[webmaster]

Added pg 4 of "Farm Lessons 16"!

Rita Mae's brought the salesman to the local mechanic, but he can't afford to pay for the repairs, so Rita offers a compromise..

[darkmage]

The page is better than we imagined it, Rick. Can't wait to see how the full comic turns out. Great job.

[Rusty Shakleford]

you go Rita Mae

[MG96]

This issue is all over the place.

[WestTexas]

MG96, on 25 February 2010 - 06:00 PM, said:

This issue is all over the place.

While not my favorite artist version of Rita Mae, it's ok. But I'll second MG, this feels like three drunk guys threw a story line together at 3am.

[gandof]

Wooo the is great which way they going,,,

[fannum]

WestTexas, on 25 February 2010 - 10:12 PM, said:

While not my favorite artist version of Rita Mae, it's ok. But I'll second MG, this feels like three drunk guys threw a story line together at 3am.

Love the art ... love the story!

Glad you guys are finding the Cartoon Network reruns so much more fulfilling!

I personally find a lot of suggestions and observations curious and sometimes amusing, but just whining is of little value. This forum has several areas to display your talents if you think you can do better.

Cheers and keep it up gang ... you're keeping mine up!

[Pyro]

fannum, on 26 February 2010 - 12:59 AM, said:

Glad you guys are finding the Cartoon Network reruns so much more fulfilling!

I personally find a lot of suggestions and observations curious and sometimes amusing, but just whining is of little value. This forum has several areas to display your talents if you think you can do better.

All feedback should be appreciated, even if it's not always super polite.

And dude, The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack is one of the finest shows on television!

[WestTexas]

fannum, on 25 February 2010 - 11:59 PM, said:

I personally find a lot of suggestions and observations curious and sometimes amusing, but just whining is of little value. This forum has several areas to display your talents if you think you can do better.

If the content I was "whining" about was in the talent forum, then I'd agree with you.

But my comments were directed at content that I'm PAYING FOR. So, yeah, if I'm discontented with the quality of the product I BOUGHT, then I'm going to complain.


Don't get me wrong, the artwork is GREAT, even if it's not the style that we usually see FL in. But I think it's obvious that the storyline wasn't that well thought out.

TX

[fannum]

WestTexas, on 01 March 2010 - 09:13 AM, said:

... I think it's obvious that the storyline wasn't that well thought out.

That's your opinion, and I don't see this starting out that differently than any of the others. Kind of hard to be that incisive only four pages into a 20+ page story. I see at least three plot lines being set.

Maybe the Pulitzer committee is not paying attention, but perhaps the Nobel Literature folks should!

Cheers

[JKR666]

Fannumm and WestTexas (and Pyro), that's enough of the bickering. If any of you want to continue your argument, take it elsewhere.