prefer this.” She said as her form changed to an exact duplicate of Emily.

Adam jumped back from the mirror and closed his eyes “This is not happening, this is not happening.”

“Hello, Adam, earth to Adam. That won’t work dear. I am here and this is real.” She replied with another chuckle “As for your questions, well one at a time I think. I am here to answer your dreams. It has come to the attention of the powers that be that your life has been too lopsided in one direction. The fates as they are have given you too many negatives in your life. So I have been sent to aid you and to ensure that for the next thirty-two years six months and sixteen days you have everything you could possibly want or desire. As to where am I, right now I am in your head but if it is your desire I can be right next you.” She stated, as she appeared right next to Adam.

Adam jumped away from the woman that had appeared next to him. She no longer looked like Emily; she once again looked as she had when she first appeared to him. Five foot six, red curly hair, wearing a black lacy dress with her hair tied up with a black ribbon. “As I said I am here to grant you all you desire or wish even if that desire is me.” She said as she lowered her lips to Adams and gave him a passionate kiss.

Mrellia broke the kiss and smiled at Adam as he stood there in shock. “Who am I, that question I have already answered I am Mrellia. As to what I am, well the simplest explanation would be I am a spirit of fate, sent here to set right the cosmic imbalance that your life has created. Does that answer your questions?”

Adam looked at the beautiful woman standing in front of him with a confused expression on his face. “I still don’t understand anything. You say you’re here to give me my desires. What desires? Are you here to tempt me? Steal my soul?” He asked as he backed away from her.

“No Adam I am not here to steal your soul but to put steel into it, I am not the Devil and I do not work for him. I am a spirit of fate. The fates are neutral, we do not take sides nor do we judge, we simply exist to ensure the universe remains in balance, life, death, good evil, Law Chaos and all that. I am not here to judge you, if you desire it, it will be yours. It is that simple. However there are some rules.”

Adam looked at her with a slight grin “Aren’t there always.”

“Yes and these are very important rules. I cannot kill anyone for you, however I can supply you with the means to do so yourself. I cannot do anything that would set the cosmic balance off kilter worse than it already is. If you ask me to do something that will do that I will let you know, if you still wish to carry out the action I cannot do it for you, but I also cannot stop you from doing so. Lastly I am here to give you what you desire or need, not to grant your every wish, there is a difference, which you will learn with time. There will be times that your wishes will conflict with your true desire, as well as other outside influences such as morals, laws and the actions of others. In those cases I will have to step in and act without your permission or approval to ensure your desire comes first.”

Adam stepped back from Mrellia again “I do not understand that last part.”

“Ok, let me try and explain it better then. Let’s take your current situation. First off you desire a sexual relationship tonight however you do not desire that relationship to be with your companion, you desire a true relationship with her, however your personal morals, the laws of your land and the reactions of others including your companion prevent that. Also should you have a sexual relationship tonight it may negatively impact your companions opinion of you. So I am going to change things to ensure that your desires happen.”

“And how are you going to do that?” Adam asked.

Mrellia stepped up close to Adam and smiled a wicked grin as she whispered into Adam’s ear. “Watch and learn luv.”

Mrellia took Adams arm and lead him out of the restroom and back into the crowded restaurant. Suddenly she vanished and Adam found himself standing alone in the doorway. Then he heard her voice in his head. “Do as I say, Adam and all will come to fruition, and do not worry about how others will react, nothing bad will happen to you form this point on, no one will react negatively to anything you do through me.”

She led Adam back to his table where Emily awaited him. As Adam approached the table Emily smiled and stood from her chair. She hugged him close to herself and whispered “What took you so long? I was beginning to get worried.”

Adam hugged Emily back a little surprised by her reaction. He stepped back slightly and looked down at the beautiful girl. Her smiling face caused his heart to once again flutter in his cheats. He lifted her chin up to look at him when he heard Mrellia’s voice in his head. “Kiss her Adam.”

Adam lowered his lips to Emily’s as she stood on her tiptoes to raise hers to meet his. When their lips met sparks flew through Adam. He could not believe he was kissing a sixteen-year-old girl, but he loved it. As they kissed her lips parted to permit his tongue access to her mouth. He continued to passionately kiss her as their tongues danced and intertwined with each other. He slid his hands down her back and drew her body closer to his. The kiss lasted a few minuets before Adam had to break it off for fear he would loose control.

When they separated Emily laid her head on Adam’s chest and breathed in deeply. Adam began to gently rub his fingers through her hair and basked in her sent. Suddenly Emily broke away from Adam looking at the clock. “Oh, Adam I am so sorry I lost track of time, I have to go home. My shift ended a half an hour ago.” Emily stated with a pout as she quickly rushed to the hostesses station. Adam watched Emily run off with a look of disappointment. As Emily reached the station she quickly scribbled something on a piece of paper and then rushed back to Adam. “This is my cell phone number.” She said with a shy grin. “Bye, call me ok.”

Emily stood on her tiptoes and kissed Adam once more before rushing to the back room. As Adam watched Emily head off, he heard Mrellia’s voice in his head once again “See wasn’t that easy?”

Adam stood by his table staring, his heart pounding in his chest. “How did that happen?”

“Adam, you can’t stand here in the middle of the restaurant talking to yourself, but before you go take a look at the people around you.”

Adam looked around the room and for the first time noticed the other people in the restaurant. Most of them were families, with a few couples. All of them were smiling and one man looked towards Adam and raised his glass. “No one is upset.”

“That’s right Adam, no one cares that you just kissed a sixteen-year-old girl. As a matter of fact most of the people here are happy that your night ended on a high note. Everyone saw what your date did to you and all of them felt for you.”

As Adam started walking towards the door he continued his one sided conversation. “But I was kissing an underage girl, everyone should have flipped.”

“As I told you Adam, no one will care about anything you do. I will make it so they will always have a reasonable explanation and will accept anything. Did you also notice however that you too had no bad feelings about what you did, all your doubts about your feelings for her are gone?” Mrellia said as she aspired beside Adam and took his arm.

“Did you do that too?” Adam asked as he looked at the woman who just appeared beside him.

“Yes, your morale dilemma was getting in the way of what you desired. I could not have that so I removed it.”

“You removed it?” Adam asked pulling away from Mrellia “You removed my morale dilemma?”

“I told you Adam, my task here is to give you all that you desire. If something comes between that it must be removed. Don’t worry I have not removed all of your morals, Just the ones that caused you difficulties.”

Adam grabbed Mrellia and spun her to face him “I don’t want you removing any morals from me. I was happy the way I was!”

“No you were not Adam, if you were happy the way you were I would not have been activated and sent to help you.” Mrellia replied as she gently separated herself from Adam. “Now, please calm down, you are making a scene.”

Adam felt himself calming down, his emotions subsiding and suddenly the whole thing did not bother him anymore. “There now that is much better. So let’s look into your other desire, to have sex tonight.” Mrellia whispered into Adam’s ear as she once again took his arm and lead him across the street to the local French restaurant.

Adam and Mrellia entered the restaurant arm in arm. Mrellia gently separated her arm from Adam’s and smiled at him “Give me a second to get us a seat.” She whispered as she walked over to the maitre d’.

She began to speak to the man behind the podium in what Adam assumed was French, then smiled and beckoned Adam over. “It seems we have a reservation, shall we find a table?” She told him with a smile as the maitre d’ beckoned them to follow him.

Adam and Mrellia were led to a secluded table in the back of the restaurant. Shadowed and isolated. Mrellia smiled at him as they sat down and the maitre d’ handed them menus. Adam looked around the restaurant and then at Mrellia “Why are we here? I already had diner, I am not hungry and I defiantly can not afford this place.”

Mrellia smiled at Adam and leaned in to whisper seductively into his ear “We are not here to have dinner; we are here for your dessert. I needed someplace quieter than the street and a little more secluded. This place happens to have a few isolated tables for people who wish to be alone.”

Adam shuddered as his hormones suddenly kicked into overdrive. As soon as Mrellia had said the word dessert he felt a flood of desire fill his entire body, his cock stood at attention in his pants and his heart was pounding in his chest. “What exactly are you planning?” He stammered.

“Well my luv, let us see what it is you truly want. Let us look into your true desires. Not the surface ones I detected earlier those are too easy, let’s look deeper, into the depths of your soul, for the deepest darkest desires that you deny even to yourself shall we? Mrellia whispered as she lightly nibbled on Adams ear.

Adam shuddered again as he felt Mrellia nibbling on his ear, as well as a slight feather light touch in the back of his mind. “Mmmmm, Adam your thoughts are so delicious, so kinky and naughty. Public sex, defiantly a good start, you don’t want to get caught or seen. Well maybe seen a little, but if you are, you want them to enjoy watching, not get upset about it. Let’s dig deeper, ohhh, a threesome that is defiantly interesting.” Mrellia purred into Adams ear, her fingers sliding down to caress his rigid member. “A mother and daughter, ah there it is, every mans fantasy, a virgin, oh honey you are a kinky one but I am sure you have more, darker luv, what is it that you even deny yourself?”

Adam felt more pressure on his mind, spectral fingers began to caress his thoughts, his dreams, and his resistance began to buckle. Years of conditioning and rearing began to break down. “Oh there they are, so deeply rooted, denied the light they soo need to survive.” Mrellia hissed as she continued to stoke his cock. Ha ha oh luv that is sooo delicious, a married woman, and an underage girl, oh you are a dream come true. I am curious Hun, just how young would you be willing to go? Lets see, ohhh wow I don’t think we are quite ready for that, not yet at least. But I have what I need; tonight Adam you will get your deepest darkest desires. The perfect pair is right here in this restaurant.”

Adam looked up at Mrellia through the hormone induced fog “what, here now?” He whispered.

“Yes, they are right over there luv.” Mrellia purred as she pointed across the room at a family sitting at the next closest table.

It appeared to be another isolated table. There were three people sitting there. A rather large muscular man who appeared to be in his late thirties with dark brown hair wearing a slightly ruffled suit, all the buttons of his suit coat were undone and the tie was loosened around his neck, a very attractive blond haired woman wearing a white blouse and black dress skirt, she appeared to be in her thirties as well, and a teen girl in a nice navy blue strapless dress. The man and woman appeared to be in a heated argument, as the man got angrier he grabbed his tie and tore it off his neck and tossed it at the woman. The girl appeared to be doing her best to ignore the two adults and twirled her fork through her food. Suddenly the man got up from the table and stormed out of the restaurant.

Adam looked from the scene to Mrellia “Did you cause that?”

“No, luv I had no need to cause that, it was already destined to happen. I can tell you right now, nothing we do from this point forward will have any impact on that little scene we just witnessed. They are free to do as they or you desire. The husband is now effectively out of the picture, he just does not know it yet. So luv let us have some fun shall we?”

Mrellia took Adam’s hand and lead him from their table, as they headed across the room she wrapped her arms around Adam and started kissing him passionately. Molding herself to his body the pair stumbled around the restaurant, a few patrons looked up at what appeared to be two lovers locked in a passionate embrace, some shook their heads and returned to their meals, others watched voyeuristically. The two continued to kiss and touch each other as they crossed the room. Adam was lost in a sensual fog of ecstasy and desire completely unaware of what he was doing, by the time they approached the ladies table he had lost complete control of his body to Mrellia. Adam had become an observer in his own body, but the feelings and hormones that coursed through his fogged mind overwhelmed any wish he may have had to stop what was happening.

