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This is just the beginning of an arc I have in mind with the plan of letting members fill in the holes inbetween....total anarchy to ensue. This is the only portion that is a direct simulation to something else. all the writing from here will be totally original.
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OVER BLACK: WORDS IN BLUE FLAME APPEAR
DRAWING JAM —PROGLUE
CUT TO:
DAYLIGHT. Moving over the skyline of Jabville...
Closing in on an office building... On a large window...
Which SHATTERS to reveal-
INT. OFFICE, HIGH RISE -- DAY
A man in a MICHEAL MYERS mask holding a SMOKING SILENCED PISTOL
ejects a shell casing. He turns to a second
man wearing a LEATHERFACE mask, who steps forward with a
CABLE LAUNCHER, aims at a lower roof across the street and
FIRES a cable across. Micheal secures the line to an I-beam
line- CLAMP on- sends a KIT BAG out then steps OUT the
window...
EXT. HIGH-RISE -- DAY
...into space. The men SLIDE across the DIZZYING DROP...
landing on the lower roof across the street.
EXT. DOWNTOWN JABVILLE – DAY
A MAN on the corner, back to us, holding a JASON VOORHEES style HOCKEY MASK. An
SUV pulls up. The man gets in, puts on his mask. Inside the
car- two other men wearing FREDDY KRUGER AND CHUKY masks.
FREDDY
Thats all 5 in place. Let's do this.
CHUCKY
That's it? 5 lurkers?
FREDDY looks up from loading his automatic weapon.
FREDDY
There's two on the roof. Every guy
is an extra share. Five shares is
plenty.
CHUCKY
Six shares. Don't forget the guy who
planned the job.
FREDDY
Yeah? He thinks he can sit it out
and still take a slice. Thinks hes some evil genius. See how smart he is when we take off with all the drawings and sell them ourselves.
FREDDY cocks his weapon. CHUCKY pulls the car over in front of
the JAB corporate office.
EXT. ROOFTOP, JAB OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS
LEATHERFACE PRIES open an access panel-
MICHEAL
What exactly are we going to do with this shit after we steal it?
LEATHERFACE
Sell all of JABSs original artwork, unreleased or otherwise, sketches, electronic drawings, ALL OF IT. Online.
MICHEAL
And people are really going to pay for this?
LEATHERFACE pulls out thick bundles of blue CAT 5 cables.
LEATHERFACE
Jab is one of the most popular comic artists in the adult industry and word is he has thousands of his pieces stored here. His fans will pay to bootleg that shit. And the boss is gonna split the shares.
EXT. JAB COPORATE OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS
JASON, FREDDY AND CHUCKY get out of the car and march into
the office building CARRYING ASSAULT RIFLESINT.
JAB OFFICE -- DAY
The Security Guard looks up- FREDDY FIRES into the ceiling.
The members guarding the vault scream. CHUCKY CRACKS the Security Guard.
As FREDDY AND JASON round up the hostages, one of the cute female guards JADED_BLUE
presses a button mounted beneath her desk- a SILENT ALARM.
EXT. ROOFTOP -- DAY
LEATHERFACE watches the alarm PING his handheld.
LEATHERFACE
Here comes the silent alarm.
(touches a button)
And there it goes. That's funny. It
didn't dial out to 911- it was
trying to reach a private number.
Behind him, MICHEAL RAISES his silenced HANDGUN.
MICHEAL
Is it a problem?
LEATHERFACE
Naw, I'm done here.
MICHEAL SHOOTS. LEATHERFACE SLUMPS. MICHEAL picks up his bag and
FORCES OPEN the roof access door...
INT. STAIRWELL, JAB OFFICE -- DAY
...and speeds down the stairs, to the basement. He SLAMS
open the door...
INT. VAULT ROOM, JAB OFFICE -- DAY
...and comes face to face with a huge VAULT.
INT. LOBBY, JAB OFFICE -- DAY
FREDDY and CHUCKY move down the line of hostages- CHUCKY hands
each Hostage OBJECTS from a bag. A GRENADE. FREDDY follows,
PULLING THE PINS.
FREDDY
Obviously, we don't want you doing
anything with your hands other than
holding on for dear life.
BLAM. CHUCKY is BLOWN OFF HIS FEET- FREDDY AND JASON DIVE
for cover- the manager STEVE_H steps out of his office, SHOTGUN
in hand. Hostages SCRAMBLE, CLINGING their grenades...
FREDDY and JASON cower as STEVE_H FIRES again.
FREDDY
He's got three left?
JASON raises TWO fingers. FREDDY squeezes off a SHOT. Then
STEVE_H FIRES. FIRES again. FREDDY looks at JASON, who
nods. FREDDY JUMPS UP.
