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Posted 26 March 2006 - 01:20 PM

WE take a long drive up into the mountains...you are wearing a flowery summer dress and I am in slacks and a polo shirt. We get to the top of the roadway and I pull the car over and turn off the engine. I then come to your side of the car and wrap a blindfold around your eyes. You keep begging me to tell you what the surprise is but I gently place a finger against your lips, quelling your pleas.
I place my hands on your hips and guide you across the slope. Every now and then you stumble causing my crotch to bump into your backside and you feel that I have an erection and you giggle each time it happens.

We finally reach the spot and I reach up and untie the blindfold and you see a blanket spread out with a picnic basket, a bottle of wine and two candles in the middle. The view is breath taking as you see the city as small twinkling lights and a big beautiful moon hovers above it all. You turn slowly a small smile of wonder on your lips as you wrap your arms around me and whisper. "I never knew you had such a romantic streak..."
I laugh lightly then squeeze your bottom and you give a slight squeal of mock outrage, but kiss me on my neck just the same and your eyes dance in the light of the candles.

I disengage from you with great difficulty, then I open the basket and pull out a few of our favorite foods and serve a little on each plate. You grab my hand as I am doing this and smile at me. "Here...let me do that mas..." I place a finger again against your lips then shake my head. "No titles...you know that." But I smile and give you the plate and crack the wine...knowing that you do not like most wines I found something that was notorious for it's smooth nature and modest taste.
I grin privately pleased as you pale slightly but then recover just as quickly and you place a plate in front of me and I serve you some wine and we stare at each other for a few moments while nibbling at our food. I can see the tease that you often repress at home creaping to the forefront and I grin slightly as I consider that you will try and take full advantage of it.

You run a finger along the rim of your glass and your eyes virtually smolder as you toy with the edge.
I smile then trace the outline of a penis in my mashed potatoes then look up innocently at you. You lick a finger then playfully bite your bottom lip. I smile but then slowly lick the gravy off of a piece of chicken then moan lightly. "Mmmmm. That is good! Tastes just like...Pussy..." And my eyes seem to bore into yours as I draw out that last word. You moan slightly and I see you clench your thighs together before you drop the wine glass to the ground and practicly dive at me.

My arms encircle you as yours clench me and our lips meet in a fierce struggle as we battle for supremecy...tongue to tongue, breast to breast, and you utter a sentence in my ear just as my hand draws the hem of your dress up...the one sentence that you know will turn me to a sexual dynamo. "I'm not wearing any panties..."
With a growl I move swiftly down and verify your statement with my eyes then with my mouth as my tongue and lips probe every inch of your lower body, reveling in the taste and smell of a woman that I have loved for so long. With a slight guttural sound I lick everywhere and at the same time nowhere and grin as I watch you try over and over again to thrust your bare pubic mound in just the right spot so my lips or tongue will contact your clit.

You moan as soon as I make contact, with your nether lips your hips rising from the ground to meet me even as your legs spread wide and one of your hands grasps the back of my head while your other rubs your nipples through your dress. "Oh baby...I love when you eat me..." I growl again then thrust my tongue deep inside of your vagina, burying my nose against your shaved mound and groaning between each deep lick. After a few minutes of this deep oral contact both of your hands reach down and grasp my head and you grind my face finally against your crotch with a cry of pleasure as you unleash a flood of love into my mouth before slowly collapsing on the ground.

I chuckle then slowly move my mouth and lazily trail my tongue around your clitoris as I push my middle finger in and out of you. You smile down at me then gasp as your clit is still very sensitive from your last orgasm but you then moan and push your legs up into the air and sigh in pleasure. "Fuck me wolfy...I want to feel you inside of me..."
I sit up slowly and smile at you, my mouth and jaw still glistening from your juices. "But Peach...you've hardly touched your food..." You laugh then grab me by my shirt and pull me down to you and kiss me hungrily again.
You lightly lick your juice from my chin then smile. "Shut up and fuck me!" I laugh as I loosen my pants then shake my head. "That's the peach I know and love."