The mother and daughter looked up in surprise as Adam came crashing down into the seat that was once occupied by the angry man. Mrellia dropped into Adams lap and continued to passionately kiss him. Her fingers running through his hair as Adams hands caressed her ass through the sundress she was now wearing. Slowly he began to pull the hem of her dress up, revealing the white panties she wore underneath. As his fingers began to slip under the elastic of her panties and caress the soft flesh of her ass the mother finally broke from her shock and cleared her throat. “Excuse me, do you two mind? My daughter and I are trying to enjoy our dinner!” She stated angrily.

Mrellia broke her kiss from Adam, who continued to fondle her ass, his fingers sliding deeper into her panties looking for her treasures within. “Oh hello ladies, how are you this evening? Please don’t mind us, it’s been forever since we last saw each other and we are making up for lost time.” Mrellia purred at them with a grin. “Oh luv look, she has been crying, what is wrong dear?”

The mother looked at the pair in shock as Adam turned his head to them; his hands had not stopped their lecherous movements in Mrellia’s panties, quite the opposite, his fingers had found the treasure they had sought and his middle finger was rubbing along Mrellia’s slit lubricating itself on her juices as he spoke. “Hello, what’s wrong why are you crying?” He asked with mock sincerity.

The mother leaned close to Adam and Mrellia and whispered tensely. “What’s wrong, what’s wrong, you two are what’s wrong. My daughter and I are trying to enjoy our meal and the two of you are making out and all but fucking in my husband’s seat.” She growled under her breath.

Mrellia laughed loudly and looked the mother in the eye. “Was that your husband that just stormed out of here luv, I am sorry but I did not think he would be needing the seat any more. Besides…” she whispered as she leaned in closer to the mother, “you are enjoying watching us, you like watching. You desire it.”

As Mrellia whispered this, the mother backed off and blushed. She started to get even angrier. And tossed her napkin from her lap onto her plate “Well I never…” She stammered.

Mrellia looked at the woman with a devilish grin and a twinkle in her eye. “Not yet you haven’t luv.” She purred as Adam’s middle finger slid from her pussy and began to slide into her ass. Slowly Adam slid his finger into Mrellia’s ass down to the second knuckle. Mrellia moaned quietly into his chest as pleasure shot through her body. Adam slowly slid his finger out and then back in, gently finger fucking her ass. The mother and daughter watched with morbid fascination. As they watched, Adam took his other hand and pulled Mrellia’s panties down exposing her ass and his finger sliding in and out of it.

The mother could not help herself; she could not take her eyes off the sight of Adam’s finger sliding in and out of Mrellia’s ass. She hated it and loved it at the same time. Her attention was brought back to where she was by the loud gasp coming from behind her. She quickly turned around to see her daughter staring at the sight, her fingers covering her mouth. “Oh my god honey, it's ok don’t look.” The mother stammered as she got out of her seat and went to her daughter. “Come on honey lets go, you do not need to see this.”

She grabbed her daughter by her arm and tried to help her form her chair, but the girl did not move, she just stared at the scene in front of her. The mother looked around the room pleadingly hoping someone would notice what was going on and help. There were no other patrons near them and the few who had a view of what was going on quickly went back to their meals as soon as she looked their way. She silently cursed her husband for asking for an isolated table. “She likes watching too luv, its no use denying it.” Mrellia purred to the woman as Adam continued to finger her ass. “Oh luv that feels so good, harder, fuck my ass harder.”

The mother turned towards the couple again with the intent of yelling for them to stop. As soon as she saw them, she was lost once again to the sight in front of her. Adam had slid two fingers into Mrellia’s ass and was now pounding his fingers in and out of her as fast as he could. The two were once again kissing passionately as he did so.

Mrellia broke her kiss with Adam once again and turned her head towards the daughter. “Why don’t you come over here child so you can see better?” she purred seductively in between gasps.

The daughter slowly stood up from her chair and walked over to where the couple was lost in their embrace dragging her chair along with her. Mrellia look over at the girl as she sat down next to them “What’s your name sweetie?” Mrellia asked.

“Ginger, my name is Ginger.” The girl responded as she continued to stare at the sight in front of her.

The Mother came over to her daughter and again tried to get her to stand up “Please Ginger you really do not need to be watching this. Will you two please stop?” She pleaded with tears in her eyes.

Adam stopped fingering Mrellia’s ass and slid his fingers out. As he did so Mrellia climbed off his lap and sat in the now unoccupied chair next to them. With a wicked grin she reached down and pulled her panties the rest of the way off. “What is the matter luv, did you not enjoy the show?”

“Enjoy the show?” The mother stammered “That is my thirteen year old daughter sitting there. I should have the two of you arrested.”

“But you won’t.” Mrellia whispered. “You enjoyed watching it too much, and so did she.”

As Mrellia and the mother debated on whether she would call the cops, Adam scooted his char a little closer to Ginger and slid his fingers along her leg and slightly up her dress. “Hi, my name is Adam. So did you like what you saw?”

Ginger flinched at Adams touch and then began to shiver as his fingers lightly rubbed her leg and knee. “Yyess, it was… I don’t know… I could not stop watching.” She looked over at Mrellia “Did it really feel good?”

“GINGER!!” her mother hissed as she looked around obviously trying not to get noticed now. “What type of question is that?”

Mrellia smiled as she watched Adam and Ginger “A perfectly reasonable question, and I have a perfectly reasonable answer, yes I thought it felt wonderful but you will not know if you like it until you try it.”

Ginger gasped at Mrellia’s answer and blushed once again, her fingers covering her mouth and she turned her head away from Adam in an attempt to hide her reaction. Adam smiled at her and slid his hand a littler further up her dress his fingers beginning to caress her inner thigh. In response Ginger unconsciously spread her legs as much as the tight hem of her dress would allow.

Mrellia slowly stood up and walked over to the mother. She walked around behind her and slid her fingers onto her shoulders and whispered into her ear. “See she likes the attention. He is not hurting her, just giving her pleasure. I know you, I know your desires, and it is turning you on to watch him touch her.” She purred.

“Yes, oh god no, but yes.” The mother replied tears once again coming to her eyes.

“What is your name luv?” Mrellia asked as she began to message the woman’s shoulders.

“Jan, my name is Jan.”

Mrellia smiled and lead Jan over to her chair. As Jan sat down Mrellia continued to rub on her shoulders and then slid her fingers down the woman’s blouse to caress her breasts. “You see Jan, it’s all going to be ok, just let it come, release your desires and enjoy the moment.”

Ginger gasped as she watched Mrellia fondle her mother’s breasts. She let out another lower gasp as Adam slid the hem of her dress up her legs. “Lift your butt a little Ginger, so I can get your skirt all the way up.” Adam purred into the girl’s ear.

Ginger lifted her ass off the chair just enough for Adam to slide the hem of her dress under and around her ass, revealing her red lacey panties underneath. He spread her legs apart as far as he could in the chair and knelt down between Gingers legs, his fingers sliding up to caress her panties along her slit. Ginger moaned audibly as Adam began to rub on her pussy lips.

Adam could not believe what he was doing; he was molesting a thirteen-year-old girl right in front of her mother and in the middle of a crowded restaurant. He was loving every minute of it, but he knew it was wrong, He needed to stop, but he couldn’t, his body was doing things and saying things without his control. Yes he needed to stop but he did not want to stop he wanted more, he wanted to taste her, to feel her lips around his cock, to fuck her virgin pussy and ass and he knew he was going to. He was going to fuck her, her mother and Mrellia right here in the middle of this restaurant as other people watched him do it.

Mrellia continued to fondle Jan’s breast’s as she looked up around the room. Two men in the restaurant were watching the sex play that was going on, both men were enjoying what they were witnessing. The older of the two had his eyes on Adam and Ginger. Mrellia could feel the man’s desire, he was enjoying watching the girl getting molested and was hoping that Adam would rape her. The other man was a bit more conservative and was simply happy to see three beautiful women getting it on. She could sense in him, a suppressed desire for women to be subjugated to men for sex. He felt it was a woman’s place to please a man.

Mrellia did not care what they felt as long as they did not interfere and as long as they fed her their desire. Her mission simply started with Adam, one man to give everything he desired; now she had five to feed her. The fates knew better than to send a spirit of desire to earth with free reign, but it seemed they did not care what happened to these people as long as the balance was restored. Now that she had Adam she was free, giving him everything he desired and ensnaring others in her web as she did so. Soon she would have fed enough; soon these repressed slobs would give her so much power. Once she was ready, she could take everything for herself. The fates would not be able to stop her then and this planet would be consumed in desire. Nothing will matter then, no laws, no morals, not even the day to day needs, just pleasure and desire, a planet for her to rule and to consume.

Adam continued to run his fingers along Ginger’s pussy as her hips began to buck, he felt her panties become moist and the scent of arousal filled his nose. With an animal like growl Adam grabbed the girls legs and threw them over the chair arms. Grabbing her hips he pulled her closer to his face and with one quick motion tore her panties off and drove his face into her mons and began to lick her vigorously, burrowing his tongue into her pussy and tasting her virgin juices. His tongue swirled round within her licking as deep as he could and savoring in her flavors.

Ginger continued to thrust her hips, trying to get his tongue deeper into her body. She was lost in the ecstasy she was feeling, nothing mattered to her mind but more pleasure.

Mrellia watched as Adam sucked on Gingers pussy, her hands continuing to stroke on Jan’s breast, her fingers sliding up to the buttons, undoing them one by one as she leaned in and whispered into Jan’s ear. “He is molesting your daughter now Jan, he is eating her out and soon he will be fucking her virgin cunt. How does that make you feel?”

Jan moaned as she laid her head back against Mrellia. “Oh my, that is so hot; it is making me so horny. Please don’t stop, I want to see him fuck her. I want to watch him pleasure her; I want to see him make my little girl a woman.”

Ginger’s moans started getting louder as Adam began to lick and suck on her clitoris, Mrellia noticed more people beginning to look in their direction, luckily none of them were in the proper angle to see what Adam was doing to Ginger, A few started to get up to see who was making the noises. Mrellia got up from behind Jan and approached Ginger. Leaning down she began to nibble on the girl’s ear, “My dear child, you need to be quieter, or we will get caught and all of us will be in sooo much trouble.”

Ginger barley heard Mrellia’s voice through the fog of lust and desire filling her brain and she barely noticed the spectral fingers working their way into her mind. Suddenly she could not make a sound, no matter how good it felt or how strong her reactions, her voice would not raise above a squeak. After Gingers moans died down, it did not take much for Mrellia to extend a fog around the group and turn the curious inquirers back towards their dinners. She regretted having to do this, as she lost her two observers when they too were affected by her power.

Adam continued to eat Gingers pussy; his tongue working from the base of her slit to her now engorged clit. As she pressed her hips into his face he slid his middle finger into her virgin slit, being careful to just put enough in to lube it up but not to break her hymen; that will come later. As this thought went through his mind, something felt wrong to Adam, as he continued to eat out the teen girl. More and more everything that was happening and everything that he was doing seemed wrong; he had to stop this and he had to stop her.

Adam suddenly found himself in the bottom of a deep fog filled pit. He could still feel what his body was doing; he just had no control over it. The sky above him was a view of what his eyes were seeing. He kicked his feet in frustration as he realized that Mrellia had taken complete control of his body and pushed him into the deepest recesses of his mind. He looked up into the air and watched as his mouth raised from Ginger’s pussy to kiss her on the lips. He felt his hands unbuckling his belt. He knew he had to stop this. Adam looked along the sides of the pit he was in, tracing every inch of its surface. Finally he found what he sought, hand holds. Slowly and painfully he started to climb his way out of the pit. As he got half way up the trench fingerlike tendrils of fog began to form all around him. Trying to grab a hold of him, or knock him from the edge. As he dodged the fingers, he heard Mrellia’s voice in his mind. “Oh Adam, what are you doing, you wanted this, you desired this.”

