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WRITING JAM WARS!! And so it begins . . . Rate Topic: ***** 3 Votes

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Posted 31 December 2011 - 09:45 AM

View PostMad Hatter, on 31 December 2011 - 01:44 AM, said:

Ouch! Brain Freeze...too much reading for me. Does this story come with pictures?


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no just the ones in your head. that what your imagination is for butthead. lol.
i mean i can see it all as i read it cant you? if u cant then i think we need to work on your imagination lol



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Posted 31 December 2011 - 04:05 PM

There were a few pics made and posted in the The Illustrated WRITING JAM WARS!...yeah they are still there so it won't take much to find them...the post isn't that big.
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Posted 31 December 2011 - 05:51 PM

Piaz faded in and out of consciousness as she felt something carrying her. She wasn't sure what it was, and right now her memory wasn't helping matters at all. She remembered going to feed the babies in the yard, but then all she remembered was what felt like something grabbing her...than nothing.
She knew it wasn't fester...the body, and the arms were different, and it wasn't a comfortable feeling being pressed against whatever this was...in fact it was cold to the touch, and felt slimey and made her want to take a shower.
She opened her mouth to say something, but there was something on her that was crusted over and made her moving her face impossible...she couldn't even open her eyes. While waiting to see what happened wasn't much of an option...it appeared to be her only option at this time.
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Fester growled loudly as he opened the book shelf that housed his old armor...it seemed no matter how he tried, chaos was always calling him back. Surprisingly as he reached forward to grab the left vambrace and pull it out of the alcove, a bold of green lightning struck his hand causing him to gasp and grab it before looking at the armor.
All around fester the room grew dark and fester's face fell as the armor began to glow green and an eerie voice emanated from around it. "Hello dark one...we have missed you."
Fester wanted to back away from the armor...hell he wanted to run in fear from what he knew was speaking to him again. "No...our time was done. You agreed to let me go my own path!"
The voice chuckled at him before a sick yellowish light lashed out and struck him in the chest. "Indeed...and let you go we did...but you see no one can ever truly be rid of chaos. Once you have accepted our embrace, we linger like a lover's touch...and it has been too long since we have touched you."
Fester howled in pain as his hands twisted and clenched, trying to fight off the mind numbing agony... but it was to no avail as he finally fell to his knees and turned blood shot eyes up to the armor in front of him. "W..what do you want from me?"
The voice took a sound of humor as it answered him, and fester already knew what it was going to say. "Why...your loyalty. We once again have need of one of our greatest champions. Chaos will be on the move again and we need our armies to be lead to show the humans and the upstart emperor that none stands before us. The fleets are already mobilized and heading your direction...but we also sense there is something else heading your direction. Something just as malicious, but not as malleable as humans. While it does not worry us now...you should destroy it...just in case." The voice suddenly became harder and fester screamed in pain as the pressure increased. "Do you understand?"
Fester nodded his head roughly as sweat beaded on his brow. While he had strength and willpower to fight back...he didn't have enough to completely throw off the shackles that chaos now had on him. "I..I obey!"
The light faded and the sound of insane laughter filled the air until fester could see the room again. Slowly, he stood and touched the armor with a slight tremor before his hand rested completely against it. With a frown, he began the process of climbing into the armor again...hopefully for the last time.
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Vixen blinked as she watched Walt and Karen bolt down to the basement level and then out of sight. She had heard the scream and the gunfire, but refused to step out and put herself in harm's way so it wouldn't compromise her mission. After a few seconds of waiting she crept down the stairs and stared in shock as she watched Walt and Karen climb into Space marine tactical armor and began loading weapons and arming themselves to the teeth.
What was he planning? Were him and his three friends going to raid a bank or something?
After a few seconds Walt grunted as he hefted a heavy bolter and made sure the ammo chain was secure and Karen strapped BOMF to her back and they nodded to each other. "We get Piaz back...or we die trying and take a bunch of the fuckers with us!" Karen shouted. Walt surprisingly grinned as he slammed a plasma pistol into a holster at his hip. "OO RAH!"
Vixen slunk quietly back up the stairs but almost shrieked as she almost ran into the dark one as he stood at the top of the stairs. "Going somewhere?" His voice...was different. It didn't hold the usual humor or even the sharp banter he usually presented. It was dark, it was gravely, and it scared her. "Uh..wh..what's going on? Why are Walt and Karen putting on armor...in fact why are you wearing that?"
Fester chuckled, but it was a dry and humorless sound as he shook her question off. "We are going to rescue Piaz...something has taken her. You will watch the house...and if anything happens to it while I am gone...your ass is mine when we get back."
It was spoken with finality and he said nothing else to her as he pushed past and clumped his way into the basement. Vixen was sure that whatever was going on she did NOT want to be a part of it...and while fester's threat didn't carry any real weight to where her and her friends could go...she didn't honestly want to test that theory.
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Iamme growled for the third time into the mic as the operator kept having him wait. It was like calling a phone company or something and he hated talking to smarmy operators and that is the one he seemingly had gotten.
It seemed to take forever...until finally the voice of dark trooper came on the line. "Memo...what's the emergency?"
Iamme laid out what had happened and what they were about to do...sure that Dark trooper would send a shit load of his men to help...when the man's words surprised him. "Sorry...we just had an emergency spring up, and I am trying to save the planet...not just one girl. I will try and send some troops to help you as soon as I can...I'm sorry." and the line went dead leaving memo to stare in open horror at the com board before he slammed his fist down on it angrily. After a few seconds, Memo shook his head as he realized...fester was going to be pissed.
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Posted 01 January 2012 - 02:19 AM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! SAVE ME FESSY :(







