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WRITING JAM WARS!! And so it begins . . . Rate Topic: ***** 3 Votes

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Posted 31 December 2011 - 09:45 AM

View PostMad Hatter, on 31 December 2011 - 01:44 AM, said:

Ouch! Brain Freeze...too much reading for me. Does this story come with pictures?


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no just the ones in your head. that what your imagination is for butthead. lol.
i mean i can see it all as i read it cant you? if u cant then i think we need to work on your imagination lol



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Posted 31 December 2011 - 04:05 PM

There were a few pics made and posted in the The Illustrated WRITING JAM WARS!...yeah they are still there so it won't take much to find them...the post isn't that big.
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Posted 31 December 2011 - 05:51 PM

Piaz faded in and out of consciousness as she felt something carrying her. She wasn't sure what it was, and right now her memory wasn't helping matters at all. She remembered going to feed the babies in the yard, but then all she remembered was what felt like something grabbing her...than nothing.
She knew it wasn't fester...the body, and the arms were different, and it wasn't a comfortable feeling being pressed against whatever this was...in fact it was cold to the touch, and felt slimey and made her want to take a shower.
She opened her mouth to say something, but there was something on her that was crusted over and made her moving her face impossible...she couldn't even open her eyes. While waiting to see what happened wasn't much of an option...it appeared to be her only option at this time.
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Fester growled loudly as he opened the book shelf that housed his old armor...it seemed no matter how he tried, chaos was always calling him back. Surprisingly as he reached forward to grab the left vambrace and pull it out of the alcove, a bold of green lightning struck his hand causing him to gasp and grab it before looking at the armor.
All around fester the room grew dark and fester's face fell as the armor began to glow green and an eerie voice emanated from around it. "Hello dark one...we have missed you."
Fester wanted to back away from the armor...hell he wanted to run in fear from what he knew was speaking to him again. "No...our time was done. You agreed to let me go my own path!"
The voice chuckled at him before a sick yellowish light lashed out and struck him in the chest. "Indeed...and let you go we did...but you see no one can ever truly be rid of chaos. Once you have accepted our embrace, we linger like a lover's touch...and it has been too long since we have touched you."
Fester howled in pain as his hands twisted and clenched, trying to fight off the mind numbing agony... but it was to no avail as he finally fell to his knees and turned blood shot eyes up to the armor in front of him. "W..what do you want from me?"
The voice took a sound of humor as it answered him, and fester already knew what it was going to say. "Why...your loyalty. We once again have need of one of our greatest champions. Chaos will be on the move again and we need our armies to be lead to show the humans and the upstart emperor that none stands before us. The fleets are already mobilized and heading your direction...but we also sense there is something else heading your direction. Something just as malicious, but not as malleable as humans. While it does not worry us now...you should destroy it...just in case." The voice suddenly became harder and fester screamed in pain as the pressure increased. "Do you understand?"
Fester nodded his head roughly as sweat beaded on his brow. While he had strength and willpower to fight back...he didn't have enough to completely throw off the shackles that chaos now had on him. "I..I obey!"
The light faded and the sound of insane laughter filled the air until fester could see the room again. Slowly, he stood and touched the armor with a slight tremor before his hand rested completely against it. With a frown, he began the process of climbing into the armor again...hopefully for the last time.
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Vixen blinked as she watched Walt and Karen bolt down to the basement level and then out of sight. She had heard the scream and the gunfire, but refused to step out and put herself in harm's way so it wouldn't compromise her mission. After a few seconds of waiting she crept down the stairs and stared in shock as she watched Walt and Karen climb into Space marine tactical armor and began loading weapons and arming themselves to the teeth.
What was he planning? Were him and his three friends going to raid a bank or something?
After a few seconds Walt grunted as he hefted a heavy bolter and made sure the ammo chain was secure and Karen strapped BOMF to her back and they nodded to each other. "We get Piaz back...or we die trying and take a bunch of the fuckers with us!" Karen shouted. Walt surprisingly grinned as he slammed a plasma pistol into a holster at his hip. "OO RAH!"
Vixen slunk quietly back up the stairs but almost shrieked as she almost ran into the dark one as he stood at the top of the stairs. "Going somewhere?" His voice...was different. It didn't hold the usual humor or even the sharp banter he usually presented. It was dark, it was gravely, and it scared her. "Uh..wh..what's going on? Why are Walt and Karen putting on armor...in fact why are you wearing that?"
Fester chuckled, but it was a dry and humorless sound as he shook her question off. "We are going to rescue Piaz...something has taken her. You will watch the house...and if anything happens to it while I am gone...your ass is mine when we get back."
It was spoken with finality and he said nothing else to her as he pushed past and clumped his way into the basement. Vixen was sure that whatever was going on she did NOT want to be a part of it...and while fester's threat didn't carry any real weight to where her and her friends could go...she didn't honestly want to test that theory.
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Iamme growled for the third time into the mic as the operator kept having him wait. It was like calling a phone company or something and he hated talking to smarmy operators and that is the one he seemingly had gotten.
It seemed to take forever...until finally the voice of dark trooper came on the line. "Memo...what's the emergency?"
Iamme laid out what had happened and what they were about to do...sure that Dark trooper would send a shit load of his men to help...when the man's words surprised him. "Sorry...we just had an emergency spring up, and I am trying to save the planet...not just one girl. I will try and send some troops to help you as soon as I can...I'm sorry." and the line went dead leaving memo to stare in open horror at the com board before he slammed his fist down on it angrily. After a few seconds, Memo shook his head as he realized...fester was going to be pissed.
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Posted 01 January 2012 - 02:19 AM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! SAVE ME FESSY :(