“Not like this I didn’t. You are forcing me to rape them you Bitch, this is not right they don’t want this and neither do I. Stop it now!” He hollered up into the sky, as he continued to climb the edges of the pit. He almost slipped as he felt a pleasant sensation on his cock. As he regained his balance on the edge of the cliff he looked up into the sky and almost fell again at what he saw.

Ginger had her lips wrapped around his cock sucking Adam into her mouth; with each bob of her head she took him deeper and deeper into her mouth. She could not believe she was doing this, she had no idea who he was, and she was sucking his cock. She did not even know how she knew what she was doing. Until tonight the most she had ever done was make out with her boyfriend, and now she was taking this man’s cock into her mouth and trying her best to get it down her throat. Suddenly he started yelling no and was pushing her away from his cock. Ginger felt her hands rise and grab his ass thrusting his cock deeper into her mouth.

Adam finally managed to climb to the summit of his consciousness, as he fought with Mrellia’s influence he felt his cock sliding into Gingers throat. This gave him the strength to overcome Mrellia’s influence and take final control of his body. As he tried to separate himself from Ginger, the teen grabbed his ass and drove his cock all the way into her mouth, burying her nose into his pubic hair. Adam felt his balls tighten and his cock unloaded into her throat, Ginger sucked and swallowed every drop. She continued to grab and hold his ass until he was done cumming. As soon as he was done she let him go and pulled her mouth from his cock, coughing and gasping.

Adam finally had complete control of his body and mind. He grabbed his pants and quickly pulled them up. As he was buckling his belt he turned on a shocked Mrellia. “Let them go now!!” He growled at her.

Mrellia looked around the darkened restaurant making sure no one saw or over heard Adams outburst. “Adam luv, why are you so angry, they want this, and so do you. I can feel it inside you and them.” She purred as she slid her fingers into Jan’s blouse and pulled her breasts from her bra.

Adam leapt over to Mrellia and yanked her hands form the woman’s breasts. Quickly he dragged her away from the two women and pushed her against the wall. “Let them go now!” He growled.

Suddenly Adam found himself standing in a bright room; the floor was covered in mist. He could see several very attractive women in gossamer gowns standing around the room staring at him. His fingers were still wrapped around Mrellia’s neck. He looked at Mrellia and quickly let go of her neck. She dropped to the floor coughing and backing away from Adam. “Why are we here, how did you…?” She gasped.

Out of the crowd three voices speaking in unison cut through the air “He did not bring you here, we did.” Three figures emerged from the mist, they were dressed in black hooded robes. As they approached Adam and Mrellia they pulled back their hoods and spoke once more. “Hello Adam Hunter, we are the Fates, and you have our attention.”
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I Updated the story after it was eddited by my new edditor. I Hope you guys like it.
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Whoa! What a story! Keep them coming Telgar. Great stuff!
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Chapter 2: New Life

Adam stared at the three women with astonishment as Mrellia began to crawl backwards away from the trio shaking her head and crying. All three women were beautiful in their own way. The younger was barley a teen, no older then thirteen or fourteen in appearance, her mannerisms though spoke of an ageless maturity that you would never find in a girl of that age. The middle one looked to be in her thirties and also appeared to be pregnant, she had a glow about her that drew you in and gave her a motherly air. Lastly was the oldest, she appeared to be in her fifties or sixties but had a beautiful matronly feel to her presence that calmed the nerves and promised a warm relaxing rest.

Mrellia continued to crawl backwards, shaking her head the entire time. “No, no, this can’t be happing, you gave him to me. You said I had free reign to give him whatever he desired.”

The youngest looked towards Mrellia with a caring smile. “Mrellia my child, you were given free reign to give him his desires, not to force them on him or others. You took it too far; you forced us to take action.” As she said this Mrellia began to cry and curled into a ball, rocking back and forth.

Adam backed away from the trio, knowing his actions were fruitless if they chose to hurt him. “What is it that you intend to do with me? He asked his voice a little shaky.

The oldest of the three smiled at him with a reassuring smile. “Be at ease Adam, we mean you no harm. I am Atropos, The Cutter of Strings. My companions are Lachesis, The Drawer of Lots.” She replied indicating the Teen. “And Clotho, The Spinner or, The Mother.” She said indicating the Middle woman.

Adam looked at the three females and shook his head. “You mean me no harm you say, that is what she told me too.” He stated nervously as he pointed over his shoulder with his thumb, towards Mrellia behind him.

Clotho slowly and gracefully approached Adam and gently took his hands into her own. “Adam, what she did was necessary. Consider it a test, we had to be sure you could handle what we were about to give you.” She replied smiling at him. “We had to make sure that all things that had happened in your life had not beaten you down. That you had the strength to do what you felt was right and not to give in to your emotions or give up at the first sign of adversity. It is a great and powerful thing we are about to give to you, we had to be sure.”

Adam pulled his hands from hers as he started to get angry “Necessary, she took over my body and forced me to rape a thirteen year old girl!”

Lachesis stepped forward with a frown as she continued to stare at Mrellia. “Yes, what she did was necessary, I will admit it was extreme and beyond what we had tasked her with. We apologies about that, she was only supposed to test you, not cause harm to others, or force you to do so. I assure you she will be punished for her crimes.”

“In the mean time…” Atropos began as the other two backed away from Adam, to stand beside her once more and then approach him as one. “We have decided that you passed your test beyond our expectations. Adam Hunter, The Fates bestow upon you the greatest gift we can bestow on any man.”

Lachesis reached into her robes and pulled from its folds a glowing strand of thread and handed it to Adam and the three once again spoke as one. “Adam hunter, you are now the master of your own fate. Free to do as you will, without interference from us or any other power. You are now the first of the Fateless.”

As The Fates finished their proclamation, the entire landscape became quite and still. The women in the gowns stopped their tasks and conversations and stared at Adam in awe. One by one they began to kneel and bow their heads until the only people standing were Adam and The Fates.

Adam looked down at the strand in his hand, as slowly one end lengthened until it touched Adams chest. With a deep intake of breath Adam felt energy surge into his body, as if a large heavy weight had been lifted off his shoulders. “What do you mean I am Fateless?”

The three answered once again as one voice. “You are free to do as you wish, when you wish, where you wish and with whom you wish. You are no longer bound by any fate other than your own making. No one can harm you unless you wish it, nothing can influence you unless you wish it, and you will not age nor die unless you wish to. You are also free to influence and alter the fates of those whose lives affect yours. There is but one rule, as there always is, you can do no action that will cause harm or imbalance to the weave of the fates. If you attempt to through intention or accident we will inform you through our agents and do everything in our power to stop you should you ignore our warning.”

Adam stared at the three in shock. He again looked down at his hand, however the strand he had been handed was gone. “How, how did you do this and why?”

“The strand we handed you was your own thread of fate. As long as you possess that thread nothing and no one can directly influence your actions. Since you possess a strand of fate you have gained some of our powers. You can see the weave as it effects the universe, you will be able to grasp individual threads and read them, manipulate them and take them into yourself and joining them with your own, as long as they remain part of the weave you can influence them as you will but then release them when you are done to return to their lives and fate, whatever that may be.” The three stated turning and pointing to an enormous tapestry of light that appeared in the horizon behind them.

Clotho then began to speak as they turned back towards Adam “Given time you will also be able to pluck individual threads from the weave, completely binding them to yourself. Take caution however, doing this could be dangerous, should you bind someone to you completely, they will loose their fate, we will have no control over their actions, but neither will they, they will share your fate, whatever it may be. They will be bound by your will, unable to run their own lives. Should you no longer wish for them to be bound to you, and you attempt to release them, since they have been plucked from the weave they will die. They will stop aging as you do and they will live forever as you do, should you grow bored with your life and choose to allow yourself to die, so shall they.”

Mrellia could be herd crying behind Adam. “No, by The Fates, no. Adam please forgive me, I meant you no harm. I am sorry for what I did. Please forgive me, do not hurt me.” She babbled as she looked at him in wonder and fear.

Adam turned to look at the incoherent Mrellia, he saw it then, a small almost unnoticeable thread of light leading from her body to the large tapestry behind him. As if by instinct Adam took the thread in his hand and he knew Mrellia, truly knew her. He knew her life as it was, her desires, and her needs, everything including the fate that was in store for her. He turned to look at the three women still holding her thread. “We can not force you Adam though it is in her fate. However you have the power to change it if you wish.”

“How do I do it?” Adam asked frowning down at Mrellia.

“Guide her thread with your hand so that it passes through you and will it to merge with yours. Once it is done it simply takes an act of will to do whatever you desire.” Lachesis replied with sadness in her voice. “It is her fate and we can do nothing to change it.”

Adam guided the thread in his hands slowly into his body, as he did so Mrellia began to wail and thrash at her face. She could sense Adams desires and knew she was doomed. Once the thread intersected Adam he willed it to bind to his. With a rush Mrellia was bound to him. He could feel the entire length of the thread and all that it entailed, up until the end of her existence, he knew everything that was fated to happen to her from this moment on and it was his to manipulate as he willed.

He extended tentatively extended his will to the thread, manipulated it, he willed Mrellia to be bound to him, to be unable to lie to him, do be bent to his will and his every command. Her fate was now to be his servant until he felt she had atoned for her crimes. He knew what she had planned on using him for, what she was planning to do to the Earth and she had a lot to atone for. His will superseded hers, his happiness was her only desire. She could do nothing he would disapprove of, she could hurt no one unless it was in defense of others or herself.

Adam stepped up to the crying Mrellia and looked down at her “Mrellia as a spirit of desire what powers did you have?” He asked
She looked up ad Adam with tears and adoration. “I can feel the desires of people. If I concentrate on them I can read their every wish and desire. If I push harder I can get their deeper desires the ones that they suppress. I can pull these to the surface and manipulate their thoughts, and actions based on what I find. I can stop time, become invisible and incorporeal, I can speak telepathically, and lastly I can read and influence people’s minds and emotions.”

“Not any more, Mrellia.” Adam replied as he reached through the thread that attached them and stripped Mrellia of her powers one by one taking them into himself, as well as the knowledge how to use them correctly. He took all but three, the ability to turn invisible, incorporeal and speak telepathically he gave back to her, those he felt would be useful for her to retain.”

The other spirits stared on in shock as Adam stripped one of their sisters of her abilities and bound her to him. The Fates watched with approval. “Very good, you have punished her as well as made her a useful tool. Not what we expected from someone who used to be a mortal. However there is one more task we need you to do. One last test so to speak.”

Adam turned once again to the sister. “If I fail this last test?” he asked

“We will be forced to take back our gift and destroy both of you.” They stated coldly. “As long as you remain here in our realm you are still under our power until we release you.”

“What is this task then?” Adam asked giving The Fates complete attention.

“Look around at the spirits around us. Read their threads, learn who and what they are, do not follow the tread to its fate, just learn about them. Pick two and bring them into yourself.”

Adam looked around at all the beautiful women, he saw fear in their eyes, they were afraid of what he may do to them. He began to lightly touch their threads one by one, reading them, and learning about them. He learned their names, and their tasks. He also used his new powers to read their desires and dreams. Finally when he was satisfied with hat he had learned he chose two, the first was a platinum blond, her name was Illisis, she was a Spirit of Conscience and he learned she had a strong desire to see the outside world. She had never traveled to Earth as her job never required it. The second was a fiery red head, her name was Miranda, she was a Spirit of Anger, her desire was to destroy hurt Mrellia, to make her pay for what she had done on her last mission. Miranda was working with Jan and her husband when Miranda had stepped in with Adam and ruined everything she had done.