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Posted 09 January 2012 - 10:35 PM

Workin on it...

The look on Fester's face said it all as he grabbed the heavy gun and secured it to his back before he began to look around as if searching for something else.
Fury didn't describe it, murderous couldn't describe it, someone suffering for a long time because of it...THAT described it.
After a few seconds Fester grunted and looked at Walt who shrugged apologetically. "The back pack wasn't with the gun sir...sorry."
Fester nodded before he tossed a bolter to Iamme but addressed Walt. "Show him how to use it on the fly...we move now!"
Fester turned and clumped up the stairs again with Karen, Walt and Iamme following him, the two troopers looking grim, and I am me holding the unfamiliar weapon in his hands as he waited for Walt to instruct him. He never liked guns before, and he was sure after this he really wasn't going to like them.
Fester glared at the hole that Piaz had been taken down and his eyes seemed to smolder more before he raised his staff and with a primal scream green energy lashed out and ripped the hole wider and began to bore into the dirt, leading further into the underground. Karen frowned at the hole before she shrugged and stepped in after fester had with a mumbled, "Abandon all hope..."
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Piaz was extremely grossed out as she felt slime being poured on her. It was gooey, it was slimey, and it smelled like five kinds of ass...unwiped! She had wanted to vomit a few times, but she forced herself to keep swallowing because with her mouth caked shut, throwing up meant she was going to drown in her own vomit...
"Great," she thought to herself. "Gross myself out or death by grossness. Could things be worse?" she had no idea.
If her eyes had been open, she would have known horror. Three aliens stood over her, vomiting on her it seemed, freezing her in place, while all around her other victims of this despicable race of creatures were stuck against the walls in various states of decomposition, all with gaping holes in their chests...and behind the three aliens imprisoning her, a multitude of eggs waited to for their turn to deliver their cargo of pain and misery.
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Telgar's voice echoed out of the speaker as Dark trooper turned away from the com board and looked at his battle board again. "Was that wise Dark trooper? We need to combat this enemy together if we hope to succeed."
Dark Trooper frowned before he accepted the space telemetry sheet the lieutenant handed him and growled in the back of his throat. "I wasn't lying to fester...my worst fears have been confirmed. If you have senses that reach that far, scan the edge of this system and tell me what you see!"
Telgar's eyes flashed white for a few seconds before his voice came across the line again with a hint of awe in it. "By the gods..."
Dark trooper nodded as he threw the data sheet down. "Indeed. At the speed they are traveling, the Triad's spore ships will orbit this planet in less than two days...I hope you can rouse some of your friends...we are too far from imperial space to expect any help from there...until it is too late."
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Vixen waited until they had scrambled into the hole then began to search the house in earnest, going everywhere and anywhere that she had not searched before. "It has to be here...they said it would be here...where is it?"
As she went from room to room she began to feel a sense of panic as she began to realize the worst possible thoughts. Either it wasn't there, or he had hidden it so well that she would have to start destroying parts of the house to find it...and she didn't want to do that if she had to continue to stay here for any length of time.
Grumbling she opened the door to fester's bedroom and began to look there.
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