Little Lorna Issue #4 POLL Vote for the next issue of the Little Lorna comic
#1
Posted 16 December 2008 - 04:09 AM
Little Lorna in... TUBTHUMPING
Little Lorna in... WEDDING BELLE
Little Lorna in... BACK IN FIVE
Little Lorna is a sweet naive girl (18+) who is cute as a button but as dumb as a sack of hammers. Her everyday situations gets her into all sorts of trouble and allows everyone she meets an opportunity to have a turn with her... so long as you have a good story to tell her.
PUMPING THE TEAM
The Al Dewer High School Beavers are having a rough football game. They are losing 27-45 during half time after blowing a 14 point lead and the coach is all out of ideas as to how to get the team going again. After the coach spots cheerleader Little Lorna's pantiless show she gave the crowd, he gets a wild idea! This story will contain a gang bang and a really worn out Little Lorna.
GAS, CASH OR ASS (thanks Fannum for the title)
Little Lorna gets kicked out of her teacher's car on a lonely strip of highway. Forgetting her purse in the car, she hitches to get home. She is picked up by three red necks who drive her half way but want "payment" for the rest of the ride home. This story is going to contain a gang bang, preying on a girl and reluctance.
WOMEN'S STUDIES
This course seems like it is going to be a breeze for Little Lorna to pass but when she arrives to class she finds out that her body and all the crazy things you can do with it is all male class is studying for the term. This story will contain reluctance, bondage, object penetration, oral, maybe a gang bang and some forced stuff.
AT THE OBGYN
Little Lorna doesn't feel so great so she visits the new OBGYN in town. Unfortunately for her (and fortunately for us) he was trained in some Cold War gulag and doesn't adhere to western medicine's Hippocratic oath. This story has object penetration and a few tears.
CASTING COUCH
Always wanting to be an actress, Little Lorna auditions for a new movie being shot. They film her entire audition that to her surprise doesn't involve any acting at all! At the end, her audition tape ends up being the "behind the counter" movie she is the unwitting star of. This story has a gang bang and some object penetration.
FUTURE PLANS
Little Lorna visits the school career councilor. After admiring her beautiful little body, he decides the perfect career for her and starts her off on the right foot by giving her a little taste of how he thinks the best job for her. This story is probably the tamest of the bunch.
GOING DOWN
A man in Little Lorna's trapped in a stuck elevator and tricks her into thinking that they only have a few moments before they plummet to their deaths. He convinces her that they should go out "with a bang". This story has reluctance and Little Lorna is going to be crying the whole time thinking she's going to die.
CRIME AND PUNISHMENT
Little Lorna doesn't have money for a new dress so she decides to steal it. She is caught by mall security who threatens to throw her in jail unless she pays up. With no money, Little Lorna finds another way to pay for her crime. This story has little Lorna crying again, bondage (hand cuffs) and reluctance.
#2
Posted 16 December 2008 - 05:59 AM
Don't be shy about throwing some ideas out here. I've received a few from Downtowntom and Fannum... they were great but one was outside of my drawing skill (I'm scared to draw a big crowd watching a NASCAR race) and the other used a word that I want to stay away from (even though... well, these comics are coming awfully close to the word sometimes).
You all know the drill by now... normal situations of a girl's life leading to uncommon sexy results!
#3
Posted 16 December 2008 - 01:24 PM
#4
Posted 16 December 2008 - 07:37 PM
#6
Posted 17 December 2008 - 01:11 AM
#7
Posted 18 December 2008 - 06:46 AM
MF, on Dec 16 2008, 08:11 PM, said:
Too funny. What was your high school's name? Maybe I'll change it as a tribute. It looks like "PUMPING UP THE TEAM" is taking an astounding lead and the votes are just trickling in now. Unless anyone has any objections... I think I can declare a winner.
#8
Posted 18 December 2008 - 06:56 PM
This post has been edited by frankentron: 18 December 2008 - 07:00 PM
#9
Posted 18 December 2008 - 07:36 PM
frankentron, on Dec 18 2008, 01:56 PM, said:
I love it! Lots of opportunity for comedic sex... and Jabville cameos?
#10
Posted 19 December 2008 - 05:36 PM
#11
Posted 19 December 2008 - 07:17 PM
Riot, on Dec 19 2008, 12:36 PM, said:
Yeah. This one seems very edgy. Next vote I'll limit the choices down to the top 4. Right now it looks like "Pumping the Team" may win but I have reservations as it seems like a pretty "standard" story. I'll see if I can beef it up a little when I write it.
#13
Posted 23 December 2008 - 06:16 PM
Sinope!, on Dec 19 2008, 07:17 PM, said:
Sounds cool Sinope your stories are pretty solid so I have total faith in your writing, can't wait for the next comic which ever senario it is good luck!
#14
Posted 24 December 2008 - 01:23 AM
#15
Posted 26 December 2008 - 08:20 PM

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