As Adam drew the two strands into himself Clotho stepped forward. “Interesting choices Adam. May I ask why you chose these two?”

Adam Smiled as he replied “Illisis wants to see the outside world, and a conscience is always a good thing to have. Miranda seeks vengeance against Mrellia, as long as Mrellia is with me that could cause me difficulties.”

“I see.” She whispered to him as she turned to the two spirits in question. The rest began to fade away into the mists not wishing to be involved in what was happening. “Very well, Adam chose one, and make her your servant. Not your slave like you did Mrellia, but your servant, release the other.”

The two spirits gasped in shock but stood their ground and stared at Adam. Adam watched the two women closely and thought about what he had been asked. He had to choose one to serve him. The choice was an easy one. But how to do it. He turned and looked at Mrellia. However she was kneeling at his feet staring at the ground and seamed to be no help. Finally Adam turned to the two spirits and extended his will to the strand of Illisis, Slowly he drew her to him, he combined his abilities as a Fateless with the powers he stole from Mrellia and extended love into her. Love for him, love for herself, love for others and all of that was intertwined with a desire to serve.”

When he finished Illisis walked up to him, and bowed, “How my I serve you.”

Adam helped her stand and brought his lips to hers. The kiss was gentle and compassionate. “Be my conscience love, help me to use my powers to help others and only for good.”

Illisis smiled at him love filling her eyes. “As you wish my love.”

Adam drew Illisis beside him and released Miranda’s thread from him with a wink in her direction. He then turned towards the fates. “Did I pass?”

The fates once again spoke in unison. “Adam Hunter, you are now truly one of the Fateless. Know this there will be others who will join your ranks over the many long years of your life, some will be as you, good and strong in your beliefs. Others will become tyrants and corrupt, it is the way of things. Do your best not to destroy your world when you fight them.”

Atropos stepped away from the other two and began to speak “For every action there is an opposite reaction. You were made Fateless because your life had been one sided leaning towards the negative. Others will be made Fateless because their lives were one sided towards the positive, they will not be given their own fates as you have instead they will be pulled from the weave and be given to a Fateless who has proven he or she can handle such responsibility. Should one be given to you their fate will be bound to yours. They will be your servant until you chose to give them back to us. They will be the only ones removed from the weave the may be returned, once their thread is again in balance. Good by Adam Hunter, enjoy your life, however long it might be.”

Adam started to ask another question when suddenly he and his two new servants were standing once again in the restaurant. The first thing Adam noticed was that everyone seemed to be frozen. Adam looked around at the restaurant in confusion. “What is going on, why is no one moving?”

“The fates sent us back in-between a moment in time so that you could fix what you needed to. The two women are still caught in the troughs of Mrellia’s passions. Since you took Mrellia’s powers it is up to you to fix it.” Illisis whispered into Adams mind as she gently rested her right hand on his shoulder.

Adam looked around the room and at the two ladies in question. He took a deep breath and approached Jan fist. He opened her blouse and gently slipped her breasts back into her bra. As his finger cam into contact with her soft subtle, his body immediately reacted rushing blood to his groin causing his cock to rise in his shorts. Adam did his best to ignore the fire running through his blood as he buttoned up the woman’s blouse.

He looked down at Jan as he tucked her blouse back into her skirt. Extending his consciousness out to her mind, slight tendrils of fog emerged from him and began to slip into her head. He felt the layers of lust and desire that were dominating the woman’s thoughts. Slowly he pealed each layer away and began to slip them back into the deep recesses of her mind. He felt Mrellia’s presence in his head as she mentally watched what he was doing. “Are you sure you need to do this master?” Her voice pouted in his head. “Think of all the fun we could still have.”

“If you’re not going to help me fix what you did then go away Mrellia.” Adam growled at her with his thoughts.

Mrellia continued to pout, whit a humph she began to guide Adam in his attempt at retuning Jan to the woman she originally was. Mrellia told Adam where to place her desires and wants, where they were originally buried in her mind or her dreams. After a few minutes Adam had returned Jan as close to the woman that she was, as he could. There would still be lingering effects caused by what happened. She would forever have an inclination towards her daughter and towards Adam, a deep rooted desire to see them together, that Adam could not remove without removing a big part of what made Jan, Jan.

Mrellia smiled at the knowledge that Jan would still be bound to her master in some way. She wanted him to be loved and to love others and he felt one mortal woman was not enough for him, especially not that young tart he had chosen, she had no experience in how to please a man, and her desires were base and basic. Jan on the other was an experience woman who could truly please her master.

When it was all done Adam was quite surprised by what he had found, and now understood why Mrellia had chosen Jan in the first place. The woman was bisexual and voyeuristic, she loved to watch men seduce and have sex with young teens and girls. She had helped her husband on two occasions seduce Gingers babysitters. The first when Ginger was two until she was five the second when Ginger was five until she was seven. Both encounters started when the babysitter was only twelve and ended when the girl had found her first boyfriend. The argument that Jan and her husband Thomas were having was about Thomas wanting to seduce one of Gingers friends. It was not about Thomas wanting to seduce the girl so much, as it was about Jan bringing the subject up in front of Ginger. Thomas felt it was inappropriate, but Jan felt Ginger had a right to know that her father wanted to seduce one of her friends.

Adam turned to the young girl and frowned. Both at the position in which she was sitting, her legs wrapped over the chair exposing her thirteen-year-old pussy, staring in the direction of her mother with a look of shock on her face as a small amount of his cum leaked from her lips, and at his body’s reaction to her exposed wet cunt. He quickly grew hard at the sight. Pushing down the desires that were rising in his mind he walked over to the young girl and gently lifted her legs from the arms of the chair and lowered them back to the seat. He looked to the floor at the shredded remains of her panties and new there was nothing he could do to cover her crotch. He slid her back in the seat so she was seated comfortably as he grabbed a napkin and whipped his come from her soft lips.

He entered her mind just as he had done with her mother and again commanded Mrellia to assist him in restoring her as best they could. He restored her mind and her desires back to their original place, except for, just like her mother, a deep rooted desire for Adam. It was Illisis who informed him that it would be better for all concerned to leave the desire intact. “If you take their desire for you away, they will become consumed with guilt over what they had done with you and what they allowed you to do to them. Leaving that desire will allow them to rationalize it and to cope with what happened here.”

Adam understood what Illisis was telling him and agreed that in the end it was better this way. Though he did make himself on concession and thinned the desire to as small a hold as he could. They would feel it only as needed to allow their conscience to accept what happened. He looked around at the scene and then had Illisis turn invisible. As he prepared to return time to its normal flow, he had a feeling that something was wrong. Looking around he noticed a grin on Mrellia’s face.

“What is it you are not telling me Mrellia?” He growled at her, his fingers once again coming to her neck.

“Nothing that will cause you harm Master I promise.” She squeaked a look of fear coming to her eyes.

“Tell me or I swear I will end your existence.” He growled again his voice becoming dangerously quiet.

“Yes, Master. Honestly it is no a big deal…”She squawked as his fingers tightened on her throat. “It’s just that there are some side effects of being what you now are that you are not aware of luv.

“Side effect?” He asked as his fingers stopped squeezing her neck. “Of being a Faithless? How would you know this, The Fates told me I was the first.”

“Not of being a Fateless Master, no the side effects are for being a creature of desire. When you took my powers you turned yourself into a creature of Desire. As long as you possess those powers you will be one.” She coughed out as she stepped back from him and leaned against the wall.

Adam felt his temper rising again, he was tempted to cut Mrellia’s thread, but he felt Illisis touch his mind and calm his thoughts. “Adam, listen to her, let her answer your questions. You still have need of her.” She whispered as she became visible again at his side her arms wrapped in his.

Adam took a deep breath “Why did you not tell me of these side effects when I asked you about your powers?”

Mrellia gave Adam a seductive grin and winked. “Because they are not part of my powers they were a part of what I was and you now are.” She purred as she walked seductively up to Adam and ran her finger along his jaw. “The side effect is desire. Any person that you find attractive and spend any time with will begin to desire you, and you will desire them. The more time you spend with them the stronger that desire will become, the only release is through orgasm. Eventually you both will be driven mad with it, it will consume you. As an immortal being you will have a little more control, once you have release it will temper down. A mortal however who has been driven mad with the desire will never be the same again. It will break them and destroy their mind. There will be no release after that point, they will desire you and nothing but you for the rest of their lives.”

Adam looked at Mrellia in horror, then he looked at Illisis and then back at Mrellia “It is affecting you two isn’t it?”

Illisis clung to Adam a little tighter and laid her head on his shoulder with a sigh “I have begun to feel its effects sir, but it is nothing I can not handle yet. As a spirit of fate we have some resistance to it.”

Mrellia gave Adam a Cheshire Grin, I am no longer a spirit of fate, you stole my powers and essentially turned me mortal. I now am bound to you and so I have no such protections. I assure you master I am feeling it in all it’s wonderful glory. Soon I will be consumed by it and released from this torment.” She purred as she slid her fingers along his cock.

Adam looked at Mrellia in astonishment. “You want to be driven mad, why?”

“Because then I will not care any more that I am your slave, It will not tare me apart every time I have to do your bidding, every time I try and reach out to the fools around me and feel nothing. You have turned me into one of them!” She yelled as she spun around to in point at Jan and Ginger. “I hate you, but I love you, you made sure of that. I hate what I have become and I hate the things you will make me help you do. All I crave all that I am is to spread and consume desire, it is what and who I am. Now thanks to you I can’t.”

Adam was taken back by the rage that was coming from Mrellia. He was shocked, and hurt. “What am I doing, I am forcing her to serve me. She is right I stole her powers form her and now I have to deal with the consequences of my actions. Do I have the right to enslave her though, she is a living thinking being…”

His thought were interrupted by Illisis purring into his mind. “Sir remember she is being punished by The Fates. Her crimes were heinous and this is her punishment, she is no supposed to like it, that would negate the fact that it is a punishment. She is being made to serve very people she herself tried to enslave.”

Adam understood what Illisis was saying but he did not have to like it. That would make him no better than Mrellia. “Thank you Illisis. And thank you Mrellia for that understanding of your feelings, I will think on what you both have told me.” Adam replied as he pushed Mrellia’s fingers off his cock.

Mrellia scowled at Illisis whose only response was to wrap her arms around Adam and grin at Mrellia.

Adam separated himself from Illisis and started pacing. “How do I turn this off Mrellia?” He asked as he stopped to look ad Jan and Ginger. “I can’t have every woman I find attractive wanting to have sex with me.”

Mrellia looked at Adam in shock. “Turn is off…” She sputtered “Why in hell would you want to turn it off.”

Adam scowled at Mrellia “As I said, I do not want every woman I find attractive wanting to have sex with me all the time. I would get nothing done and I would be unable to function.”

Mrellia grinned wickedly at Adam “I did not say it only affected women Adam. Anyone you are attracted to will be affected, age, sex, marital status none of that will matter, as soon as you feel even the slightest desire for them, they will start to desire you.” She laughed.

“That just makes it worse, I can not function while having every one around me being turned on by my mere presence. Now answer my question, I order you. How do I turn it off?!”

“You don’t, Adam, there is no way to just turn it off. You can suppress its effect, it will not stop it but it will cause it to take longer before it starts to affect those around you. Eventually however you will have to give them and yourself release. You will know when the time is right when you can not be around them without getting sexually aroused. If you let things go for more than a day after this point they will be driven mad with desire. Your desire for them will reflect their level of desire for you.”

Adam’s shoulders slumped in defeat. “How long does it take?” He asked with a sigh.