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Posted 09 January 2012 - 10:35 PM

Workin on it...

The look on Fester's face said it all as he grabbed the heavy gun and secured it to his back before he began to look around as if searching for something else.
Fury didn't describe it, murderous couldn't describe it, someone suffering for a long time because of it...THAT described it.
After a few seconds Fester grunted and looked at Walt who shrugged apologetically. "The back pack wasn't with the gun sir...sorry."
Fester nodded before he tossed a bolter to Iamme but addressed Walt. "Show him how to use it on the fly...we move now!"
Fester turned and clumped up the stairs again with Karen, Walt and Iamme following him, the two troopers looking grim, and I am me holding the unfamiliar weapon in his hands as he waited for Walt to instruct him. He never liked guns before, and he was sure after this he really wasn't going to like them.
Fester glared at the hole that Piaz had been taken down and his eyes seemed to smolder more before he raised his staff and with a primal scream green energy lashed out and ripped the hole wider and began to bore into the dirt, leading further into the underground. Karen frowned at the hole before she shrugged and stepped in after fester had with a mumbled, "Abandon all hope..."
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Piaz was extremely grossed out as she felt slime being poured on her. It was gooey, it was slimey, and it smelled like five kinds of ass...unwiped! She had wanted to vomit a few times, but she forced herself to keep swallowing because with her mouth caked shut, throwing up meant she was going to drown in her own vomit...
"Great," she thought to herself. "Gross myself out or death by grossness. Could things be worse?" she had no idea.
If her eyes had been open, she would have known horror. Three aliens stood over her, vomiting on her it seemed, freezing her in place, while all around her other victims of this despicable race of creatures were stuck against the walls in various states of decomposition, all with gaping holes in their chests...and behind the three aliens imprisoning her, a multitude of eggs waited to for their turn to deliver their cargo of pain and misery.
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Telgar's voice echoed out of the speaker as Dark trooper turned away from the com board and looked at his battle board again. "Was that wise Dark trooper? We need to combat this enemy together if we hope to succeed."
Dark Trooper frowned before he accepted the space telemetry sheet the lieutenant handed him and growled in the back of his throat. "I wasn't lying to fester...my worst fears have been confirmed. If you have senses that reach that far, scan the edge of this system and tell me what you see!"
Telgar's eyes flashed white for a few seconds before his voice came across the line again with a hint of awe in it. "By the gods..."
Dark trooper nodded as he threw the data sheet down. "Indeed. At the speed they are traveling, the Triad's spore ships will orbit this planet in less than two days...I hope you can rouse some of your friends...we are too far from imperial space to expect any help from there...until it is too late."
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Vixen waited until they had scrambled into the hole then began to search the house in earnest, going everywhere and anywhere that she had not searched before. "It has to be here...they said it would be here...where is it?"
As she went from room to room she began to feel a sense of panic as she began to realize the worst possible thoughts. Either it wasn't there, or he had hidden it so well that she would have to start destroying parts of the house to find it...and she didn't want to do that if she had to continue to stay here for any length of time.
Grumbling she opened the door to fester's bedroom and began to look there.
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Posted 22 April 2012 - 04:50 PM

