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Added Pg 10 of "Ay Papi 14"!
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Posted 11 August 2009 - 10:18 PM
Added Pg 10 of "Ay Papi 14"!
Finished with her dance, Daisy goes to see Richard..
Finished with her dance, Daisy goes to see Richard..
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Posted 11 August 2009 - 10:28 PM
(facepaw)
Dude, the first rule is you never tell your favorite stripper you got a lap dance from a rival stripper, duh!
Dude, the first rule is you never tell your favorite stripper you got a lap dance from a rival stripper, duh!
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 01:07 AM
I haven't said anything about this issue yet, being skeptical about it from the cover onward, but I wanted to give it a fair shake first but I think after 10 pages I have a fair idea of what the rest of the issue will be like. So anyway, here's why I'm not liking this issue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 03:12 AM
Heh, sounds like someone got turned down for a lap dance once! 
I'm glad JAB takes us out of the house and introduces these hot new girls. Variety is the spice of life, you know! 
I'm glad JAB takes us out of the house and introduces these hot new girls. Variety is the spice of life, you know!
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 04:17 AM
LMAO! Krystal can't catch a break [panel 5]. Girl, time for a resume update.
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 06:19 AM
whic gril dose he want is the question,,,
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 08:29 AM
This man is a 
BTW: I love all women Jab draws, especially Natalia
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BTW: I love all women Jab draws, especially Natalia
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 10:07 AM
Ohh. Nice one. Poor Richard.
From a female point of view ~ I have no problem with this being centered around Richard. And, some guys do go to strip clubs to let off some "steam" after a hard day of work. Maybe we'll get some background info on how these two know each other so well? ^-^ That would be interesting.
From a female point of view ~ I have no problem with this being centered around Richard. And, some guys do go to strip clubs to let off some "steam" after a hard day of work. Maybe we'll get some background info on how these two know each other so well? ^-^ That would be interesting.
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 01:55 PM
Pyro, on 11 August 2009 - 08:07 PM, said:
I haven't said anything about this issue yet, being skeptical about it from the cover onward, but I wanted to give it a fair shake first but I think after 10 pages I have a fair idea of what the rest of the issue will be like. So anyway, here's why I'm not liking this issue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
Jab explained a few pages ago that this is "Ay Papi" and we should never focus on the females in this comix as the main characters, that Richard is the main focus. The comix are each an advancement of a longer story line, so I see this as setting up future events. Daisy and Natalia, while they are strippers, are still beautifuly drawn Jab characters. It would be nice if Jab and crew had time to draw these issues based upon all our own personal taste, but hey, you cant please everyone all the time. If you dont like what you see read a back issue, I always find something different to enjoy about the older comix and they are all here to look at.
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Posted 12 August 2009 - 05:16 PM
I like that Wong's dad from MHAN is in the background in the 5th panel. Potential cross over? Hmmm...
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Posted 13 August 2009 - 12:44 AM
Come on Daisy...
Natalia is only comforting the poor
bald guy you just blew it off.
Didn't even look at the poor guy's flowers.
Oh well...
Natalia is only comforting the poor
bald guy you just blew it off.
Didn't even look at the poor guy's flowers.
Oh well...
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Posted 13 August 2009 - 12:38 PM
Pyro, on 12 August 2009 - 02:07 AM, said:
I haven't said anything about this issue yet, being skeptical about it from the cover onward, but I wanted to give it a fair shake first but I think after 10 pages I have a fair idea of what the rest of the issue will be like. So anyway, here's why I'm not liking this issue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
Totally agree with you.
The main fantasm in Ay papi comics is the incest, and also the fact that innocent looking girls are going very far in perversion. And the thing that everyone waits is if Richard will take Julia's virginity, or if new relations will occur between characters (incest Julia and her mother, Claire/Natalie, Threesome with Richard/Julia/Claire,etc...). Clearly, the story is going nowhere with this issue. I want to see more incest, more "impossible" situations.
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Posted 14 August 2009 - 03:11 AM
I'm kinda on the fence here. On one hand, I've been carping for months wanting an AP episode. So now I've got it. But do I really? Please don't get me wrong, the story line is great, the artwork is great, the chicks are SMOKING HOT. But let's not kid ourselves what the main attraction has been, and it's not "AyPapi" Richard, regardless of what Jab has said in the past. We all know who it is. I don't even have to say her name, do I? And unless this issue does a scene cut to another location, I seriously doubt we'll see her. So, on that note, I'm pretty damn dissapointed, although I haven't given up hope yet.