“On average with constant contact a mortal can last for three days before the desire overcomes them, if you suppress it you can make it last a week. Under conditions of casual contact, say a few hours a day under normal conditions they have a week, if you suppress the power then they will have two weeks.” Mrellia replies with a grin. She was enjoying this a lot. She hated that she had to warn Adam about it, but she was enjoying seeing it torment him.

Adam lifted his head and squared his shoulders. He looked at Mrellia and scowled. “Tell me how to suppress it.”

“It’s easy, if you concentrated you will see an aura of fog like tendrils around you. The tendrils are extending out and touching people. Simply will the tendrils to be less than they are.”

Adam began to concentrate on his aura and slowly the tendrils became visible he saw them extending out, one to Illisis, one to Mrellia and one each to Jan and Ginger. He could also see that the tendrils heading for Jan and Ginger were blocked by something. Adam concentrated on the tendrils willing them to be less than they were. The smiled as the tendrils grew smaller and smaller. He tried to will them into nothingness, but the strain was too much, no matter how hard he tried the tendrils remained. He could make them microscopically small but he could not stop them entirely.

Suddenly an idea came to him. “It could not be that easy could it.” He thought with a smile.

Adam again extended his will to the tendrils pulling them away from the four women, slowly inch by inch the tendrils slipped out of the women and back into his body. As the tendril left Mrellia she gasped in shock as she felt the flood of desire for Adam slow to a trickle and then stop. “How did you... that is imposable.” She exclaimed.

Adam smiled even more as the tendrils retreated into him. Sweat started to form on his brow, as he pulled the last of the aura in and contained it. His smile turned into a frown and an exclamation of rage however as soon as he stopped concentrating on the tendrils and they shot out once again to the four women. “Damb it!” he yelled. “I almost had it!”

Illisis gently returned her hand to Adams shoulder “It is ok, my love, you were able to stop it for a second. I believe in you, with practice you might learn better control over it. Remember the Spirits of desire use this effect as a tool, they never ever considered turning it off.”

Adam closed his eyes and took deep heavy slow breaths. He brought his emotions under control and started to think on what his next step should be. His eyes snapped open and he once again looked at Mrellia. “When all of this started you said that…” Adam closed his eyes as he tried to remember the words Mrellia used. “I can tell you right now, nothing we do from this point forward will have any impact on that little scene we just witnessed. They are free to do as they or you desire. The husband is now effectively out of the picture, he just does not know it yet… What did you mean by that?” He asked as he opened his eyes.

“The man’s fate was decided before we entered the restaurant, when he stormed out of here he decided to go for a walk. At first he was going to take a drive, but he could not bring himself to leave his daughter here with no way home, so instead he went for a walk. Two blocks from here as he was walking down a back alley he herd a girl scream. He ran to investigate and found two teen boys trying to rape a girl. He will come to her defense and as she runs off to get help, one of the boys will stab him to death. The youths will then run off.”

Adam again felt himself growing angry at Mrellia. He could not believe how cold and heartless this woman was. “And you thought it would be a good idea for us to seduce and rape his wife and daughter while he was lying in an alley alone and dieing!?” He yelled.

Mrellia was shocked by Adam’s outburst. “His fate is sealed; there is nothing that we can do to stop it.” She exclaimed.

“Maybe not, but did you ever consider what effect it would have had on these two!?” He roared as he pointed to Jan and Ginger “when they discovered that while their father and husband lay dieing in an alley they were having sex with a stranger in the middle of a restaurant!”

Mrellia simply shrugged her shoulders. “Not really, at the time I really did not care.”

“You cold heatless bitch!” Adam yelled as he charged Mrellia, the back of his hand connecting squarely with her jaw.

Mrellia when sprawling into the back of the restaurant in a heap, Adam continued his charge until he was over her prone form. His anger raging in his blood. Suddenly he stopped and took a deep breath. With a flash he spun around and grabbed at something in the air. With a yank he tugged what he had grabbed into himself and suddenly Miranda appeared beside him, fear and shock on her face. Adam looked at the Spirit of Anger and growled. “You want to join us, fine, you have made your choice, and you are now mine.” With a swipe of his hand he severed her link to the weave and bound her fate to his. He did not know how he did it and in his rage induced haze he did not care.

Miranda screamed as she felt herself torn from the weave of fate and fell to the ground beside Mrellia. Illisis simply watched the entire scene unfold and smiled. Adam was doing as far as she was concerned, what was right.
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Posted 17 October 2010 - 10:42 PM

Another great update. For me, personally, I found that whole strands of Fate thing to be confusing. Not in your story, just in general from what I've seen in literature, movies, etc. from the past, that's all. Again, awesome Telgar.
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Posted 18 October 2010 - 09:08 PM

Had to read it over a few times to work out everything hope to keep up with it now.
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Posted 21 October 2010 - 10:05 PM

Chapter 3: Lust

Adam still felt anger, he was sure that once he had stopped Miranda, that the unnatural anger he felt would dissipate. He looked down at his newest slave as she lay on the ground at his feet. He knelt down and shook her a few times. When she did not move he began to lightly slap her. “Wake up Miranda!” He growled.

Miranda stirred and then jumped away from Adam. She looked at him with fear. “What have you done to me.?

“I think I bound your fate to mine. Somehow I severed your thread from the weave while it was bound to me. If I remember what Clotho told me correctly you are now bound do me forever, your fate is mine to do with as I please.”

Miranda cringed at the thought “Why, why have you done this to me?” She asked as tears began to form in her eyes.

“Why! You have the gall to ask me why!” Adam yelled as he pointed to the unconscious form of Mrellia. “That is why, you attacked me, and in return I attacked her. You are lucky I stopped at binding you to me, I was tempted to cut your thread entirely. I still might, unless you tell me why I am still getting angry.”

Miranda sighed “It’s the rage curse. It is one of our abilities, it makes the victim slowly become angrier and angrier until they explode in a rage. Until it runs its course there is no way to stop it.”

Illisis looked at Miranda and Adam. “That is not, entirely true Adam. There is one other way to break a Spirit of Anger’s curse, but you won’t like it.”

“What is that?” Adam asked his impatience growing.

“You need to break the effect of the rage with another emotion, one just as powerful. The only one we have at our disposal currently is desire.”

Adam scowled at Illisis and shook his head in an attempt to control his temper. “And just who am I supposed to inflict this on.” He growled through clenched teeth.

Illisis simply looked at Miranda “Let the punishment fit the crime.

Miranda began to shake her head and tears began to flow freely down her cheeks. “No, please, no, no, no.”

Adam could not believe what he was hearing from Illisis. Her voice broke through his rage and into his thoughts “She did this to you, it is only right that she be involved in correcting it. Who else would you suggest, Ginger, Jan, Mrellia while she is unconscious, myself? It is only right that the punishment fit the crime, you do not have to truly force yourself on her. You can use your aura, open the pipe that is feeding her, and fill her with desire for you. It will in turn fill you with desire for her. Once your mutual desire is sated you will be free of the Rage Curse.

Adam could not believe what Illisis was telling him, but he knew that he had to do something, turning to Miranda, Adam tried his best to concentrate on his aura. His concentration kept slipping and his mind kept drifting back to his anger at Mrellia. Slowly bit by bit he was able to open the link to his aura. As the desire for and from the women slowly overpowered his rage Adam found he was able to concentrate on his aura better. “Adam, stop you are effecting all of us, you want to effect only Miranda.” Illisis gasped to his left.

Adam tried to concentrate on the feeds to Illisis and Mrellia, he could not seam to get a hold of them, passion and desire poured form and into his body. The flood of emotion pushed the tendrils larger and larger. Adam felt himself becoming more aroused than he had ever been in his entire life. Illisis walked over to him and grabbed him by his shoulders and drug him to the ground their lips locking in a passionate kiss as she fought with the zipper of his jeans. Another set of fingers began to stoke along Adams cock, as Miranda joined in to help Illisis remove Adams pants. Illisis broke her kiss with Adam panting with desire. Only to be replaced by a bruised Mrellia. “Finally, I get some release.” Mrellia purred into Adam’s ear as she brought her lips to his. “I did not think you had it in you my love.”

After a few tries, Illisis and Miranda managed to free Adams cock from his pants, As Miranda engulfed his inflating cock in her mouth, Illisis pulled Adam’s pants from his legs and tore his underwear from his body. Miranda quickly started sucking as much of Adam’s cock into her mouth as she could, her head bobbing up and down its full length, her tongue licking along the shaft and across the bulbous tip, lapping up his pre-cum as fast as it was produced. Illisis’s hands massaged Adams balls while she moved Adams legs apart so that she could get between them and lean in to lick the base of his cock and his testicles.

Mrellia lifted her dress over her head and dropped it to the floor, she lowered her cunt to Adam’s mouth as Adam began to lick and suck on her pussy. His fingers slid in-between the woman’s lips quickly becoming coated in her juices. Once his fingers were thoroughly coated, Adam slid them form her pushed and them into her ass. Adam quickly sucked Mrellia’s engorged clit into his mouth and started licking on the tip, while his fingers slid in and out of Mrellia’s ass. Suddenly Mrellia began convulsing in orgasmic bliss as her body was overcome by Adam’s manipulations.

The manipulations of Adams cock and balls by Illisis and Miranda were causing Adam much difficulty as he felt his balls start to tingle, he was going to cum soon. Knowing he has two more women to take care of he pulled Mrellia’s limp body off of his face and tried to sit up. Miranda looked up at Adam with eyes filled with passion as her head continued to bob on his swollen blood engorged cock. Adam fell back against the floor as he felt Illisis tongue his balls. She sucked them into her mouth and licked them vigorously.

Adam knew if he did not stop them soon he was going to cum in Miranda’s talented mouth. He was not ready to finish just yet. “Miranda, Illisis stop, please.”

The two women barley heard Adams please, after a few seconds of thinking about math equations, Adam was able to regain his composure enough to pull himself away from the two women. They stared at him with madden desire as Adam ordered Miranda to get on all fours with her ass in the air. Once her ass and pussy came into view He grabbed his rock hard cock and guided it into Miranda's dripping snatch. With a single push he felt his cock slid into her, almost immediately he felt resistance to his intrusion and with a shock he realized that she was still a virgin.

Adam pulled his cock out of her and ordered Illisis to suck it. The blond Spirit quickly grabbed his cock and sucked it into her warm moist mouth, Illisis took in as much of Adams cock as she could, licking and sucking until it slid into her throat, Adam almost came right then.

Adam slid his fingers into Miranda’s pussy once again coating them in lubrication. Once he felt they were sufficiently coated he pulled them from her and pushed them into Miranda’s ass, using her own juices to lubricate her.

Once Adam felt that Miranda was sufficiently lubricated he pulled his cock form Illisis’s mouth and guided it into Miranda’s ass. He pressed his cock slowly in, with each stroke he was able to move another inch deeper into her. Miranda tossed her head back and moaned as Adam fucked his cock in and out. After a few more strokes Adam felt his balls slap against Miranda’s cunt as their hips came together with his seven inch cock buried completely in her ass. “Fuck me, Fates yes, fuck my ass, fuck me harder.” Miranda screamed as her arms turned to rubber and she laid her face on the floor.

As Adam fucked into Miranda’s tight ass he looked over to Illisis, who was viciously masturbating herself while she watched. “Are you a virgin too Illisis?” He asked

“Yes I am but it is yours my love, take it. Please fuck me now.”

Adam continued to fuck his cock into Miranda, using every trick he could think of not to cum but her ass was just to much for him and he blew his first load into her ass, as she orgasmed around his cock.

Adam pulled out of Miranda and looked down at his cock. The smell was overpowering. Mrellia quickly grabbed a cloth napkin form the nearby table and soaked it in the water glasses. Using the now wet cloth, she cleaned his cock off and then began to suck it back to hardness. Once Adam was again ready to go, she smiled up at him “As a Spirit of Desire I have had to do much worse my love. Now go fuck Illisis before you drive her mad.”