Walt and Karen scanned the walls and ceiling constantly as they followed fester deeper into the ground. While they had not made much time since they entered, they knew they were getting close. To make matters worse, they had not encountered a single alien as they traveled and they began to think that they had been tricked somehow. While this thought appealed to no one, they had to begin seriously considering that the aliens weren’t mindless or even animalistic at this point as they walked up to a dead end and fester glowered in anger at the wall.
After a few seconds, fester’s eyes glowed as he looked at the walls then smirked.
“Clever bastards…” he mumbled in what could have sounded like admiration before in a fit of anger he raised his staff and roared, “HELL BORE!” Waves of energy emitted from the eyes and mouth of the skull and they came together into a point before it began to spin then tore into the black material that the aliens secreted and as Fester advanced Walt looked in and saw that the wall that fester just walked through was only one of many that they were now digging through, spaced what seemed to be evenly apart and only big enough for one person to fit through at a time. The xenomorphs had created some kind of maze under ground and they were now attempting to dig their way through it layer by layer. Unfortunately while Iamme was hoping for a less than violent stroll to where ever Piaz was Karen shouted in glee as she began dumping rounds into the denizens that were starting to appear and attack the intruders into their home. Karen was firing controlled bursts of high explosive armor piercing rounds, blowing the aliens back into the openings that fester was creating, While Walt was doing the same to the other side, and in the back of their minds they wondered where they were all coming from.
In the first five minutes they had killed close to twenty of the monsters, and it seemed that the numbers were increasing not decreasing. With a growl of frustration as the next wall was broken through, fester grabbed a xeno by the head and crushed it with the power of his armor’s glove as Karen shrieked a warning at him about the aliens blood being acidic, but fester ignored her as he turned to his left and fired the storm bolter mounted on the back of the same hand and took two more down. “My armor can withstand their blood for a time, NOW...through the breach…I’ll cover you!”
Walt nodded and shoved Iamme through the opening before he climbed in and gunned down an exceptionally large alien that was looming further back in the room they had entered. As Karen stepped in, an alien had grabbed the strap of bomf and was trying to pull her back through when fester stepped up and grabbed it by its neck and screamed, “Death of ages!” Green energy lashed out from his eyes and struck the alien, bathing it completely in a green light before it seemed to shrink and wrinkle, loud crackling and breaking sounds coming from the monster as it gurgled and hissed in pain until it dissolved and fell to the ground in dust at his feet. Before the rest of the monsters that were swarming them could charge forward, fester stepped back and waved his hand at the wall they walked in through and it resealed as if they had never been there. “Continue moving, that won’t hold them long.”
The others looked at him and nodded but Iamme noticed something distinctly different about fester. While before he would have killed through necessity, fester actually seemed to take pleasure from this kill...as if he were enjoying himself.
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Piaz tried to squirm or break free after the nastiness had stopped, but her strength was woefully inadequate. No fault of her own really…it was entirely possible that fester wouldn’t have been able to break free from whatever this stuff was.
She struggled for a few minutes until she was out of breath, until she felt long slimy fingers touch the sides of her face then something long and slithery like a snake wrap around her throat.
Good luck nasty. She thought. This stuff on my face isn’t coming off for…and she felt a trill of panic enter her as she felt the resin or whatever it was on her mouth and chin crack than give way to a disgusting probing rubbery thing that she went to bite down on, but a weird soporific effect immediately took hold of her and she felt herself involuntarily falling asleep while the face hugger settled into position and carried out its primary function in its life cycle.