So one good slap on the back for doing an AP issue, and one strong smack on the wrist for not including who inarguably is the cornerstone of this entire Jab empire. But who knows. We're only halfway through. A guy can still wish...right? RIGHT? LOL
TX
So one good slap on the back for doing an AP issue, and one strong smack on the wrist for not including who inarguably is the cornerstone of this entire Jab empire. But who knows. We're only halfway through. A guy can still wish...right? RIGHT? LOL
TX
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Posted 14 August 2009 - 05:06 AM
Hi there, this post is focused to Mr jab. himself.
I have been a fan of your art for many years now, and I thank you for the hard earned work that you have done over the years, but....
It had taken you more than a year between Ay papi 13 and Ay papi 14. That is way too long!
I am grateful for the efforts to provide more content. I "love" My hot ass neighbor, I "like" farm lessons, Omega Girl and the Wrong House. These are all great titles, but ...
Ay Papi is your most popular title. It certainly is mine, and I doubt there are many of your fans who disagree with me. I'm sure it has always been your intention to have Richard be the main character of this series, but the truth is, wether you like it or not, Julia has become the true star of this series. To take so long between issues and then not have even one panel devoted to Julia is "disapointing" to say the least.
All I can say, is that the only time I am willing to give you my hard earned money is when there is a new issue of Ay Papi out.
I ask that evey other fan of Jab, and Ay Papi in particualr, speak out and make yourself heard, that if Jab Concentrated his efforts on providing Ay Papi issues on a monthly basis, that you would willingly provide your hard earned money as well on a monthly basis.
We need to show Mr Jab, how much more money he will earn if he focuses all of his efforts on his, in my opinion, most popular title.
It is important that Mr Jab understand that if he puts out Ay Papi on a more consistent basis, plus include the extra content of the other great titles, that it would be of great monetary value to his wallet.
Does anybody else agree with me?
I have been a fan of your art for many years now, and I thank you for the hard earned work that you have done over the years, but....
It had taken you more than a year between Ay papi 13 and Ay papi 14. That is way too long!
I am grateful for the efforts to provide more content. I "love" My hot ass neighbor, I "like" farm lessons, Omega Girl and the Wrong House. These are all great titles, but ...
Ay Papi is your most popular title. It certainly is mine, and I doubt there are many of your fans who disagree with me. I'm sure it has always been your intention to have Richard be the main character of this series, but the truth is, wether you like it or not, Julia has become the true star of this series. To take so long between issues and then not have even one panel devoted to Julia is "disapointing" to say the least.
All I can say, is that the only time I am willing to give you my hard earned money is when there is a new issue of Ay Papi out.
I ask that evey other fan of Jab, and Ay Papi in particualr, speak out and make yourself heard, that if Jab Concentrated his efforts on providing Ay Papi issues on a monthly basis, that you would willingly provide your hard earned money as well on a monthly basis.
We need to show Mr Jab, how much more money he will earn if he focuses all of his efforts on his, in my opinion, most popular title.
It is important that Mr Jab understand that if he puts out Ay Papi on a more consistent basis, plus include the extra content of the other great titles, that it would be of great monetary value to his wallet.
Does anybody else agree with me?
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Posted 17 August 2009 - 06:38 AM
Pyro, on 11 August 2009 - 09:07 PM, said:
I haven't said anything about this issue yet, being skeptical about it from the cover onward, but I wanted to give it a fair shake first but I think after 10 pages I have a fair idea of what the rest of the issue will be like. So anyway, here's why I'm not liking this issue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
The main attraction of Ay Papi and MHAN are the main female characters. Julia, Sharona, Claire, etc. Those are the stars. Richard is just a stand in for us in this lurid fantasies. Going to a strip club and having sex with a stripper is not a fantasy of mine. Indeed, I find the very idea quite unappealing. It's nary a step up from having sex with a hooker. Which is really gross.
So in this issue we are left with completely blank female characters, obviously sluts as they are strippers, and alot of meaningless nudity and probably some predictable sex. Even if the sex is unpredictable it'll still be boring, I don't care about these girls. I don't want to care about these girls. I'm annoyed they're here and taking up precious Jab drawing time when he could be showing us more of what Julia, Natalie and Claire are up too. Or maybe show us Noreen or some other characters that we've heard about. Not just generic sluts that show up out of the blue.
Maybe Julia will go looking for her dad and stumble out on stage while Richard's in the back nailing the stripper. The crowd thinks she's just part of the show and starts demanding her to take off her clothes. Julia being the naive slut she is obliges only to find a shocked Richard catch her in the middle of the act. Richard drives her home disappointed but realized it was hot and nails Julia in the car.