Illisis crawled across the floor towards Adam and pushed him onto his back. She straddled his chest and kissed him passionately, their tongues dueling in his mouth. Grabbing his cock she guided it to her waiting cunt and slid down. As he, felt her moist lips engulf his rod, he let out a moan. She smiled at him as they broke their kiss and she completely impaled herself on his cock.

Adam felt his cock tear through her maidenhead and burry itself deep within her body. His cock came to sudden and painfull stop as it reached her cervix. Illisis laid her body back down onto Adams chest and passionately kissed him once again as she rocked her hips and fucked her recently plucked pussy on his cock. It did not take Adam long to get the rhythm of his thrusts to match hers. After a few strokes Adam rolled Illisis onto her back and started fucking her pussy as hard as he could.

Illisis tossed her head back with a moan of pleasure as Adam began to fuck her pussy with a vengeance. Adam lowered his mouth to Illisis’s breast and sucked her nipple into his mouth, licking vigorously with his tongue. Illisis started to buck as the sensations ran through her body. Her fingers clawed at the carpeting and her back arched as she let out a scream of passion as multiple orgasms tore through her body. She continued to scream and thrash as Adam started to work on her other breast. Adam fucked her through two more orgasms before felt the tell tail tightening of his balls that meant he was about to cum. With one last thrust of his cock deep into Illisis as he could his, cock pumped spurt after sprit of his fertile seed deep into her waiting womb.

As Adam came down from his orgasm, he felt a strange sensation in his chest. As if something or someone was pulling at him. He closed his eyes and concentrated on the sensation. It took a few seconds before he realized it was his string of fate. A choice needed to be made, he was at a crossroads. He had just cum in Illisis and she was ovulating, he needed to decide if he was going to become a dad or not. He opened his eyes and smiled at his love. “Congratulations, mom.” He whispered to her as he brought his fingers up to caress her cheek.
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Posted 25 October 2010 - 10:50 PM

Another small update

Illisis gave Adam a confused look as she lay panting on the floor of the restaurant. Her eyes grew large with understanding. She brought her hands to her stomach where she could feel the energies of the life that was just now forming. She smiled and closed her eyes, basking in the glow and pleasure of the new life. Turning her head to Adam her smile grew and her eyes filled with tears. “I am going to have your baby. I love you Adam.” She whispered to him as tears of joy streamed down her cheek to fall upon the carpeted floor.

Miranda and Mrellia felt the energy of the new life forming in Illisis’s womb and smiled at their sister. Both women were panting, covered in sweat from their recent activities. Miranda ran her fingers along Illisis’s naked body to her stomach and smiled. “Congratulations, sister.” She whispered as she kissed Illisis on the cheek.

Adam suddenly sat up and looked around. “Oh crap, what the hell are we doing?” He exclaimed as he jumped to his feet and started throwing the women’s clothes at them. “Get dressed, we still have a lot of work to do.”

He helped Illisis to her feet and kissed her passionately. “I love you too, and I wish we had more time to enjoy the moment, but right now we need to get time started back up for all these people and try to save a family.” He exclaimed as he pulled on his underwear and reached for his pants.

Adam quickly finished getting dressed and watched impatiently as the others followed suit. Once everyone was dressed he went into damage control mode and had Mrellia start cleaning up the left over mess of their recently completed orgy. He turned to Miranda and had her straiten up the table and chairs as he headed to the back room of the restaurant to find some air freshener. Once everything was straitened up and cleaned. Adam had Miranda and Illisis go invisible and positioned himself and Mrellia as close to their original location as possible. “What do I do now?” He beseeched Mrellia.

She gave him a wicked grin “Just will time to start again.” She replied as she brought his hands to her neck “Remember you were choking me luv, and you were very angry with me.” She purred in his ear.

Adam did his best to ignore her as he closed his eyes and willed time to start. The room was suddenly filled with the sounds of conversation and the clatter of plates, dishes and silverware. Adam let go of Mrellia’s neck and turned to Ginger and Jan. They both stared at him with looks of shock that bordered on fear. He quickly approached Jan. “Jan you and Ginger need to follow me, Thomas is in trouble and needs your help.”

Jan turned white as a ghost and stared at Adam. “What are you talking ab….” She started to say.

“No time for questions, your husband is in danger. Follow me NOW!” He yelled as he grabbed her by her arm and headed for the exit.

The maitre d’ quickly approached the group in an attempt to intercept them. Adam turned to Mrellia, “Take care of him, and I mean pay our bill, we don’t need any more trouble.” He growled as he dodged around the man and headed out of the restaurant still dragging a stunned Jan by the arm.
As Adam exited the restaurant, Jan suddenly came to a stop. Adam spun around to see a rather large man holding onto Jan by her waist. “Is this man hurting you miss?” The man asked as he glared at Adam.

Adam released Jan’s wrist and glared at the interloper. He new the man was only trying to help what appeared to be a woman in distress, but he knew they did not have time. He also could feel the hands of fate involved in the man’s actions. The Fates were actively working against him, trying to prevent him form saving Jan’s husbands life. He did not care, he had to try, everything that he was screamed it. As he got close to the man Adam knew he was out matched physically. The man had a good eight inches on him in height and a good foot in girth. “This is none of your concern, I am simply trying to get the lady and her daughter to her husband. He has been injured and needs them right now.” He growled.

Jan looked up at the man and smiled. “It’s alright sir, he is a friend. Thank you for your concern.”

The giant released Jan and stepped out of Gingers way. “If you say so, but if you need any help I will be here for a while.” He stated giving Adam a knowing glare.

Adam grabbed Jan by her arm once again and practically dragged her down the street. Ginger rushed behind them trying her best to keep up, tears streaming down her face. “What is going on, how do you know my dad is in trouble?” She asked through her tears.

“I just do, I can’t explain it right now, and I am sorry about what happened earlier, I can not explain that right now either, but I promise as soon as I can I will.” He stated looking back at the teen. “Miranda where the hell am I going, where is Thomas going to get stabbed?” He said in his mind.

Miranda guided Adam the two and a half blocks to the alley where Thomas was to meet his fate. As the rounded the last corner and the alley came into view, they heard a scream and a young teen came running out of the alley. Her blouse was torn and there was a large bruise forming on her cheek. She was screaming almost incoherently for help. Adam let go of Jan’s hand and ran up to the girl “What happened, what’s wrong he yelled at the near frantic girl.”

She stared at him in terror and jumped away form his touch. “Down the alley, they tried to rape me…He tried to help… They stabbed him…” She cried as her heal caught on the curb and she fell back landing hard on her ass.

Adam turned towards Ginger, “Call 911 and try and help her.” He yelled. Grabbing Jan by the arm again he ran as fast as he could down the alley.

They got ten feet into the darkening alley when Jan started yelling and trying to pull free from Adam’s grip. There lying in the middle of the alley was her husband Thomas Winters, with a large hunting knife sticking out of his gut. Adam released her and she ran to her husband. “Oh My God! Thomas!” She yelled dropping to her knees next to him.

Adam ran up to her and quickly grabbed her hand, stopping her form pulling the knife out. “Don’t if you pull it out he will bleed to death.” He said as he looked further down the alley to see two forms rounding the corner. “Wait here for the ambulance.

Adam stood up and ran after the fleeing youths. He rounded the bend and saw them fleeing down the street. The crowd was hindering their flight. Adam had no such issue, with a thought everything stopped. He ran down the street after them. Once he was ten steps away from the would be rapists he reached out and took their fates in his hand. Reading them he made a quick decision and allowed time to flow once more. The two teens started running again, The younger of the two looked back and saw that Adam had almost reached them, the quickly took a left turn and attempted to jump over a small rough iron fence, Adam twisted his fate and the young man came to a sudden and painful stop as his foot became caught in the fence and his ankle snapped.

The Second teen heard his friend screaming behind him and turned to see what had happened. Whit another twist of fate from Adam, the young man failed to notice the police officer who was rounding the corner and collided with her. The two fell in a jumbled heap. The teen’s head collided with the sidewalk and he lost conciseness.

Adam smiled as he rolled the unconscious teen off of the police officer and helped her to her feet. “What the hell is going on?” she asked looking with concern at the unconscious youth and the second one laying a few yards away with what appeared to be a broken leg.

“I am glad you are here officer.” Adam panted. “These two boys just tried to rape a young girl in an alley back there and stabbed a guy who tried to help her.”

“”What!” She exclaimed grabbing for her radio to call for assistance.

Adam continued to pant as if he had been running for a while. Bending at his waist and grabbing his knees as if he was exhausted. “Yeah!” In his mind he was telling Mrellia everything he was saying and asking her to ensure that Ginger and Jan knew their parts.

The officer pulled out her hand cuffs and started cuffing the unconscious boy when Ginger came running up with tears in her eyes. “Did you get them? Is this the guys that stabbed my dad?”

Adam looked at the teen and grimaced, “Yes Hun. Come on we need to get you back to your dad. You need to be with him right now.” He said as he turned to guide Ginger back to her dad.

“Sir, I need to ask you some questions.” The Officer replied as she grabbed Adam’s arm.

Adam looked at the officer “I am sure they can wait, her father is lying in an alley with a knife in his gut, I am not going anywhere, just taking her back to her dad.”

She let go of Adams arm with a nod. Adam and Ginger headed back to her dad, she was clutching onto Adam crying the entire way. All Adam could do was run his fingers through her long blond hair and kiss her forehead. They rounded the alley as the ambulance was arriving. Ginger broke form Adam’s grip and ran back down the alley to her father and mother, crying the entire way.

Miranda formed to Adams right with tears in her eyes. She looked up at him “I never knew, I swear I never knew it was like this. It was always just a job I never stayed around to see the results of my missions.” She cried as she grabbed Adams arm.

Illisis formed on his left, “I never get used to this. I hate this part.” She said sadly as she looked at Miranda. “We always had cleanup you know. We were not allowed to talk about it. They did not want it affecting the others. It was always, Empathy and Conscience that were left to pick up the pieces. Oh you guys got to come later after the crying was done and get them riled up about how horrible it was, fill them with rightous rage, but we always have to put them back together.” She said with tears streaming down her face.

Adam could see Mrellia with Jan and Ginger. She was holding the two crying women as the paramedics worked on their husband and father. Adam heard her voice in his head “Why does it hurt so much?”

“Because it does.” Was all he could say.
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Posted 26 October 2010 - 01:27 AM

Nice updates! Love how this is turning out Tel.
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The paramedics loaded Thomas into the ambulance as Illisis and Miranda once again became invisible. Adam approached the three ladies in the alley with grim determination. Jan turned to Adam wit tears in her eyes. “How did you know?”

“I can not go into that now, but as I promised earlier all will be explained. Please go with your husband, I will follow with Ginger. He needs you right now. GO!”

Jan gave him a quick hug. “Thank you.” She whispered in his ear as she gave him a kiss on his cheek and then rushed off to the awaiting ambulance.

As the Ambulance left the alley lights and sirens blaring, a male officer approached the three. “Hello, I am Officer Rollins. I have a few questions I need to ask you before you leave.” He stated.

Adam looked at the officer with a sigh. “Will this take long, I would really like to get her to the hospital where she can be with her mother.”

“No sir, I just need your statement as to what happened. I already have most of the information from the young woman that was originally accosted.”
Adam, Mrellia and Ginger gave the officer an abbreviated statement on the incident. They left out any mention on what happened at the restaurant, simply stating that Adam had joined them after Thomas left in anger. When asked how he knew Thomas was in trouble, he replied “I am not sure, I just got a bad feeling and followed it.”

