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Added Pg 6 of "Ay Papi 14"!

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Posted 31 July 2009 - 11:13 PM

I Am feeling a little bit lost. Who was jab talking to... Was Jab talking to me or just every one. So Far I like this new Ay Papi. I was just saying that I know that jab likes to chang to another part of the plot just when things are getting way to hot and thats what I love about Jabs work. he makes you want more.
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Posted 01 August 2009 - 04:22 AM

View Postlord_tenchi, on 31 July 2009 - 04:13 PM, said:

I Am feeling a little bit lost. Who was jab talking to... Was Jab talking to me or just every one. So Far I like this new Ay Papi. I was just saying that I know that jab likes to chang to another part of the plot just when things are getting way to hot and thats what I love about Jabs work. he makes you want more.


No, I wasn't responding specifically to you Tenchi. But now that you brought this up, I will address it. I was originally going to have a multiple story plot going on in "Stress Reliever" However, the amount of story that needed to be told and my regular 21 page format did not match. So instead, you're going to get what I was originally going to put into this comix in the next issue. It will deal with Julia and Natalie at school and Claire, Noreen and Lucy (I think that's her name) at a park. Oh yeah, Jake is also making an appearance. So that story might actually feel as though I am jumping around verses this current one. Trust me, this current one is just a straight shot in storytelling. It all deals with Richard.


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Posted 01 August 2009 - 05:34 AM

sounds good to me. :)
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Posted 01 August 2009 - 04:19 PM

Yeah..
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Posted 01 August 2009 - 10:35 PM

hooray for Noreen!!!!
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Posted 02 August 2009 - 12:16 AM

Jab..

In my opinion "Ay Papi" quite obviously revolves around Richard... not only Richard though.. but Julia also. I mean I don't see Richard calling himself Daddy... although I suppose he could. The one who would be calling him Daddy is Julia.. so therefore wouldn't she *really* be the main character? Since I picture her as the one saying "Ay Papi"? I guess I could be wrong.. and in all honesty, I don't believe it actually matters.

Regardless.. if something is an offshoot or part of the main storyline.. it all has to do with the Ay Papi world. Be it backstories or progression. In reality NOTHING is an "offshoot".. and it's rediculous for anyone to think that something is. This ALL is Ay Papi.. and it's a hell of a story. I, for one, feel you are doing fantastic in the storytelling of all these characters lives. I always eagerly await every issue. The work excites me in ways I wouldn't tell my mother about, lol. Thank you for giving us this wonderful work!

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