When my cock springs from my shorts you squeal happily then grab it with a hand and pull me to your waiting sex until the head butts against you and I moan slightly before reaching down and rubbing the head around your opening but not moving in. "Stop teasing me damnit! Put it in!" I smile down at you, my lips sligtly parted and I bite the tip of my tongue as I grind the most sensitive part of the  head against your precious nubbin, imitating a slow circle moving against then out again and you gasp and jerk with each slight contact. Again I laugh at you but finally do as you ask and slowly slide completely into you.
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Posted 26 March 2006 - 01:35 PM

Your eyes and mouth open wide and a long moan escapes you as your eyes then become vacant and your legs wrap tightly around me and your nails dig into my sides. You pull your hips up as I thrust down.
For a few seconds, once I am completely sheathed inside of you I look into your eyes and you look into mine and at the same time unbidden three words come from us. "I love you."
From that moment a frenzy of thrusting and flexing overtakes us, neither can tell who was the louder, or where one started and the other ended. I am sure amny small animals ran for cover as the picnic basket was knocked over at one moment and you wailed like a banshee the next as your body shook in another massive orgasm while I bellowed like a bull as my manhood flexed hard and I shot my seed deep inside of you...but it mattered little as I rolled onto my back, bringing you atop me and you lay your head on my shoulder, panting lightly.

As we lay there, the moon still high in the sky you wondered aloud. "I thought this day would never come...I kept hoping it would but I didn't know...I'm glad it did...what about you?"
I smile as I reach down and caress your naked buttocks with one hand as I remember how insecure I was the whole time as I waited for the day to come. "Not as glad as I am darlin...not as glad as I am."

As we lay there staring off at the sky or off in the distance respectively the moon slowly travels down and you slowly disengage from me and straighten your dress. I sigh then sit up and gather the items of our recent joining again.

I turn around and there you  are, kneeling a few feet away from me, tears in your eyes but a smile on your face. "Please master, I don't want to go home like this."
I nod slowly then walk over and reach into my front pocket and take out a gold collar and wrap it around your neck. You lift your hair and I lock it in place and you sigh happily as I step back and look at you. A radiant glow seems to overtake you and I smile as I realize that I almost lost something very precious to me through my own stupidity.
I chuckle, and wipe my eye slightly then turn and walk towards the car.
"Come Nicole, many things still to be done at home and Kaiko and Daisy are surely in need of guidance. Har tar girl!"
You quickly jump to your feet, a huge grin on your face and grab the basket as you hurry behind me. "Yes master."

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Posted 26 March 2006 - 10:32 PM

Sighhhhhh....beautiful Fester. Simply beautiful.

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Posted 26 March 2006 - 11:30 PM

Wonderfully written, Fester. I thoroughly enjoyed it!  ;)

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Posted 27 March 2006 - 12:08 AM

Thank you ladies...I appreciate the comments. Any criticism is appreciated as well.

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Posted 27 March 2006 - 01:10 AM

Very well written, Fester. I almost felt as if I were there. Most enjoyable. Thanks!

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Posted 27 March 2006 - 01:36 AM

Yeah. Good job, Fester! ;)

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Posted 27 March 2006 - 01:54 AM

Thanx Mjwm54...you too Dart...I appreciate the comments! NExt installment should be up already.

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Posted 08 April 2006 - 05:30 PM

<wipes away a tear>

Thanks, Fester. You reminded me of just how much I miss my submissive. I still miss her like crazy and it hurts like a bitch.

Sorry for being maudlin.

<bows> Thank you sir for a great story. Nice job.
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Posted 02 May 2006 - 06:32 AM

Great work Fester! :)

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Posted 02 May 2006 - 05:42 PM

i gotta thank you Cien, you've been bringing up threads i tottaly missed.  

Great stuff Fester.  I hope you treat us to some more later...

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