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Little Lorna Issue #4 POLL Vote for the next issue of the Little Lorna comic Rate Topic: -----

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Posted 16 December 2008 - 04:09 AM

Alrighty then. Here are the ideas for the next story that I decided to put in a poll. Not that I'm going to actually draw the winning story but believe you me that the top three will be a big sway as to which story lines I develop. I included some subject matter that people may find offensive so that you won't have to vote for something you don't really want (I added "Little Lorna Crying" to the list as some were a little put out that the gas station attendant slapped Little Lorna and made her cry). I tried to include anything else people may feel is a bit offensive. If this is the first time you have heard of my "Little Lorna" series (shame!) then here are the comics so far:
Little Lorna in... TUBTHUMPING
Little Lorna in... WEDDING BELLE
Little Lorna in... BACK IN FIVE

Little Lorna is a sweet naive girl (18+) who is cute as a button but as dumb as a sack of hammers. Her everyday situations gets her into all sorts of trouble and allows everyone she meets an opportunity to have a turn with her... so long as you have a good story to tell her.

PUMPING THE TEAM
The Al Dewer High School Beavers are having a rough football game. They are losing 27-45 during half time after blowing a 14 point lead and the coach is all out of ideas as to how to get the team going again. After the coach spots cheerleader Little Lorna's pantiless show she gave the crowd, he gets a wild idea! This story will contain a gang bang and a really worn out Little Lorna.

GAS, CASH OR ASS (thanks Fannum for the title)
Little Lorna gets kicked out of her teacher's car on a lonely strip of highway. Forgetting her purse in the car, she hitches to get home. She is picked up by three red necks who drive her half way but want "payment" for the rest of the ride home. This story is going to contain a gang bang, preying on a girl and reluctance.

WOMEN'S STUDIES
This course seems like it is going to be a breeze for Little Lorna to pass but when she arrives to class she finds out that her body and all the crazy things you can do with it is all male class is studying for the term. This story will contain reluctance, bondage, object penetration, oral, maybe a gang bang and some forced stuff.

AT THE OBGYN
Little Lorna doesn't feel so great so she visits the new OBGYN in town. Unfortunately for her (and fortunately for us) he was trained in some Cold War gulag and doesn't adhere to western medicine's Hippocratic oath. This story has object penetration and a few tears.

CASTING COUCH
Always wanting to be an actress, Little Lorna auditions for a new movie being shot. They film her entire audition that to her surprise doesn't involve any acting at all! At the end, her audition tape ends up being the "behind the counter" movie she is the unwitting star of. This story has a gang bang and some object penetration.

FUTURE PLANS
Little Lorna visits the school career councilor. After admiring her beautiful little body, he decides the perfect career for her and starts her off on the right foot by giving her a little taste of how he thinks the best job for her. This story is probably the tamest of the bunch.

GOING DOWN
A man in Little Lorna's trapped in a stuck elevator and tricks her into thinking that they only have a few moments before they plummet to their deaths. He convinces her that they should go out "with a bang". This story has reluctance and Little Lorna is going to be crying the whole time thinking she's going to die.

CRIME AND PUNISHMENT
Little Lorna doesn't have money for a new dress so she decides to steal it. She is caught by mall security who threatens to throw her in jail unless she pays up. With no money, Little Lorna finds another way to pay for her crime. This story has little Lorna crying again, bondage (hand cuffs) and reluctance.
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Posted 16 December 2008 - 05:59 AM

Oh... and one more thing...

Don't be shy about throwing some ideas out here. I've received a few from Downtowntom and Fannum... they were great but one was outside of my drawing skill (I'm scared to draw a big crowd watching a NASCAR race) and the other used a word that I want to stay away from (even though... well, these comics are coming awfully close to the word sometimes).

You all know the drill by now... normal situations of a girl's life leading to uncommon sexy results!
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Posted 16 December 2008 - 01:24 PM

I went with crime and punishment, it shares a name with one of my favourite books and it has a situation that makes me feel a little tingly :)
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Posted 16 December 2008 - 07:37 PM

voted for a couple i liked but pumping the team was my favorite.
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Posted 16 December 2008 - 10:33 PM

View Postgwen_gypsygirl, on Dec 16 2008, 08:24 AM, said:

I went with crime and punishment, ...and it has a situation that makes me feel a little tingly :)
You and me both, Gwen. ;)
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Posted 17 December 2008 - 01:11 AM

I went with the first story because my high school 's mascot was also the Beavers, lol.
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Posted 18 December 2008 - 06:46 AM

View PostMF, on Dec 16 2008, 08:11 PM, said:

I went with the first story because my high school 's mascot was also the Beavers, lol.


Too funny. What was your high school's name? Maybe I'll change it as a tribute. It looks like "PUMPING UP THE TEAM" is taking an astounding lead and the votes are just trickling in now. Unless anyone has any objections... I think I can declare a winner.
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Posted 18 December 2008 - 06:56 PM

just an idea i had since a lot of us are geeks maybe something where lorna accidentally wanders into a convention or is dragged to one by a geeky cousin and meets a bunch of his friends who teach her how to 'roleplay'.

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Posted 18 December 2008 - 07:36 PM

View Postfrankentron, on Dec 18 2008, 01:56 PM, said:

just an idea i had since a lot of us are geeks maybe something where lorna accidentally wanders into a convention or is dragged to one by a geeky cousin and meets a bunch of his friends who teach her how to 'roleplay'.


I love it! Lots of opportunity for comedic sex... and Jabville cameos?
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Posted 19 December 2008 - 05:36 PM

I like the idea for Crime and Punishment it feels a bit fresher than the other stories, that's not to say I don't want to read them all as I live all of them!
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Posted 19 December 2008 - 07:17 PM

View PostRiot, on Dec 19 2008, 12:36 PM, said:

I like the idea for Crime and Punishment it feels a bit fresher than the other stories, that's not to say I don't want to read them all as I live all of them!


Yeah. This one seems very edgy. Next vote I'll limit the choices down to the top 4. Right now it looks like "Pumping the Team" may win but I have reservations as it seems like a pretty "standard" story. I'll see if I can beef it up a little when I write it.
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Posted 19 December 2008 - 07:21 PM

Beef it Sinope! I loves my BEEF!!!
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Posted 23 December 2008 - 06:16 PM

View PostSinope!, on Dec 19 2008, 07:17 PM, said:

Yeah. This one seems very edgy. Next vote I'll limit the choices down to the top 4. Right now it looks like "Pumping the Team" may win but I have reservations as it seems like a pretty "standard" story. I'll see if I can beef it up a little when I write it.


Sounds cool Sinope your stories are pretty solid so I have total faith in your writing, can't wait for the next comic which ever senario it is good luck!
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Posted 24 December 2008 - 01:23 AM

I'd kinda like to see a mad scientist make copies of her and have some all out lez action happen.
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Posted 26 December 2008 - 08:20 PM

You should do a comic about her realising how she has been taken advantage of, then becoming really depressed. After alot of self harm she could get a husband who beats her. Also they never have sex.
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