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Added pg 12 of "My Hot Ass Neighbor 4"!

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Posted 02 January 2009 - 04:17 AM

HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!! :madhatter:

Added pg 12 of "My Hot Ass Neighbor 4"!

Angus tells Sharona about his highschool days with her mom Trisha..
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 04:28 AM

And a Happy New year to the the MHAN crew! Great page... we're getting a lot of back story. I guess we can't be expecting a "prequel"! Great page... sweet 'n sexy.
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 04:46 AM

Wow. The Lapels are a very open family, aren't they? :D

Excellent work, team! I can't wait to see more of this issue and more of this amazing comic in the coming year. :D
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Post icon  Posted 02 January 2009 - 04:57 AM

This is a great comix, but I must admit... I am ready to see a little action. That would be a great New Year gift!
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 05:34 AM

Now wait ... when I played varsity ball, all I EVER got from a cheerleader was a handjob. And I never broke my arm!!

Hey, now I see him with hair, I think I knew Angus ... did he go to school in Texas?

Naw, couldn't have been ... our cheerleaders didn't have tits that big.

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(btw - interesting to finally see some teaser sketches become reality)
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 07:07 AM

Very nice. I appreciate the teasing out, I think that was one of the last Farm Lessons weaknesses, the characters got to fucking too quickly and easily, before we even knew who the new ones were. This keeps us guessing just how it'll segway into the sex, it seems each page ends with an obvious opener for sex on the next page. Page 4, we see Angus' cock rising between Sharonas legs on the last panel. Page 8 has Wong's mom kissing his dick on the last panel. Page 9 ends with Angus having finished checking out his daughters cooch, opening the possibility for her to check out her dad's dick. Page 10 wong's dick lined up with his moms pussy. Here we have the chance for Sharona to give her dad a handjob. Anyway, I like it cuz it keeps raising the erotic level on each page and then quickly brings it back down once the opening for sex doesn't pay off. But doesn't squander it totally by having the scene end, but instead re-raises the stakes. If we did get into the full blown sex right away then it would have been a letdown, I think. We're learning alot about these people here and their rather unusual sex lives. So it's still all about the sex, which any good erotic comic should be about, but doesn't get dull or predictable by merely only showing us sex. Very nicely done, Jab.

That said, I think I'm just about ready for some real fucking and sucking. Though the next issue, based on the sketches we've seen, looks like it'll be totally hopping with sex :)
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 07:35 AM

Im happy with how its going. Every one was so angery about her fucking her dad. I think this is how Jab is dealing with every ones bitchs and mones. Im likeing how the plot is going.
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 11:43 AM

I really like the expression on Sharonas face in the last panel. Cute and a bit innocent-looking, at the same time that you know that maybe she aint as innocent as she looks. MHAN is marvelous so far. Keep up the good work Jab!
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 04:27 PM

I love the past that we are knowing of the two families, will happen again in the present?... ;)
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 05:30 PM

View PostPyro, on Jan 2 2009, 01:07 AM, said:

Very nice. I appreciate the teasing ... This keeps us guessing


I'm really pleased that others are appreciating JAB and his merry band's ability to stretch out anticipation without letting it degrade into frustration.

That's what attracts me to this collection rather than the abundance of decently drawn but merely "see the girl, fuck the girl" competition.

I've placed AP and MHAN into the 'Innocence and Anticipation' category while FL, WP and NS are pretty much uninhibited 'Joy of Sex' orgies. OG, I'm still waiting to see develop.

I'm enjoying the ride.

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Posted 02 January 2009 - 06:13 PM

View Postlord_tenchi, on Jan 2 2009, 02:35 AM, said:

Im happy with how its going. Every one was so angery about her fucking her dad. I think this is how Jab is dealing with every ones bitchs and mones. Im likeing how the plot is going.


I'm pretty sure Jab did his part in this issue long ago. He definitely isn't drawing this thing just a few pages ahead in advance. We've seen a number of these panels already in sketch form long ago, so it's a safe bet his job has been done for a while. Given the level of quality in the inking, coloring and lettering there's no way any page could be in the line art stage and still be a track for posting. Unless Jab has them all kidnapped and working in his basement. I think Jab just knows what he's doing and what makes good erotica.
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 07:35 PM

Hello! Help please... I the admirer of creativity Jab... Very much very much I wish to see screenshots from My Hot Ass Neighbor 4 with 1 on 12 in the true size.... But it is impossible to me... Help please.
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 07:42 PM

View Postalexey, on Jan 2 2009, 02:35 PM, said:

Hello! Help please... I the admirer of creativity Jab... Very much very much I wish to see screenshots from My Hot Ass Neighbor 4 with 1 on 12 in the true size.... But it is impossible to me... Help please.


Sorry, Alexey, but you have to be a paying member to see the comics in full size.
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 08:50 PM

View PostPyro, on Jan 2 2009, 01:13 PM, said:

I'm pretty sure Jab did his part in this issue long ago. He definitely isn't drawing this thing just a few pages ahead in advance. We've seen a number of these panels already in sketch form long ago, so it's a safe bet his job has been done for a while. Given the level of quality in the inking, coloring and lettering there's no way any page could be in the line art stage and still be a track for posting. Unless Jab has them all kidnapped and working in his basement. I think Jab just knows what he's doing and what makes good erotica.


Thank you about inking comments and I wasn't kidnapped. :rolleyes:
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Posted 03 January 2009 - 12:14 AM

View PostMkKleanup, on Jan 2 2009, 03:50 PM, said:

Thank you about inking comments and I wasn't kidnapped. :rolleyes:


The inking is fantastic. I noticed that Jab draws pretty loose and it is really clever how you tranlate those lines and really bring out the best of Jab's art. Oh... the coloring? It is really quite amazing. Some of the details and the amount of color layering that is done while not making the art too complex or busy looking.

Letters? Excellent choices in fonts for the sound effects and very unique bubbling styles. It really brings out the tone of different parts of the story and gives the reader a better impression on how it is being said.
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