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#1 User is offline   Lieutenant Dan 

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Posted 21 October 2006 - 02:13 AM

Well, It seems that you like to much the Incredibles, that's why i decide make a comic, i made the first page today in the afternoon, and i hope you enjoy it alot; and sorry about the misspelling, as you can see some of the drawings (Dash's face) are not finished yet sorry about that too, but i want to show it to everyone and i can't wait, have a nice reading ;D

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Posted 21 October 2006 - 03:23 AM

I love it!! Canīt wait to see more   ;D
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Posted 21 October 2006 - 03:45 AM

Yes, I too am intrigued. :D
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Posted 21 October 2006 - 04:26 AM

Dude, I had no idea you could draw this well. I really dig it.
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Posted 21 October 2006 - 05:20 AM

Kick @$$ so far, Lt.Dan!

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Posted 21 October 2006 - 05:53 AM

Wow looking good, did I ever say I think Violet is hot
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Posted 21 October 2006 - 09:14 AM

Nice drawings, and the stoty looks promising! I can't wait to see more pages...
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Posted 21 October 2006 - 11:20 AM

It's starting good :)
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Posted 21 October 2006 - 07:53 PM

You made Violet super cute looking, I can't wait to see more.
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Posted 21 October 2006 - 09:19 PM

Yes more Violet and it looks as if little brother may be seeing more of her. NICE.
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Posted 22 October 2006 - 05:58 AM

Lt. Dan,
Really great start. Looking forward to more.  You might want to ask someone for a little help with your English captions, it's just a little rough at the moment.
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Posted 22 October 2006 - 06:08 AM

Great start lt. dan cant wait for more this comic looks good ;D ;D ;D
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Posted 22 October 2006 - 06:43 AM

wow its wonderful dan
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Posted 22 October 2006 - 01:41 PM

I like your style.  The Incredibles are so simplified but so dead on
in the control of your hands.  I know this is going to be good :)
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Posted 22 October 2006 - 04:11 PM

Very nice start, Dan.  They look real good in your style, still them, but made your own.  Can't wait to see more.
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