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Added pg 13 of "My Hot Ass Neighbor 5"!

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Posted 03 March 2010 - 10:28 PM

Added pg 13 of "My Hot Ass Neighbor 5"!

Angus arrives home from a hard day's work..
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Posted 03 March 2010 - 10:46 PM

Looks like Ash is the only neighbor not likely to get her rocks off this episode ...
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Posted 03 March 2010 - 10:58 PM

Looks like Angus might be heading for sloppy seconds. Or just go for her butt, I vote for that. I wonder how Trisha would react if she saw them getting nasty together...

Terrific details on the first panel with the yard and stuff in the garage. Looking great guys.
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Posted 03 March 2010 - 11:39 PM

Does Angus' truck have truck nuts? Truck nuts, nuts fer yer truck.

Question is, is Sharona going to be up for some BJ or butt action with dad. I am kinda thinking no, but hopes are still high.
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 12:58 AM

Looks like Trisha wants to make a good impression at that pool party. Angus seems leaner than usual to me. I love how this comic has been teasing us so far, building up our hopes and then switching scenes on us. Hopefully we will be rewarded for our patience by seeing the two scenarios playing out as we imagine.
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 02:17 AM

:nudity: I think Angus has already had a little taste of Sharona from some of the earlier sets in the bath. If not hopefully he bury's his head between Sharona's thighs :rolleyes: Now that would be cool
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 03:15 AM

View PostBridgette69, on 03 March 2010 - 08:17 PM, said:

:nudity: I think Angus has already had a little taste of Sharona from some of the earlier sets in the bath. If not hopefully he bury's his head between Sharona's thighs :rolleyes: Now that would be cool


He got like 50 HJs. It's time for a BJ and/or more imo.
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 04:57 AM

Poor Angus, we know Sharona has nothing but love for her daddy, and it seems like they both need a little comforting right now
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 06:33 AM

Angus must have the best timing in the world. We've yet to see him go in Sharona's room when her ass isn't on display. Oh, and i'm not complaining at all. not in the least! fantastic work!
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 01:00 PM

oboy poor pa catching hell all rdy ...
an what he going to do sbout her trouble,

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Posted 04 March 2010 - 04:43 PM

I'd like to add my 2-cents about the overall direction of MHAN.

For starters, I'd like to give credit where credit is due. The drawings, coloring, dialogue, and scene scripting really do bring the comic to life. Hats off to the JAB team.

However I do have a few puzzling concerns that are meant to be seen as constructive reviewing than anything else. I really thought MHAN was going in a different direction than the incestuous angle. I'm not trying to play moral police here, because I enjoy Ay Papi as much as the next, but the variety
seems to be a bit lacking here. Almost every one of the JAB series have a cliff-hanger sub-plot. In Farm Lessons we're brought to a world where the concept of "taboo" is throw completely out the window. The suspense lies in the curiosity of seeing just how far a family driven by kernel desires will cross the line of sexual pleasure, but to give it a sense of plausibility the story is set in the rural hick country. Ay Papi deals with the same concept of taboo, but instead of negating the concept, taboo is the focal point of the series. There's a constant battle between Richard's conscience and his sexual desires. The suspense is whether or not he'll get caught or cross that final line and penetrate Julia's cooch.

In MHAN the suspense was finding out when or if ever Wong would fuck his dream girl. Five issues in he's already accomplished it twice, so what's next? We're left with random incestuous relations driven by this sense of naivety. I was assuming the setting of the series would take place more at school or in their social lives instead of their houses and pool parties. Perhaps Sharona's teacher becomes Wong's nemesis as his tutoring helps her pass and she no longer needs to suck dick for grades. Or the school nurse/principal discovers Wong's endowments and desperately wants a taste, but Wong desire to save himself for Sharona keeps him running away.

Having said that the comic is great, and hardly a disappointment. I guess I was just hoping for a little bit more diversity in the taboo department.
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 05:14 PM

View Postdarkmage, on 03 March 2010 - 06:58 PM, said:

Angus seems leaner than usual to me.



Great issue team!

Just a comment, Angus does look a little different, leaner? as darkmage mentions.

Still looks good, but it kinda caught my attention.
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Posted 04 March 2010 - 05:19 PM

Both Ay Papi and MHAN are more than just stories about incest. Ay Papi is about Richard and what he goes through, he fucks a lot more than just Julia. MHAN is about Wong and all his sexual maturity. If MHAN was only about him fucking Sharona it would have been a 3 issue series and not a very interesting one, imo. To live up to it's potential it has to spread it's wings in a sense and introduce a variety of girls and possible sexual setups. It's still about Wong and Sharona but now it's a lot more complicated with more development of their sexual lives than what's just limited to their relationship. Neither Ay Papi nor MHAN have jumped the shark as far as the taboo goes though. They've both barely scratched the surface of what could be happening in terms of taboo pairings and sex scenes.

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Posted 04 March 2010 - 08:53 PM

View PostPyro, on 04 March 2010 - 11:19 AM, said:

Both Ay Papi and MHAN are more than just stories about incest. Ay Papi is about Richard and what he goes through, he fucks a lot more than just Julia. MHAN is about Wong and all his sexual maturity. If MHAN was only about him fucking Sharona it would have been a 3 issue series and not a very interesting one, imo. To live up to it's potential it has to spread it's wings in a sense and introduce a variety of girls and possible sexual setups. It's still about Wong and Sharona but now it's a lore more complicated with more development of their sexual lives than what's just limited to their relationship. Neither Ay Papi nor MHAN have jumped the shark as far as the taboo goes though. They've both barely scratched the surface of what could be happening in terms of taboo pairings and sex scenes.



Nicely put:)


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Posted 04 March 2010 - 11:42 PM

great page...
i think pyro is right :perv:
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