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Posted 06 June 2010 - 09:11 AM

her heart was pumping, the new priest was young and handsome, in her virginal thougts there was nothing else but to see the man behind the robe
sunday morning she arrived early. Lupe was wearing her lucky socks...
nobody in the confessional, just air and a heartbeat as loud as a thousand voices echoing the church
Father Albert was lighitng the candles, he was humming a song so beatiful that made lupes breath even louder...
-father albert, can i talk to you?-
-yes my child, what's on your mind-
-please father, can we tal about it in the confessional room?
-of course my dear-
Lupe started walking in front of father Albert, her hips where moving as smooth as a candle in the wind, Albert couldn't help but stare at that virginal teen curves, he stopped for a second and look at the sealing a crucifix was staring at him, he closed his eyes and kept on walking...
Inside the confesional it was hot, Father Albert kept a secret cabin where he kept his favorite bottle of tequila, as soon as he sat down he grabbed the bottle and took a big gulp at his drink...
Lupe was dressed from top till bottom, her mother told her she would go to hell if she ever wears pants, regardles she was wearing no underwear, that made her feel free, only the lord could judge her, and that made her feel important...
She sat down and crossed her legs, her skirt was a bit wrinkled and she tried to fix it, whe she did, she touch her pubic area and a soft moan escaped from those virginal lips..
-ahhhhhhhh....-
-everything alrgith, my child?-
-yes father, please forgive me, for i have sinned...-
-i must confess father, that i have fallen in love with a man who's heart doesn't belong to me..-
father alberto left a soft whisper come out from his mouth...
-does he loves you back?-
-i don't know father, but i'm sure he is the man of my dreams and i would never stop from loving him-
father albert took another shot from his glass, stared at his watch and then he said
-there's no love bigger than the one our father gave us my child-
-i know father, but this is diferent, i know he thinks the same but he just doen't want to admit it-
-what makes you think so?-
-his eyes father, they never lie-
-what does his eyes say to you?-
-they say "help me, set me free"-
father albert stood up, there was no dening lupe was talking about him, he ripped the wooden window off the confessional room, he stared at lupes green eyes, he damned himself and then he kissed her
tears of joy came to lupe's face, nerviously she removed her dress showing her naked body from the other side... then she said:
i'm here for you father, i'm here to set you free !!-
father albert couldn't help himself, those beautifull breasts are staring at him, mocking him,daring him, he closed his eyes and kissed the left nipple softly
-yes, oh yes- whispered lupe, while she was trying to undres the priest from the other side
-oh yes father, harder- she said as a spazm ran trough her body...
fatehr albert couln't reason, he was to busy kissing those huge virginal breasts ...
once he got naked lupe reached for his member, nervous she hesitated to kiss it, she looked at the priest eyes and decided to go on
-you deserve this- those where the words that came out from an inocent virgin..
father albert was so hard there where voins coming out of his penis, lupe started licking the head because she was nervous to introduce such a big piece of meat in her mout
and then, by pure will she oppened her mouth wide, getting his dick as deep as she could, the experience was so delightfull that she kept it in her mouth till she almost pucked...
father Albert couln't believe his sight, such an adorable14 year old sucking his dick was too much for him to handle, he yelled really loud and shoot a load of sperm to her mouth, lupe was so nervous to reat that she decide it to swallow the full load...
lupe's legs where shaking like crazy, father albert made her change positions so he can get a better view...
-oh father... what's happening to me?-
-don't worry my child, i'll take care of you...-
-father albert started licking lupe's fluid all the way from her knees to her pussy lips, a wide tongue spread all the way to her anus making her orgzam
-oh father-
-father albert kept on licking her, for he never knew of any nectar sweeter than lupe's juice
once she stopped the convulsions he decided it was time..
-are you ready my child?- said the priest with a full on erection
-oh yes father, please let me have it-
albert took his long rod and tried to put it insede lupe, she was so tight he tried several times, until he finally got it in..
-Ahhhhhhh!- screamed lupe scaring the birds from the church
his dick was in and he kept on pushing till he felt something popping, he coulda stopped, but lupe was begging him not to
-please father, don't stop, please dont stop-
he kept on fucking that virginial side from one side of the confetional to the other.. Lupe was screaming so loud that the whole confessional was tearing apart..
and then, when lupe was getting to know what a orgasm really is father albert yelled from the top of his lungs "i'm cumming!!!!!"
lupe didn't hesitate to swicht positions, she was cumming really hard when the priest was ejaculating...
no drip of sperm was dropped, she sucked all in her mouth, till the last drop
once the priest stopped shivering he stared at lupes beautifull eyes...
-you knw what? i think you are right, my child-
the priest took the girl out of the confetional and walked out of the church, no looking back, no regrets

and so the story begins..
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Posted 08 June 2010 - 07:31 PM

Nice imagery and an interesting setup. Those priests just can't keep their hands to themselves! Of course who could when presented with such sinful temptation? Well done!

I hope you'll continue this!

My only constructive criticism is to run spell checker through it and check the use of - and quotes. While I am no spelling and grammar nazi it was a bit hard to follow in spots as I'm not used to that style.

Cheers!
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Posted 08 June 2010 - 10:37 PM

You paint a pretty picture here Rax. By any chance is this based on Little Lupe? I can't wait to read the next one.
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