Officer Rollins nodded his head, this was not the first time he had herd that explanation and he was sure it would not be his last. He himself had had similar feelings in the past, so he understood. “Officer Menendez asked me to thank you for your assistance in apprehending the two would be rapists.” Officer Rollins replied as he held out his hand.

Adam shook the officer’s hand and then led Ginger and Mrellia away from the alley. As the three walked down the street towards Adam’s car, Ginger leaned up against him, tears still coming down her cheek. As Adam leaned back into her she quickly took his hand in hers. Adam felt a jolt run through his body as she squeezed his hand. When the got to his old beat up Civic Adam held the passenger door open for the two ladies. Mrellia approached Adam with a smile and kissed him on the cheek as she spoke to him with her thoughts. “I am not suited for this kind of stuff, I will see you back at the house.”

Adam frowned at Mrellia. “Are you sure, you’re human now, you need to get used to dealing with this kind of stuff.”

Mrellia smiled back and hugged him “I know but not right now. Right now they need you. Fate will net let him go that easily.” As she thought this last part she smiled at him hugged Ginger and walked off. Looking over her shoulder she said aloud “I’ll meet you back at you house Adam.”

Ginger climbed into the car and Adam closed the door and come around to his side. He was surprised to find his door unlocked when he got there. Adam started up the engine and quickly headed to the hospital. Once they got there they found Jan in the waiting room crying. Ginger ran to her mother, and Adam feared the worst. “How is he?”

Jan looked up to Adam. “He is still in surgery, that’s all I know.”

Adam sat down in the chair next to Ginger and they waited. The two women were crying hard. As they waited Adam tried to reach out to Thomas’s fate, but it slipped through his fingers every time. He could not read, nor affect it in any way.

After over an hour of waiting, a nurse came out and called for Jan. Jan and Ginger both jumped up and headed to the Nurse. Adam started to stand up but thought better of it and sat back down. Jan and the nurse talked for a bit and then started to the back. Ginger looked over at Adam and then rushed over to him and grabbed his hands. “Come on.”

Adam reluctantly allowed the young teen to lead him to the back behind Jan and the nurse. They were led to a private room, where the Dr. and a Chaplin waited for them. As soon as Jan saw the Chaplin she started wailing and fell to her knees. Ginger let go of Adam’s hands and fell to her feet beside her mom holding her. The Dr. gave his condolences and said things about how they tried everything but the injuries were too severe. Adam was not listening, His mind was filling with anger at his helplessness. What was the use of giving him the abilities if he could not use them when he needed to?

As Adam grew angry with the Fates, He heard Illisis’s voice in his head. “They told you some things you would not be aloud to change my love. His fate was already locked in, be heartened by the fact they allowed you to lessen their pain and give them one last moment with him.”

Adam, growled and the Chaplin looked at him. Adam shook his head to waive the man off. “I can not help but feel responsible, if I had not let Mrellia control me, if I had not fooled around with them in the restaurant…”

“They would have sat there and finished their dinner, Remember Jan was angry at him, she would have finished their dinner and then expecting he had left probably taken a taxi home. They would not have found out until much later what had happened to him and then would have lost their chance to say good bye. You righted the wrong as best you could. Please do not beat yourself up over this. They need you now.”

“Me? Why the hell would they need me?”

Adam could feel Illisis smile. “They need someone to help them pick up the pieces of their life. Jan’s husband is gone, Gingers father. For some reason after the incident and the attack they have latched onto you. I can feel their compassion for you. I do not know why, maybe it is because you tried to help. Or a left over from the desire they felt. But they will now turn to you. I know it, I feel it. You need to be here for them.”

The Chaplin was doing his best to console the two grieving women. But neither one was listening to him. After a bit he stood back and continued to wait. The Dr. chose this moment to make his escape. Adam walked up to the two and sat down beside Jan. She looked up to him and threw her arms around him. “What am I going to do? I can’t goon without him. He was everything.” She cried into his shoulder.

Adam did not know what to say he just put his arms around her and held her tight. Ginger came around to Adams other side and hugged onto him as well. The Chaplin did not stay much longer then the Dr. seeing he was not needed he too made his exit. The three sat there in the privet room for a while like that, he two women crying and holding onto Adam, Adam doing his best to comfort them.

After a bit Jan finally got herself composed and smiled. “Thank you, I am so confused right now, but thank you for being here.”

“Not a problem. It’s the least I can do.” Adam replied guiltily.

Ginger continued to snuggle against Adam, her crying had subsided and she was slowly falling asleep in his arms. Jan smiled down at her daughter. “Today has been too much for her. Is it ok if I leave her here with you for a bit, I need to go see him?” Jan asked with concern for her daughter.

Adam tried his best to smile, tears were threatening to well up in his eyes. “She will be fine, I promise to be good. Go, go see your husband. We will be here waiting for you.” As he laid Gingers sleeping head onto his lap and began to run his fingers through her hair. He sat there for a while, running his fingers through her hair. “What am I going to do?” He thought to himself as he looked down at the young teen sleeping in his lap. “Yesterday I was nobody working in a dead end job. No hope of a family or a future. Now I am a near immortal being with powers beyond my wildest dreams. I have three beautiful women who respond to my every whim, a young sixteen girl who appears to be falling in love with me and now a beautiful woman and her daughter who just lost the most important person in their lives and are turning to me to help them.”

As Adam sat there contemplating all the things that had happened to him and those around him today he felt himself growing tired. He too had had an emotional rollercoaster ride. He laid his head on the back of the couch and gave into his fatigue.

He was startled awake by a hand on his shoulder. He jolted up, but was pushed back into the couch by the hand on his shoulder. “Shh, you will wake her up.” Whispered Jan.

Adam looked down at Ginger sleeping peacefully with her head in his lap. He started running his fingers through her long blond hair. Lightly tickling her ears as his fingers ran though them. Adam looked up at Jan. “So you do what you needed to do?”

“Yeah.” She whispered as she sat down next to Adam. Gently she brought her hand to Gingers shoulder and shook her awake. “Ginger, sweety, its time to go.”

Ginger slowly came awake and looked towards her mom. “Ok.” She grumbles as she lifted herself from Adams lap, rubbing her eyes and started crying again.

Jan jumped up and quickly took her daughter in her arms. “Oh sweety, I know, we will get through this some how.”

“Oh mom, I want to see him, I want to say goodbye.” She cried.

Jan held her daughter to her as she cried and looked towards Adam. “I’ll wait right here, once you two are ready let me know.”

Jan and Ginger headed out from the private room as Adam once again laid his head against the back of the couch. Just as he was starting to fall asleep he was jolted awake by the sound of crying. He looked up to see Jan and Ginger returning to the room. Ginger was clinging to her mom. “Is she going to be ok?”

Jan looked up. “Yeah, she just needs to get home and get some sleep.”

Adam led the two women to his car and drove them home. They pulled up to a nice two-story home in the outskirts of town. As they pulled into the driveway Jan turned to Adam. “Can you please stay the night? Its late and I would feel better with someone else in the house.”

“I am not sure if that is a good idea. You and Ginger have been through a lot today. The things I did earlier, I am not going to make excuses about them and they were not appropriate…”

Jan put her finger to Adams lips to quiet him. “Adam, I have no idea what happened at the restaurant, and right now I don’t care. What I do know is that when we needed help you were there. You tried to save Thomas and thanks to you we both got to say goodbye. If it was not for you the men who killed him would have gotten away. Please stay the night.”

“Are you sure, I mean you two have been through a lot?”

“Yes, Adam, besides you owe us an explanation for what happened today, how you knew Thomas was in trouble.” Jan replied, trying her best to smile as tears once again welled up in her eyes.

“Ok I’ll stay.” Adam replied.

Adam heard Illisis’s voice in his head “Good for you Adam, they need you. They need this.”

“Yes Adam, remember they are still connected to you.” Mrellia stated. “They will turn to you now that Thomas is gone, to fill the void in their lives. Do not be surprised if things get a little weird tonight.

“What do you mean by weird Mrellia?” Adam asked with concern

“Desire is on of the few emotions the stems form or leads to every other one. They are linked to you by a shared desire. They both have had a rollercoaster of emotional responses today. That link and your aura may cause them to turn to you for other forms of comfort. Mrellia replied.

“Be careful Adam, they need you tonight, how they respond to that need is up to them. Do not turn them away. Or you may do more harm than you intend. Remember the saying the rode to hell is paved with good intentions.” Illisis whispered into his ear as he felt her presence fade away.

Adam was a little astonished at what he had heard. They could not have meant what he thought they meant. Her husband had just died, there was no way that Jan would want to…

Adam’s thoughts were interrupted by Jan “Are you ok Adam, you look like something from bothering you?”

“No I am fine, I was just thinking. Trying to work in my head if it really is a good idea for me to go into that house with you tonight?”

Jan smiled at Adam as her face got inches from Adam’s. “And why would it not be a good idea for you to come into the house with me.” She whispered.

Adam took a deep breath, taking in the sent of her sweat, perfume and arousal. “This is why, you husband just died and…”

Jan pulled back from Adam as if he had slapped her and looked hurt. “Fine, don’t come in. Can you at least give me long enough to get the front door unlocked and help me get Ginger inside?”

Adam looked toward the back seat where Ginger was sprawled out, once more sleeping soundly. He looked back at Jan who was sitting in the front seat crying. “Jan I am sorry, I didn’t mean. I am sorry let me help you get Ginger in and then we can sit and talk.”

Jan wiped the tears from her eyes and quickly nodded. Adam got out of the car and came around to Jan’s side of the car. He opened her door and helped her from her seat. As she came to her feet she stumbled and fell into his arms. Adam helped her to her feet as he stared into her eyes. He felt a skip in the beat of his heart and then he was kissing her. Jan returned his kiss with passion, he body melting into his. As they broke the kiss, Jan blushed and quickly pulled herself from Adams arms. “Let me get the door.” She stammered as the headed around Adam to the front door.

Adam went back to the car and gently woke Ginger. “Hun you are home, you need to get up so we can get you in the house.”

Ginger rubbed her eyes and moaned, to be left alone. She started to curl up on the back seat, then looked over at Adam and smiled. “Hi Adam.”

Adam gently took her hand and helped her form his car. Ginger looked Adam in the eyes as she stood up, the smile on her face grew and she leaned in and gently kissed him on the cheek. “Thank you Adam, for everything.” She whispered as she put her arms around Adam and let him walk her into the house.

Adam and Jan helped a very tired Ginger to her room. As Jan started helping ginger remove her clothing to prepare for bed, Adam left the room “I’ll be down stairs.”

Jan looked over to Adam with a conspiratorial grin. “Oh, ok if you want to go, I’ll meet you down there once I get her in bed.”

As Adam headed down the stairs he once again wondered why he was here and were they really flirting with him?

Adam sat on the couch to wait. After about twenty minutes Jan cam down stairs to join Adam, she had changed as well, into black silk negligee and a see through shall. Adam felt a lump in his throat as she carefully sat next to him. “Ok Adam I believe you have a story to tell me.” She said with a slight smile and a twinkle in her eye.
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Posted 03 November 2010 - 09:26 PM

Great update Tel, sad the dad died.
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Posted 04 November 2010 - 12:07 AM

Glad you liked it Spaz, With all stories involving the paranormal, death is not always permanent. :)
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Posted 01 December 2010 - 06:33 AM

Chapter 4 Love

Adam started from the beginning of his day. Jan showed understanding with his descriptions of how things seamed to always go wrong in his life, she looked like she was going to cry when he told him about his date just leaving him in the middle of the restaurant. When he got to the part about Emily she smiled “She sounds like a very lovely girl. You have to call her back.”