STEVE_H FIRES- FREDDY GRUNTS as buckshot CLIPS his
shoulder. FALLS. STEVE_H moves in for the kill,
FUMBLING for new shells. JASON STANDS- SHOOTS him.
JASON picks up the shotgun. FREDDY checks his wound- it's
superficial. He struggles to his feet.
FREDDY
Where'd you learn to count?!
JASON's mask stares him down. FREDDY heads for the stairs in
the back. JASON starts loading fresh shells into the shotgun.
STEVE_H
You have any idea who you're stealing
from? You and your friends are FUCKING DEAD!!!
JASON looks down at him. Says nothing.
INT. VAULT ROOM, JAB OFFICE -- DAY
MICHEAL at the vault door, turning the tumblers.
FREDDY walks in.
MICHEAL
I got the code. Fairly simple surprisingly.
FREDDY
Boss was right.
MICHEAL
Why so easy?
FREDDY
Who would want to steal drawings? Why have major security?
MICHEAL shrugs. Grips the WHEEL BOLT and SPINS it.
FREDDY
Where's the alarm guy?
MICHEAL
Boss told me when the guy was done I
should take him out. One less share.
FREDDY
Funny, he told me something
similar...
MICHEAL FREEZES. The wheel SPINS to a STOP- the vault DOOR
CLUNKS OPEN- MICHEAL GRABS for his weapon- SPINS to see FREDDY
SHOOT. FREDDY steps over MICHEAL into the vault...
INT. VAULT, JAB OFFICE -- DAY
...which is filled with an eight-foot MOUNTAINs of sketch books, laptops and hard drives.
INT. LOBBY, JAB OFFICE -- DAY
FREDDY walks into the lobby, straining under several DUFFELS
filled with DRAWINGS. He DUMPS them. Looks at JASON. LAUGHS.
FREDDY
C'mon, there's a lot to carry...
INT. LOBBY, JAB OFFICE -- DAY
JASON walks back into the lobby with two more DUFFELS. Sets
them down on an ENORMOUS PILE. FREDDY looks at it.
FREDDY
If this guy was so smart he would
have had us bring a bigger car.
FREDDY JABS his pistol in JASON's back. Takes his weapon.
FREDDY
I'm betting the boss told you to
kill me soon as we loaded the loot.
JASON
(shakes head)
No. I kill the bus driver.
FREDDY
Bus driver? What bus-
JASON steps backwards. SMASH. Hostages SCREAM as the TAIL
END OF A YELLOW SCHOOL BUS ROCKETS through the front of the
office, SLAMMING FREDDY into the window the glass siderwebs.
JASON picks up FREDDYS weapon. Another masked thug OPENS the rear
door of the bus. JASON SHOOTS him. Then loads the bags onto
the bus. The wounded STEVE_H watches him. In the
distance: SIRENS.
STEVE_H
Think you're smart, huh? Well, the
guy who hired you's just do the same
to you...
JASON tilts his head in amusement. Shakes his head.
STEVE_H
Sure he will. This town used to have respectful citizens...
JASON turns back to STEVE_H. Crouches over him.
STEVE_H
Honor. Respect. What do you
believe, huh? What do you bel-
JASON slides a GRENADE into the man's mouth. A PURPLE THREAD
is knotted around the pin.
JASON
I believe that if it makes you feel good...
JASON PULLS off his MASK. In the
reflections of the glass DEBRIS behind the Bank Manager we
see GLIMPSES of a pencil mustache and messy black hair. VON PATRICK.
VON PATRICK
...do it.
STEVE_H's eyes go wide. VON PATRICK rises, strolls
towards the bus, the purple thread attached to the grenade
pin UNRAVELLING FROM THE PURPLE LINING of his jacket as he
walks. VON PATRICK climbs into the bus, SHUTS the rear door,
TRAPPING THE PURPLE THREAD...
EXT. SCHOOL, JABVILLE -- DAY
Kids pour out, heading onto a long line of school buses.
INT. JAB OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS
As the bus pulls out, the purple thread PULLS THE PIN. Hostages
scream and scurry away from the STEVE_H, who
shakes with fear as, with a FIZZ, the grenade does not
explode, but SPEWS RED SMOKE.
EXT. JAB OFFICE -- DAY
The School Bus pulls free of the office wall and pulls out onto
the street, SLIDING INTO THE LINE OF IDENTICAL BUSES HEADING
PAST THE OFFICE. Jabville citizens run to the bank to see what all the commotion is about...but its to late...gone.
What exactly IS VON PATRICK going to do with the drawings? Sell them for money? No...not his style...to simple...what act of appalling mischief might he commit NEXT?
This post has been edited by Von Patrick: 09 June 2010 - 01:49 AM