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As Fester and his allies continued through the maze, Iamme suddenly staggered and leaned against the wall as he got a flash of something he couldn’t identify.
At first it seemed like a phantom pain, then it suddenly felt like he couldn’t breathe, and then clarity came to him. “We..we have to find her…they’re already starting to implant her!”
Fester blinked at Iamme before he shook his head. “Wait…you mean they are putting one of those things in her? How do you know?” Memo looked at him sheepishly for a moment before he firmed his resolve no matter how silly it might have sounded. “I..I felt it. It’s starting to put it inside of her!” If anyone else had told him this, fester might have scoffed at them…but coming from his and Piaz’s friend, someone who can literally walk through time, and given the fact that the fetish he made for Piaz was acting like a twelve alarm fire alarm, Fester nodded once and tried to orient himself in the direction he felt she was and led the charge down deeper into the bowels of the enemies lair.
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Darth Baw sat deep in thought as his personal staff made themselves busy around his home. While he didn’t care much for the things that most would, he knew that he couldn’t continue to distance himself from everything. In truth, he had missed some of his old companions. While he had anything and everything most people wanted in life, there were times when he found himself wanting for the old sense of accomplishment when he told someone about a new acquisition, or showed another personal slave off or a new ability acquired from the lords that found him worthy of reward.
Yes while the sith lord had much that people would be envious of, he still lacked in company. He thought briefly as he gestured to a decanter and goblet on a tray across the room and it floated over to him and he poured some ambrosia for himself and he remembered plundering such lovelies as Blue, and Bliss to name a few, and he also remembered spending time with others of a like mind like slick jimmy, darth lord, and fester. Taking a sip and sighing in pleasure Darth spoke aloud. “Ah Fester…I wonder what you are up to my old friend. Are you still brooding in your manor? Or have you finally let the past go and moved on?”
Of course, no answer was forth coming. Besides which, he and the dark one had experienced a slight falling out at some point…although for the life of him Baw couldn’t remember why.
As he thought of this an apparition appeared behind him and he sighed heavily as he felt the presence materialize behind him. “Ah Avita. Had I known you were coming I would have baked a cake.”
The goddess Avita frowned at him before she stepped around and glared down upon his form, eyes glittering like green ice. “Save it worm. You know that I would call upon you last out of anyone else.”
Baw took another sip of ambrosia before he sat the goblet down with a hurt look. “My dear goddess…why would you say such a thing?” He drawled.” You wound me deeply.” Avita growled as she took a step forward and pointed an angry finger at the sith lord. “Do not trifle with me Baw! I know how big your dick really is and if I have to I’ll show it to you…ROOTS AND ALL!!”
Baw’s continence changed only slightly but the hardening of his eyes was obvious. “Really? And you think threatening me is going to change my mind about you how?” Before Avita could answer in the negative or positive, A mumbling voice from beneath her skirt broke in. “Please Darth, I beseech you to help fester, more rides at stake here than the lives of a handful of people!”
Avita looked angrily at her lower half before she made a red leather purse appear in her hand and pulled a long, thick, black vibrator out and lifted her skirt. “Shut it cunt…I don’t need your help with this story!!” Avita’s vaginal lips moved open and closed and if one looked close enough it was in time with the other voice. “No mistress, please…not the black mamba!!” With a sneer and a loud squelching sound, the twelve inch vibe went completely inside of her with a moan of pleasure before she turned the dial from low, to medium, to high, then finally to OH LORDY!!! Before she let her skirt drop with a grin and leaned back against an end table.
Baw, who was never one to turn down a show of this sort clapped in appreciation. “My I must say you do have a way with yourself Avita…now what did your ever beautiful cunt say about fester before she was rudely yet pleasantly stuffed?”

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