Adam smiled at her comment “I intend to.” Was all he said as he continued his story.

As he finished Jan looked at Adam with a new found admiration. “So that’s how you were able to do what you did? Wow that is just insane.”

Adam brushed a loose lock of hair from in front of Jan’s face “So you believe me?”

Jan laid her head on Adam’s shoulder with a sigh “If I had not experienced a part of it, I would be calling you a liar and kicking you out of my home, but I was there and I can not dispute what I have seen with my own eyes. It is hard to believe and it is a lot to take in.”

Adam laid his head back on the couch and enjoyed the feeling of Jan snuggling against him. He wrapped his right arm around her and pulled her into a comforting embrace. Suddenly Jan jumped off the couch and turned toward Adam. “The others are they here watching us?”

“Um… No, I think they are at my apartment. Why?”

Jan grinned and at Adam as she chewed on he bottom lip. She cupped her hands in front of her and swayed her hips from side to side. “Can I meet them? Well I have already met Mrellia, but I would like to see the other two. They sound so exotic.”

Adam shrugged his shoulders. “I don’t see why not. It’s not like they are my pets or anything like that. I’ll ask them, if they want…”

Adam was interrupted by Mrellia, Illisis and Miranda’s appearance in the living room behind Jan. “Of course we want to Adam.” Illisis stated
Jan jumped at the sound of Illisis’s voice and quickly turned around. “Oh my, you scared the shit out of me.”

Illisis moved up to Jan with a worried look. “I am sorry if I made you defecate yourself, let me help you clean up.”

Mrellia and Miranda both started laughing at Illisis’s statement. Illisis looked at the two and back at Jan confused. “Did I say something funny?”

Jan looked just as confused as Illisis as to what was so funny. As recognition came to her face, she smiled at Illisis and brought her hand to Illisis’s shoulder. “I did not mean literally. It is a figure of speech. I just meant that you guys scared me when you just appeared like that.”

Illisis looked from Jan to the laughing Mrellia and Miranda. “I am glad the two of you find this so amusing. It is not my fault that we don’t get to get out as much as the rest of you now adays.” Turning to Jan “In today’s day and age there just is not that much call for Spirits of Conscience anymore. No one seams to care for what is right and wrong, they just want to have fun.”

Jan grinned as she pulled Illisis into a comforting hug. “You must be Illisis. I am very happy to meet you.” She stated as she patted the other woman’s back. “And I understand congratulations are in order.”

Illisis pulled back from the hug, slightly, and looked Jan in the eye. “Thank you.”

As the two women separated from their embrace, Mrellia and Miranda both watch with concern and a little worry. Jan turned towards the two waiting women. “I should be mad at the two of you, Mrellia for what you did to my daughter and I, Miranda for contributing to my husband’s death. However, for all that you did for us last night, I am not. I want to thank you for the assistance you gave Adam in his attempts to save Thomas.”

Mrellia and Miranda looked at each other and back at Jan, confusion evident on their faces. Jan simply smiled as she turned and sat back on the couch next to Adam. “So hun, where do we go from here, you obviously have some wonderful abilities, and I have some very curious desires?”

Adam frowned at Jan’s words. “WE, go nowhere, I have a lot of thinking to do and a lot of issues to settle, alone.” Adam replied, turning to the ladies standing in front of him. “I am sorry, to all of you but I have to figure this stuff out and as long as I have this aura affecting everyone I care about I can not risk any of you. I need to get a handle on my life and on my new abilities.

Mrellia frowned as she crossed her arms in front of her chest. “Adam Hunter if you think I am going to let you run off to Fates knows where by yourself to mope and wallow in self pity you are sorely mistaken. Besides you should all ready know how to use your abilities, you know everything I know.”

Adam shook his head, as Illisis spoke what he was thinking. “No he did not. He did not know about the aura. It seams he only gained knowledge on how to use the abilities, not on what they all were or their limits. The Aura showed that, It was an automatic ability not one he had to control, also he does not have any knowledge beyond what you already knew. Again the aura showed that, he discovered how to lessen it’s effect, you never even knew it was possible. I agree with Adam, he needs to go and discover his powers and limits, but I do not agree that he needs to go alone. She stated as Miranda started to interrupt. Turning her attention to Adam. “You should take one or all three of us, I recommend all of three of us. We are already bound to you, as Spirits the aura will have less of an effect on us and we are safe from being driven mad by its effects. Alone you will be vulnerable.

That last statement drew Adams undivided attention. “What do you mean I am vulnerable? The Fates said I was safe from harm?”

“From random harm yes, but one thing they left out was that any action you take that results in you being harmed or killed will result in you being harmed or killed. If you jump in front of a person trying to shoot someone and get hit by the bullet, you will still be shot and can still die. Every action has a reaction, you just have a little more control over the reaction, it is never random or controlled by any outside force. If you choose to isolate yourself, and someone comes looking for you meaning you harm, you can still be harmed as you isolated yourself from those who could have helped you.”

Adam considered what Illisis was saying and the looked at the three Spirits. “Mrellia, why the sudden change of heart? Earlier this morning you were ready to string me up and do anything you could to cause me harm for what I had done to you, now you are all indignant because I want to go away? He asked.

Mrellia looked around at the three other women, all three were watching her intently awaiting her reply. “Well, that was this morning, I was mad, but after the whole incident with Thomas and how you handled it… I don’t know, it moved me and now I find myself worrying about you. It is hard to explain, and if you did not do it to me then I can only blame myself or The Fates, but I care about you a lot and if you were to be hurt or die then I don’t know what I would do. Until you grant me my powers back I am bound to you just a completely as Miranda is. I have very few powers and no where else to go.”

Adam nodded his head and Miranda took Mrellia in her arms, hugging her close. “Ok well that explains Mrellia, what about you two?

Miranda’ head shot from Mrellia’s shoulder and she stared daggers at Adam. “What about me!” She growled. “You have the gall to ask WHAT ABOUT ME! I am bound to you for ever, your fate is mine. If anything happens to you I will share in that fate. Yes I got myself involved when I tried to get you to kill Mrellia, but that does not change the facts. I have everything to do with this. I have no desire to see you die, not to die myself. I will protect you with everything I have and subject myself to your every whim if it will keep me alive and you safe. Is that explicit enough for you!”
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Adam leaned back against the couch cushion in an attempt to get as far away from the angry Miranda. Illisis simple looked between the two and smiled wickedly at Adam. “Let this be your first lesson on spirits Adam, never ever anger a spirit of Rage, they can do very nasty things when angered. To answer your question what about me, you are going to be the father of my child. This baby is very special it is the first time a spirit has had a child that was not dictated by the fates, and it will be the child of a spirit of the fates and a Fatless. He or she will be very special and will need both of us to help him or her to grow into their full potential. Not to mention that I love you with all my heart and will never allow you to come to harm.”

As Miranda and Illisis were berating Adam about his lack of judgment, Jan slid her fingers down his stomach to his waist and slowly and discreetly began to unbutton his jeans. Adam finally noticed her actions when she had undone the last button and he felt his pants come loose. “What are you…?”

His question was interrupted by Jan removing his cock from his underwear and sucking it into her mouth. Adams head fell back against the cushion and a moan escaped his lips as Jan sucked him to full hardness. “I have wanted to get at this since I saw Ginger sucking ion it this afternoon.” Jan purred before once again sucking his full length onto her mouth.

Adam was astonished at the skill with witch Jan manipulated his member, and he once again moaned into the air as he felt his cock slide into her throat. Jan deep throated Adams cock as he fingers slid up to massage his balls. The three spirits watched in astonishment as Jan sucked Adams cock deeper into her mouth. With an even louder groan Adam arched his back and came. Jan quickly withdrew Adams cock from her throat and swallowed his cum. As she finished she extracted her mouth from his cock with a smile. “Wow that was better than I thought it would be.”

Adam recovered a few seconds later and stood from the couch. “This is exactly what I am talking about. I have had these abilities for less than a day and you ladies can not stop throwing yourselves at me, and I am unable to do anything to stop you or myself once it starts. Please let me go and try and get this all sorted out, if I don’t how can I go out of the house, go to work or visit my family if I have to worry that all to women will suddenly start trying to have sex with me every chance they get.”
Illisis put her arms around Adam and rested her head on his shoulder, “I understand, but I don’t have to like it. Very well we will give you your space but Miranda, Mrellia and I will be keeping an eye on you and come to you if you need us.”

Adam hugged her back with a smile. “Thank you my love. I will let you know as soon as I have something figured out. I hope it won’t take long, I do not want to miss out on our baby’s birth. But where are you ladies going to be while I am gone? I don’t think you can all stay at my place?”

“We will go home”, Illisis replied, “we may be your lovers but we are still spirits of fate and we have homes and families on that plane.”

“Ah, I did not think about that, I am glad you have someplace to go. I love you and I promise I will get in touch with you all soon.”

Jan stopped Adam by resting the palm of her hand on his chest. As she slipped his now deflated cock back into his underwear and buttoned up his jeans. “One question Hun, if you are planning on practicing with your abilities and we are not supposed to be around for fear of harming us, then who do you plan on practicing on, your powers affect others after all?”

Adam looked around at the women gathered around him and then bowed his head “I had not thought that far ahead. I just kind of hoped that I would be able to practice without effecting or harming anyone.”

Mrellia looked at Adam and frowned. “Well that won’t work at all, remember you have the powers of a spirit of desire you HAVE to use them. You will starve yourself if you don’t.”

“Starve myself, who do you mean?” Adam asked a little startled.

“Adam, did you really think you could use all these powers and abilities and not need to recharge. All the spirits not only create the feelings they are responsible for in others but we feed of it as well. The more desire you encounter the more recharged you will become, the more of your non-desire based powers you use the more drained you will become. Eventually you will have to recharge, your every day activities burn up small amounts of your energy and I am sure that your restraining of your aura is eating your power at a significant rate. Eventually you will need to bring out desire in someone, if you don’t you will starve and your instinct will take over.”

“My instinct?”

“Your instinct your base animalistic self, its only goal will be to feed, it wont care who or how, but in order for you to survive your conscious self will grow weaker as your energy is drained and you will loose consciousness. When that happens your Id will take over and search for a source of energy. At first it will simply feed of the latent desires floating in the air, but eventually it will need more, once it has enough energy to once again influence things it will begin to influence the people around you until it is stated and you are able to take control once again.”

Adam turned ghostly pale as Mrellia explained about his need to feed on the desire of others. “Are all of you like that?” He asked

Illisis and Miranda looked at each other and then back at Adam, “Yes and no.” Replied Illisis. “We all are energized and fed by the energies given off by mortals when they express extreme emotions. However I am fed by the feeling people give when they do good things or make amends for thee wrongs they have done.” So if I do not get enough food, I simply encourage people to do good and moral things.

“I am fed by anger and I am both happy and sad to say that I never have a need to worry about my energy levels as there seems to always be someone who is mad no matter where I go. “Miranda replied. “However Mrellia is right the spirits of desire always have the hardest time, especially here in this land. People are very reluctant to express their desires or let themselves have fun.”

“It is not all hum and glum though Adam. “Mrellia stated with a grin. “Contrary to most people’s beliefs, desire is not always about sex, though it is the strongest and quickest way to recharge. People desire many things, new cars, better jobs, to be friends with a particular person, a specific house. As a spirit of desire, it was my responsibility to inflame though desires as well, to encourage them to do better in their lives or to make changes so they can achieve these desires. So there are other ways to recharge yourself than making everyone want sex, it’s just faster and more fun.” Mrellia finished with a giggle.
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